This is my first WRITTEN fan-fiction so please tell me if it's good.
The bright yellow mourning sun rose over the watering hole as all the wanyama awoke. The giraffes stretched their long necks and started freaking out about their brown spots being a disease(even though they're covered in them). The zebra's yawned and started yelling multiple times "Crack-a-lacking!" The enormous hippos were already flirting over who has the cutest butt. Others wanyama awoke as the sky became blue.
A few hours later the lions and the lionesses awoke with mighty roars from their rocks and caves. The lionesses stayed behind with their cubs while their mates went and got their morning breakfast. A mwaka old cub named Julie awoke to her mother and the other lionesses chatting and gossiping, stuff she really didn't give two Shit-Sus about about. There were 4 lionesses, there was a simba, simba wa kike who looked as chubby as 3 hippos, a skinny simba, simba wa kike who looks like she eats once a week, a pretty simba, simba wa kike named Florrie who was the Alpha lioness, and there was Julie's mom Krystal. As the name implies Krystal had blue eyes that resembled beautiful crystals, something which Julie...