This is my opinion wewe may agree au disagree all wewe want. I’m not going to try to make the film modern kwa saying have the princess save herself au take out the prince. But in the way that the film was made, what I think could have made it better. This makala will have spoilers.
Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs
1: zaidi Screen time with the prince.
I feel like this is one of the main thinks that makes the film lacking something and that’s the prince, I feel like it would be ten times zaidi amazing if he had a least a little zaidi screen time.
2: Snow’s Father.
I think what’s really important to this story is what happened to Snow’s Father, he died at sea in a storm that the evil Queen made, it would onyesha how brave Snow was to stay with her step mother.
3: One Song.
As in one zaidi song for the movie, I feel like the Evil Queen could have an amazing song but I don’t see the time that she could sing it, maybe when she’s about to turn herself into a Hag.
4: Less Sidekicks
Mainly less great sidekicks, I mean the movie has a lot of characters that help with the story and onyesha who Snow White really is. But I feel like there’s way to mainly.
5: Snow’s Prayer
I would upendo it, if the dwarfs overheard Snow praying for them. That would be really cute IMO.
6: Snow Prince
Just zaidi time for them to be a couple.
Besides those things that I think could be taken out au added, I think the story was amazing just the way it is and I wouldn’t mind if I couldn’t build a TARDIS in time to change it.
Cinderella
1: Mice
Take out at least some of the mice parts, their great but at times they seem to be the ones to drive the film.
2: Charming
Just give him a lot zaidi screen time. I think everyone agrees with me on that one. Maybe have him be the one to tell his father about Cinderella.
3: Songs
I upendo the songs that didn’t make it into the movie.
4: Charming Ella
zaidi time for us to see them as a couple
5: True name
It’s bad enough that people call, Aurora, Sleeping Beauty au Merida, Brave (Well my younger cousin calls her that because she can say Merida) but cinderella isn’t her real name, it’s Ella.
6: Bad Guy
I feel like her step family could have been zaidi evil just a bit, also the end could have been better just a bit.
Besides that, I upendo the film
Sleeping Beauty
1: The Princess
zaidi screen time with Aurora because will she is kind of dull at times
2: Villain
She’s an amazing villain, but she’s lacking a lot at times. Hopefully her movie will make up for that.
3: Less Sidekick Screen Time
The vichimbakazi really take up too much screen time IMO. A little less from them and we’ll be good.
Those 3 things and it would be close to perfect
The Little Mermaid
1: Eric
Either get rid of him au make him zaidi flawed…a piece of wood has zaidi personality then he will ever.
2: Song
I always liked the idea of Ariel and Triton having a song they sung together Voice over after Ariel ran away. Just about how each of them were sorry and they wish they could be together.
3: Sisters
They fix this in the third movie but not counting the third go zaidi into the sisters just a bit au just take them out.
4: papa Bait
kweta just no; he’s too annoying for his own good.
5: I’m Sorry
This is mainly to help the Ariel mashabiki a Bit zaidi with Selfish Ariel Drama, but for her to be zaidi sorry after Ursula is dead not just for us to jump right away to the wedding but for us to get the feeling that she really was. Maybe have her and Triton talking about what she did and her saying what her punishment should be and him saying he knows she won’t be as happy as she used to be without Eric.
Change those things and I’ll be happy
Beauty and the Beast
1: Time and Space
Okay not Space but when you’re a Doctor Who shabiki wewe can’t really talk about time without bring up space. Anyway, out of all the films. Beauty and the Beast is the weakest when it comes to timeline. wewe get the feel that everything happened over two au three days when it really was months au something like that.
2: The Beast
Who on earth curses a 11 mwaka old boy for not letting wewe into his home? I mean it’s just plain old STUPID!!! Children, if someone asks for wewe let wewe in from the cold. Say NO! I personally will fight your case at court if wewe get turned into a Beast for not letting someone in. I guess they just wanted a story.
3: Chip
Tell us where on earth chip came from? I mean, he’s a 6 mwaka old boy with a 60 mwaka old mother, living in a house that has been cursed for 10 years…the number just don’t add up at all.
I
could say zaidi about what to change but that would be an whole makala in itself.
Aladdin
1: TAKE OUT GENIE!!!
Just take him out au make him less of a joker. I mean…who gets half his jokes now? I never did.
