The Siren's Song?

Hi. I write a story about two teenage girls who have to deal with everyday problems while being a mermaid to make things zaidi complicated. It's written in parts like a fanfiction except I made up everything kwa myself. Will wewe read it and jiunge the club? It needs zaidi mashabiki and i'll give wewe heshima for joining. If wewe could read it and tell me what wewe think, i'll give wewe heshima for honesty (:
Thanks.
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