Harry Potter Cast, All Grown Up!

I like Twilight. I used to upendo Twilight. But then, I began to feel disappointed. I wanted Bella to have DONE something that actually could affect the entire WORLD. Suddenly, I created my own versions of Edward and Bella and the Volturi. I like Twilight as it is....but it would be much better like this.
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Bella swan tugged on her muddy brown ponytail to keep in in place as thundered roared and rain came down in buckets on the deserted island. The forest, slick with slime and muck, was dangerous enough without HIM lurking in the shadows. Her ears picked up a soft sound beneath the gale. He...

please leave maoni so i no if this story sucks au not and please read it even if its not the whole story.

Chapter 1: The unexpected

Have wewe ever had one of those dreams, were wewe try and run fast but wewe just keep getting slower, well that's the dream I was having. This is the most strangest dream I have ever had. I was being chased kwa two wannabe snobs from school, Rachel was the leader from between them, who was tall with black hair tied up in to a curly mini style afro like a thick puff ball at the back of her head. she also had long, sleek legs built for running. Along side her was her...

Note: I originally had this as a question, but I guess it was too long, so I'm re-posting this in an article.

Question number one: Wanyonya damu hearts don't beat, correct? Correct. I believe this is mentioned several times. Now, in health class, they teach wewe that your moyo pumps and makes your blood flow, correct? Correct. So, it stands to reason that, since Wanyonya damu hearts don't beat, they don't have blood flow, correct? Yes. So, they have no blood flow, no circulation. They cannot bleed, au blush, au anything related to circulation, yes? Yes. This is alisema several times in the book.

Now, call...

I have just tried to refute another "Edward is hot" type fallacy. I've had enough, I'm ready to puke - pardon the language - in link if I see another one. In the foreseeable future, I shall either not bother with such fallacies but instead ignore and ridicule au point to this article. This applies to both sides because some Twilight mashabiki and some new Harry Potter mashabiki here are frequently inferring it.

I point to my awali article: link for the introduction.
I shall here only point out Number Six:
Non sequitur.
What is a Non Sequitur and a fallacy: I shall again refer to oxford English Dictionary...

1.Ginny is a perfect character (“Mary Sue”), which Rowling hides kwa calling her temperamental.
2. Being temperamental is not a flaw if everyone thinks it’s cute and adorable and it gets wewe a boyfriend.
3. NOBODY can do anything productive without magic.
4. Ginny runs after a train like an idiot even though this isn’t her first time watching the train leave with her brothers. Obviously she’s watch the train leave EVERY SINGLE mwaka OF HER LIFE.
5. Rowling is living out her own fantasies through Hermione, who is clearly herself.
6. The vitabu aren’t well written, just because wewe make up...