2: zaidi with Jafar
I think we should have gone into zaidi about Jafar’s wanting to be sultan.
3: Just take out half the jokes
I mean they’re funny but they really don’t help the film.
4: The Songs
Take out a lot of the songs put in better ones like Proud of your Boy.
5: zaidi Jasmine
They did a good job with her for her lack of screen time but I think she could be better.
Change those things and I’ll be happy.
Pocahontas
1: History
I know this would wreak the film kwa a lot but…maybe make it closer to the real story just a bit.
2: Development
Everything is rushed, lacking au not needing in this department.
3: Villain
He could have been Amazing…sadly he wasn’t
But I think even with those changes, Pocahontas would be as good as it gets.
Mulan
This one is hard and I may update this late, but I feel like Mulan was as good as it was going to get. Kind of rewrite the story and make Mushu less of the main character. But it was lacking a lot that I can’t think of right now.
The Princess and the Frog
1: Dream
I think putting Naveen in Tiana’s ndoto would have been amazing the two of them trying to get to each other. Naveen telling Dr. F, to take him and let Tiana get her restaurant. Just zaidi Tiaveen.
2: Naveen
Make him less of a Damsel just a bit, put in a couple times for him to save Tiana.
3: nyumbani coming.
I think it would have been really cute if we saw Eudora (Tiana’s mom) looking for Tiana and then coming nyumbani to find Tiana and Naveen together in the kitchen.
4: Villain Power
Go zaidi into his debt with his friends.
Besides those things I think the film was perfect.
Tangled
1: Rapunzel
Give her a little bit zaidi flaws.
2: Eugene’s Backstory
This one I think should be on everyone’s list. Who is Eugene Fitzherbert? He’s a storybook just waiting to be open.
3: Escapes
onyesha a couple of times where Rapunzel almost made it out but got catch kwa Gothel.
4: Gothel’s Deal
This was art work of Mother Gothel talking to Eugene, I think that would have been amazing if she made a deal with him to give him money, and he turns it down and the island, also turns it down, but then says she’ll tell him what happens to his parents. Something like that.
I think the story was perfect just change those things.
Brave
1: Merida’s Sorry
I had this cool idea of Merida in the woods with her kubeba mother and telling her she was sorry for what she did and for everyone she hurt and then the kubeba turns to her and it turns out to be some bila mpangilio bear. Then she goes back to her mother and doesn’t say sorry until the end.
2: Humor
Turn it down a lot; it was kind of DreamWorks humor au little boy humor than anything else.
3: Mor’dur
Go zaidi into his story and make him a better villain.
4: Friends
Give Merida some girly friends, who her mother tried to make her be Marafiki with, who try to tell her who she should marry like that, she seemed kind of alone in that castle.
But after that I think the film would be better
Frozen
1: Make it funnier
wewe may not get this part but to be honest, take Olaf out of the movie, everything he said, did and everyone’s reactions…how funny would be the movie be? That’s right kind of boring.
2: Powers Story
We know Elsa was born with it but go zaidi into it like onyesha the ancestors who had it.
3: Ending
I think this is how they ending should have gone. First of all, don’t ngumi, punch Hans, it just showed how Lame this movie is. sekunde of all, onyesha Olaf, Sven, Kristoff and the kingdom people together ice skating somewhere having fun…then go into the ngome into the ballroom, where Elsa and Anna…are building a Snowman and imba together, I was think like the ending to Aladin where Anna would be like “Do wewe want to build a snowman?” And Elsa would be like, “Yes! I want to build a snowman!” And together they say something like, “Just wewe and me!” But then I got pictures of Olaf dressed up as jimmy, hunitumia and flying around with Svenddin on carpet.
4: The Parents
They were awful parents, the other parents worst then them would be…The evil Queen and Frollo from THoND. They didn’t leave soon enough for me.
5: Less Elsa
I feel like Elsa was too much for the film and really overshadowed her younger sister, just bring her down a lot.
6: The Songs
They didn’t seem Disney to me and a lot of my Disney loving Marafiki outside of fanpop. They seemed like Broadway Songs but made kwa Disney. My Marafiki wanted the Disney songs kwa like from Snow White to Tangled.
There is zaidi but mainly has to do with the plot. I think I’ll write a part 2 au something after my onyesha week is done.
