Critical Analysis of Twilight

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I've been thinking...

I am currently an English-Creative uandishi major in college, and I've been turning over an idea in my head for a while now. I want to practice on my own first 'novel.' I'm aware of copyright infringement and all that (I'm going to put a disclaimer XD), but I was thinking of rewriting Twilight. In my own way. Not as a parody, but with developed characters and a good storyline and plot. I think that Twilight had some potential in the hands of a capable author, and from what I've heard, I'm a pretty good writer.

I was going to write it as a fanfic on fanfiction.net. What do wewe think? I'm still on the edge of deciding whether I'll do it au not. If wewe like au dislike the idea say so, but just be polite please. And if wewe have ideas for it FANTASTIC! :D My barua pepe address is ladyvampresslilith@yahoo.com; please send me your ideas. It could be about anything to do with Twilight to make it better.

Please tell me what wewe think! Thank you!

LadyLilith (aka LadyCat aka Shelby) ♥
 LadyLilith posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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Twilight_Dream said:
well, thinking that its a bad story is YOUR opinion. not fact. so please dont make it like it is. and what do wewe mean in the hands of a good d author? twilight was Stephenie Meyer's idea. no one els's. otherwise it wouldn't BE twilight. and rewriting it saying that YOU'LL make it better like your some accomplished mwandishi makes it seem like your really full of yourself. so i would say no. im sorry if i haven't been polite but its just i got really ticked off seeing this question.
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I apologize that it made wewe angry, I was simply asking a question. No, I am not full of myself; I am actually the exact opposite. It took many other people saying that I was a good writer to consider this, and I still don't wholly believe them. I am no accomplished author; I never alisema it once. It's a fanfic, so I can write it if I decide to do so; I will put the disclaimer on it saying that it is Stephenie Meyer's work. It would simply be an experiment of my abilities as an author. I personally think Ms. Meyer is not a good author, and I think that she could have made Twilight into a way better, zaidi well written series than what it is. I am curious as to what my version would be like.
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but how could that offend someone so much? it seems childish.
Twilight_Dream posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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can wewe please take one sekunde to stop being rude and sarcastic?
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friendsfan101 said:
Well, I'd upendo to see a story!
Even though I'm a shabiki of Twilight, I don't think that SM is the best writer, now that I look back on Twilight, it kind of...sucks. (No offense, Twilight_Dream, I know wewe upendo Twilight!) I think that it'd be cool to read a re-write of it. I don't think that it would be too bad, because there are a large numbers of cinderella re-writes and nothing bad's happened. I'm all for it!
Of course, you'd have to write that wewe don't own Twilight if wewe put it up online, and I'm guessing that wewe would have to tweak some of the names and some aspects of the plot if wewe ever publish it, but I'd upendo to read a story! I hope wewe write it, and please, tell me when wewe do! I'd enjoy kusoma it. =)
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^-^ Thank wewe for your support! I'm thinking I may; once I've written some of it, I will post up a link. :)
LadyLilith posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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Cool! I can't wait to read it. =)
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Queenoftard said:
Personally, I think it's a brilliant idea. I've been toying with the idea myself.
I don't really have any specific ideas yet, as I'm pretty occupied with other projects, but I would upendo to read your version.
Will wewe tell me if wewe do decide to write it? au maybe wewe could just give me your jina la mtumiaji on fanfiction.net?
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My jina la mtumiaji on fanfiction.net is AikaOokami, and I might post a link to the first chapter up on the spot as well, if Dearheart doesn't see an issue with it. If wewe come up with any ideas for character au story development, please barua pepe me au message me and let me know and we can discuss it. People have alisema that I'm a decent writer, but any help I can get is much appreciated. :)
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Dearheart said:
It's very true and very tragic...Twilight had a LOT of potential, but it was squelched and turned into a teeny-bopper drool fest. In the right hands, it could've turned out to be a genuinely great series.

If wewe want to rewrite Twilight "LadyCat style", then kwa all means, go ahead. As long as wewe don't try to publish au sell it, I don't think you'll run into any trouble. And I think it could be a fun and interesting way for wewe to exercise your uandishi skills. However, I think it only fair to warn that link has already been done. So make sure your version stands out from the others people have done.

