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Michael Jackson Swali

My Earth siku poem.. i wrote it in feburary and i had Mr.Thriller in mind when i wrote it. Do wewe like it. No negative maoni unless its creative critisism:)

What is this we've done.
Don't wewe realize what I, Me, You, Us, We have done to THEE.
Our nyumbani for ever with no where else to go, the end of the road.
Go ahead drink the water, its' tates comes from you.
Fine as wine the air has Just the right amount of smoke and here I will choke with your factories blowing steam and your money making machines.
WE are destroying OUR selves, but it's okay.
someone will fix it right? They'll figure out something?
They'll figure out....
oh they....
NO! they who?
WE are they, and They created this disater so they shall help fix it.
Green is the color of our world no going back with it's filthy sources going black.
How about wewe over there, Mr.Millionaire.
help us re-love the planet and re-build the world.
Peoples' success up there nose, Money is the answer to it all i suppose.
No?
Then what is?
there's other children that want toys and clothes, plants and wanyama also have a need for their population to grow.
We must have forgotten about love.
L.O.V.E
wewe hate me.
I hate you.
Unexceptable.
I shall not take, I shall not take au let the world recieve hate.
Go ahead burn down another forest, but when wewe chop down that mti I hope you're thinking of me when there's no zaidi air to breathe and wewe all will wonder, how could this be?
I'll tell wewe how.
Never mind, I already did.
Open up your hearts and realize the life we live.

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Michael Jackson Majibu

peterslover said:
This is beautifully written. Well done. People don't realize that they are; we, us, I, me. WE are all responsible for the planet. And wewe shared that thought very well in your poem. wewe should send your poem to the "Readers Digest" magazine. I think they would like to print it! I'm posting this most beautiful picha of a patch of green that is untouched kwa man, except for the dirt road.
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 This is beautifully written. Well done. People don't realize that they are; we, us, I, me. WE are all responsible for the planet. And wewe shared that thought very well in your poem. wewe should send your poem to the "Readers Digest" magazine. I think they would like to print it! I'm posting this most beautiful picha of a patch of green that is untouched kwa man, except for the dirt road.
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K5-HOWL said:
This poem was totally awesome like wicked! Wuv it :3
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 This poem was totally awesome like wicked! Wuv it :3
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Beautiful pic!!!!!!!! <3
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caligurl16 said:
I upendo it! Beautiful!
I feel the same way...
<3
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liberiangirl_mj said:
I upendo your poem!! wewe write it in a beautiful way.. and is so true...
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 I upendo your poem!! wewe write it in a beautiful way.. and is so true...
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2468244 said:
*clap clap clap clap* AWESOME!!!!!! i upendo it!!! Mr. Thriller would too!!!!! upendo upendo upendo upendo upendo upendo upendo upendo upendo IT!!!!!!!!!! xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox to u <3
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reneemonique said:
hehe i like your mitaani, mtaa name for michael,Mr.Thriller good one:)
Absalutly gob-smaked,its very well written,      ilovetheWORLD. I liked how wewe added simple things like upendo and Hate,children,forests,life and Hearts. Most of the things that Michael sang about,he'd be very proud and yes we all are kind of responsible for our world,earth and many of us dont,it teaches a great lesson:)<3 xx
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 hehe i like your mitaani, mtaa name for michael,Mr.Thriller good one:) Absalutly gob-smaked,its very well written, ilovetheWORLD. I liked how wewe added simple things like upendo and Hate,children,forests,life and Hearts. Most of the things that Michael sang about,he'd be very proud and yes we all are kind of responsible for our world,earth and many of us dont,it teaches a great lesson:)<3 xx
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wow upendo the pic!
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