So there wewe have it, I hope wewe can agree on parts au not.
Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs
1: zaidi Screen time with the prince.
I feel like this is one of the main thinks that makes the film lacking something and that’s the prince, I feel like it would be ten times zaidi amazing if he had a least a little zaidi screen time.
2: Snow’s Father.
I think what’s really important to this story is what happened to Snow’s Father, he died at sea in a storm that the evil Queen made, it would onyesha how brave Snow was to stay with her step mother.
3: One Song.
As in one zaidi song for the movie, I feel like the Evil Queen could have an amazing song but I don’t see the time that she could sing it, maybe when she’s about to turn herself into a Hag.
4: Less Sidekicks
Mainly less great sidekicks, I mean the movie has a lot of characters that help with the story and onyesha who Snow White really is. But I feel like there’s way to mainly.
5: Snow’s Prayer
I would upendo it, if the dwarfs overheard Snow praying for them. That would be really cute IMO.
6: Snow Prince
Just zaidi time for them to be a couple.
Besides those things that I think could be taken out au added, I think the story was amazing just the way it is and I wouldn’t mind if I couldn’t build a TARDIS in time to change it.
Cinderella
1: Mice
Take out at least some of the mice parts, their great but at times they seem to be the ones to drive the film.
2: Charming
Just give him a lot zaidi screen time. I think everyone agrees with me on that one. Maybe have him be the one to tell his father about Cinderella.
3: Songs
I upendo the songs that didn’t make it into the movie.
4: Charming Ella
zaidi time for us to see them as a couple
5: True name
It’s bad enough that people call, Aurora, Sleeping Beauty au Merida, Brave (Well my younger cousin calls her that because she can say Merida) but cinderella isn’t her real name, it’s Ella.
6: Bad Guy
I feel like her step family could have been zaidi evil just a bit, also the end could have been better just a bit.
Besides that, I upendo the film
Sleeping Beauty
1: The Princess
zaidi screen time with Aurora because will she is kind of dull at times
2: Villain
She’s an amazing villain, but she’s lacking a lot at times. Hopefully her movie will make up for that.
3: Less Sidekick Screen Time
The vichimbakazi really take up too much screen time IMO. A little less from them and we’ll be good.
Those 3 things and it would be close to perfect
The Little Mermaid
1: Eric
Either get rid of him au make him zaidi flawed…a piece of wood has zaidi personality then he will ever.
2: Song
I always liked the idea of Ariel and Triton having a song they sung together Voice over after Ariel ran away. Just about how each of them were sorry and they wish they could be together.
3: Sisters
They fix this in the third movie but not counting the third go zaidi into the sisters just a bit au just take them out.
4: papa Bait
kweta just no; he’s too annoying for his own good.
5: I’m Sorry
This is mainly to help the Ariel mashabiki a Bit zaidi with Selfish Ariel Drama, but for her to be zaidi sorry after Ursula is dead not just for us to jump right away to the wedding but for us to get the feeling that she really was. Maybe have her and Triton talking about what she did and her saying what her punishment should be and him saying he knows she won’t be as happy as she used to be without Eric.
Change those things and I’ll be happy
Beauty and the Beast
1: Time and Space
Okay not Space but when you’re a Doctor Who shabiki wewe can’t really talk about time without bring up space. Anyway, out of all the films. Beauty and the Beast is the weakest when it comes to timeline. wewe get the feel that everything happened over two au three days when it really was months au something like that.
2: The Beast
Who on earth curses a 11 mwaka old boy for not letting wewe into his home? I mean it’s just plain old STUPID!!! Children, if someone asks for wewe let wewe in from the cold. Say NO! I personally will fight your case at court if wewe get turned into a Beast for not letting someone in. I guess they just wanted a story.
3: Chip
Tell us where on earth chip came from? I mean, he’s a 6 mwaka old boy with a 60 mwaka old mother, living in a house that has been cursed for 10 years…the number just don’t add up at all.
I
could say zaidi about what to change but that would be an whole makala in itself.
Aladdin
1: TAKE OUT GENIE!!!
Just take him out au make him less of a joker. I mean…who gets half his jokes now? I never did.
2: zaidi with Jafar
I think we should have gone into zaidi about Jafar’s wanting to be sultan.