And hey, if wewe get creative enough with the plot and the characters, maybe wewe could change their names and publish it as an original work someday! ^__^
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Ah ha, LadyCat style. I like that. :) Thank you. As I said, if wewe got any ideas for character changes/flaws au ideas for the storyline, please contact me and discuss it with me. Any help I can get I will gladly take. :)
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mandapanda said:
Hmm. I'm actually very interested in kusoma your version. I know Stephenie Meyer has some *cough*many*cough* grammatical errors in the books, however, maybe it was because of her lack of uandishi experience? We can't really be sure. I've heard The Host is pretty well written. Lol sorry. I'm getting off topic :)

As wewe know, I'm a huge Twilight fan, and I'm very curious as to how wewe will write your Twilight story. Will wewe be changing the main storyline? And will wewe add zaidi time and developement to characters wewe feel had been cheated? And will wewe be uandishi New Moon and the other vitabu if your story does well? Mainly, I really want Breaking Dawn to be REDONE! lol I've found some rewrites, but not the way I wanted it haha

I upendo Twilight because it is personal. Dearheart had alisema above that making your character a blank is not something wewe want as an author... however, I upendo that. There are alot of stories that have characters who are relatable and have relatable traits, but being able to become the character and how the story is told through the vessel (Bella), it further engulfs wewe and encaptures you. It's one thing to be captured and completely wrapped up in a book, but it's a whole different feeling when wewe feel like wewe are the character and wewe are in the story... My apologies if I sounded really corny there. lol

And, I will be honest. Some of the points that wewe had alisema in your introduction irked me a little, just because I think Twilight has a good storyline and plot, but I KNOW that it wasn't your intentions :) Anyways, yes! I'm interested in kusoma what wewe would have liked Twilight to be :) Hopefully wewe don't get chopped for this question. I already see some opposing and defensive answers. But I upendo wewe and wewe have my support :)
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X3 I upendo wewe too, mandapanda! Thank wewe so much for your support. Ha, Breaking Dawn sounds like a great challenge. If I do well with Twilight, I would upendo to rewrite Breaking Dawn. I'm sorry that what I alisema offended you, just my opinion as an English major. :) I definitely want to refine and develop the characters. The debate in my mind is what should stay and what should go as far as the story of whole goes. I want it to remain true to the original storyline, but there are some things I would like to alter as well. Anyways, thank wewe so much again. If wewe have any ideas at all about changes in the storyline au in the characters, please let me know. :)
LadyLilith posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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Oh and about Stephenie Meyer, I think that she may be a good author. All I have read of hers is the Twilight series, and in my opinion she rushed through it and got it published without properly going back on it and editing it to improve her basic ideals. I believe that all writers should do that before presenting a finalized piece of work, and I just don't think she did.
LadyLilith posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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No need to apologize! Opinions are great! Lol and yes. Breaking Dawn will be a hefty challenge! haha I will input on Breaking Dawn if wewe decide to re-write it! haha I have been told a few times that I have a future as a writer (LOL, i don't think so), and I was thinking about uandishi Breaking Dawn the way I wanted it, but I think it'd be too much! And I would constantly hariri my work. Haha I always do that! But good luck with your story! I look mbele to seeing how it differs from the original!
mandapanda posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
this-is-my-name said:
Sounds like an interesting idea... I'd upendo to read your version if wewe decide to write it.

Just please, for the upendo of god, fix Bella!
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Oh, that's DEFINITELY happening.
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violetbabe said:
Yes! wewe should definitely do it. I know that if a capable mwandishi rewrote Twilight, it would be excellent. :)
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Yes, I believe so too. :) Not saying I'm that author, but I'd like to see what I can do with it.
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snoznoodle said:
It is a great idea! I used to like the book and if it wasn't for this spot and the twi-hards I probably still would. If it was written kwa someone who knows what they're doing I think it would solve my issues with it :)

Get to work! :D
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XD Yes ma'am! *Salute* And I'm touched that wewe have so much faith in me! I'll try not to let wewe down!
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MadamOcta13 said:
I think that's an amazing idea! I would so read it if someone else redid it! I'd upendo a good vampire upendo story (not a bad Meyerpire lust story)! wewe should make Bella have so much zaidi depth and personality...I'm actually thinking about this now...I'm tempted to do the same (but I probably won't).
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Well any ideas wewe got, wewe can throw at me. :) I might make a foramu on here where people can give me ideas and we can all discuss it together. Bella is definitely something I plan on working on.
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hpfreak14 said:
wewe rewriting it reminds me of something that happened today.

In english my teacher alisema "I have to read Twilight for my descriptive uandishi class. (yes teachers go to school to learn how to teach)The first few pages were descriptive. If it was written with less pages kwa a better mwandishi i think i would enjoy it more"

basically every twilight shabiki was really annoyed. Not many students in my class like him now but others adore and respect him.

The thought of wewe rewriting it brought that up in my mind.

I would read it also if wewe did
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Well I'm glad the whole world's not going to hell. No offense intended towards Twilight au Stephenie Meyer. XD Thank you!
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sleazy_weasley said:
@Twilight_Dream: wewe were incredibly rude to Lady Lilith; she ilitumwa a perfectly good question, and wewe just accused her of being up herself, which she was not. She was merely stating her opinion on Twilight, and how she would like to recreate it.

In my own opinion, I think it is a brilliant idea! It would be interesting to read Twilight in a well-written form with developed characters - seeing as Meyer failed to do so.

Can't wait to read it on Fanfiction! :D Good luck! xox

P.S. When wewe finish it, send us all a link!
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X3 Thank wewe very much, sleazy_weasley. I will definitely let wewe know when the first chapter's out.
LadyLilith posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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see, this is what happens any time i try to post MY opinion. i get jumped on like a pack of dogs.
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i didnt mean it literally. and wewe know that.
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italiangirl976 said:
I think it is a bad idea. It was Stephenie Meyer's idea. Not yours.
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Understandable.
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bookworm12345 said:
Twilght hAs no potinetial I wouldn't bother trying make ur own I'd rather read ur orignial ideas
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Hmmm, I don't agree with the first part (even as anti Twilight as I am). But I'm pleased that you're interested in my other works. :) I have ilitumwa a lot of poetry on my deviantart account in the link here if wewe would like to read it: link
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rachaelwsz said:
I'm actually kinda curious how your version will turn out... so I say: Do it. =)



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Oh and I forgot to mention... Breaking Dawn! I think that's a challenge... So a rewrite should be interesting... =)
rachaelwsz posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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Ohhh yeah. *Cracks knuckles* Breaking Dawn should be something. Lol
LadyLilith posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
MrazBell10 said:
Well....I think... it's a good idea...
I want to see how it turns out...
I'm a little offended because...you see...I'm a Twilight fanatic...and...I read the Twilight Saga over and over again...
but I want to see it with other's point of view...
As a bookworm...
PLEASE!!! IF wewe FINISH THE WHOLE TWILIGHT SAGA PLS. E-MAIL IT AT MY ACCOUNT IN YAHOO: mraz_bell10@yahoo.com

Thanks...
♥ ya'...

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Hey, wewe know what? It's perfectly understandable that you're a bit offended, and that's just fine. I think it's really, really great that you're a Twilight fanatic, but that you're civil to the people who don't like it. That's zaidi than I can say for other Twi-fans I've run into. So keep it up! You're awesome! (Bookworms FTW!) =)
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katiecain said:
DO IT AND DON'T MURDER JACOB'S CHARACTER LIKE STEPHENIE DID, LADYCAT. KTHX? :) ♥
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XDDD That's one of the things that will change. As GrintCat alisema somewhere else...he won't be humping Renesmee's leg kwa the end of it. au something like that, it was funny. XD
LadyLilith posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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ya atleast make him imprint on a human please.i am begging u
14jcub posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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'he won't be humping Renesmee's leg kwa the end of it' HA HA HA HA HA.
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Matsy23 said:
cool!!!!! thats a pretty good idea!!!!! ^^
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Book_freak said:
It could work, just try to do it better than the origonal. Not that it could be worse :P lol
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snusnu13 said:
OMG when are wewe going to write it? it sounds fantastic. I was considering re-writing it for my enjoyment. I would like to see Bella with some convincing flaws and Edward with some flaws, any flaws!

I think it wouldn't be that difficult to re-write the bad book series, maybe do a alternate version where it is scientifically correct so Renesmee cant possibly exist, that would be cool.

I think it would be way awesome and please leave a maoni on my response when it's up on fanfiction.net.

And for all people who think S.Meyer is a great writer, please reconsider because personally, I think she should recieve some critism and not be so uptight about it.

JK Rowling and HP 4 Eva!
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OMG when are wewe going to write it? it sounds fantastic. I was considering re-writing it for my enjoyment. I would like to see Bella with some convincing flaws and Edward with some flaws, any flaws! I think it wouldn't be that difficult to re-write the bad book series, maybe do a alternate version where it is scientifically correct so Renesmee cant possibly exist, that would be cool. I think it would be way awesome and please leave a maoni on my response when it's up on fanfiction.net. And for all people who think S.Meyer is a great writer, please reconsider because personally, I think she should recieve some critism and not be so uptight about it. JK Rowling and HP 4 Eva!
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XDDDD Omg. I'm majoring in English, so 'unpossible' cracked me up. I feel like such a dork lol. But yes, I will certainly let wewe know. ^-^
LadyLilith posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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thanks, i really hope wewe do it
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