3: Just take out half the jokes
I mean they’re funny but they really don’t help the film.
4: The Songs
Take out a lot of the songs put in better ones like Proud of your Boy.
5: zaidi Jasmine
They did a good job with her for her lack of screen time but I think she could be better.
Change those things and I’ll be happy.
Pocahontas
1: History
I know this would wreak the film kwa a lot but…maybe make it closer to the real story just a bit.
2: Development
Everything is rushed, lacking au not needing in this department.
3: Villain
He could have been Amazing…sadly he wasn’t
But I think even with those changes, Pocahontas would be as good as it gets.
Mulan
This one is hard and I may update this late, but I feel like Mulan was as good as it was going to get. Kind of rewrite the story and make Mushu less of the main character. But it was lacking a lot that I can’t think of right now.
The Princess and the Frog
1: Dream
I think putting Naveen in Tiana’s ndoto would have been amazing the two of them trying to get to each other. Naveen telling Dr. F, to take him and let Tiana get her restaurant. Just zaidi Tiaveen.
2: Naveen
Make him less of a Damsel just a bit, put in a couple times for him to save Tiana.
3: nyumbani coming.
I think it would have been really cute if we saw Eudora (Tiana’s mom) looking for Tiana and then coming nyumbani to find Tiana and Naveen together in the kitchen.
4: Villain Power
Go zaidi into his debt with his friends.
Besides those things I think the film was perfect.
Tangled
1: Rapunzel
Give her a little bit zaidi flaws.
2: Eugene’s Backstory
This one I think should be on everyone’s list. Who is Eugene Fitzherbert? He’s a storybook just waiting to be open.
3: Escapes
onyesha a couple of times where Rapunzel almost made it out but got catch kwa Gothel.
4: Gothel’s Deal
This was art work of Mother Gothel talking to Eugene, I think that would have been amazing if she made a deal with him to give him money, and he turns it down and the island, also turns it down, but then says she’ll tell him what happens to his parents. Something like that.
I think the story was perfect just change those things.
Brave
1: Merida’s Sorry
I had this cool idea of Merida in the woods with her kubeba mother and telling her she was sorry for what she did and for everyone she hurt and then the kubeba turns to her and it turns out to be some bila mpangilio bear. Then she goes back to her mother and doesn’t say sorry until the end.
2: Humor
Turn it down a lot; it was kind of DreamWorks humor au little boy humor than anything else.
3: Mor’dur
Go zaidi into his story and make him a better villain.
4: Friends
Give Merida some girly friends, who her mother tried to make her be Marafiki with, who try to tell her who she should marry like that, she seemed kind of alone in that castle.
But after that I think the film would be better
Frozen
1: Make it funnier
wewe may not get this part but to be honest, take Olaf out of the movie, everything he said, did and everyone’s reactions…how funny would be the movie be? That’s right kind of boring.
2: Powers Story
We know Elsa was born with it but go zaidi into it like onyesha the ancestors who had it.
3: Ending
I think this is how they ending should have gone. First of all, don’t ngumi, punch Hans, it just showed how Lame this movie is. sekunde of all, onyesha Olaf, Sven, Kristoff and the kingdom people together ice skating somewhere having fun…then go into the ngome into the ballroom, where Elsa and Anna…are building a Snowman and imba together, I was think like the ending to Aladin where Anna would be like “Do wewe want to build a snowman?” And Elsa would be like, “Yes! I want to build a snowman!” And together they say something like, “Just wewe and me!” But then I got pictures of Olaf dressed up as jimmy, hunitumia and flying around with Svenddin on carpet.
4: The Parents
They were awful parents, the other parents worst then them would be…The evil Queen and Frollo from THoND. They didn’t leave soon enough for me.
5: Less Elsa
I feel like Elsa was too much for the film and really overshadowed her younger sister, just bring her down a lot.
6: The Songs
They didn’t seem Disney to me and a lot of my Disney loving Marafiki outside of fanpop. They seemed like Broadway Songs but made kwa Disney. My Marafiki wanted the Disney songs kwa like from Snow White to Tangled.
There is zaidi but mainly has to do with the plot. I think I’ll write a part 2 au something after my onyesha week is done.
So there wewe have it, I hope wewe can agree on parts au not.
