Crystal Ponies

Fiery waves – the ups and downs of Summer Pride

Chapter 9: Exile – part 1


I've never thought I will be an outcast in my own homeland. Especially after the things I've done to keep it safe... but it was the naked truth. My mercy backfired and put me in a situation, which I wasn't prepared for. How could I? Hah, how terribly foolish of me! I should have known this would happen, but as I said, I wasn't planning my actions, nor did I care about the consequences... until this point, that is.

I blindly followed the guards who escorted me out of the Castle. I was numb, sunken into the sea of my...

The last we saw our heroes, they had formulated a plan to kill the tyrant King Cobra. No sooner had this plan been brought up, King cobra and his elite soldiers took up residence in Ponyville. Sending one of his men to deliver a vial of his seductive venom to Cloudsdale (to be spread across Equestria), he found haven in Twilight's house (who, kwa the way, is trapped in the human world). After intercepting the vial, Snowflake flew back to the hideout (Sugarcube Corner), to find her Marafiki captured kwa King Cobra. She fled, unnoticed, to the Everfree forest, where she now sat with Tropical Breezes...

This isnt THE fanfic ive been planning. Its just something that popped into my mind after kusoma creepypastas. If I get enough good reviews, ill continue it. Any feedback would be massively appreciated. No descriptive gore.

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I quietly galloped into the boutique, only to see my little sister, Sweetie Belle, sprawled on the floor, sobbing her lit eyes out. Surrounding her were multiple papers emblazed with drawings and doodles. To her left was a box of crayons.
"What's wrong, Sweetie? I thought you'd be with your friends."
She turned to stare at me.
"I was, but then Scootaloo went to help...

Chris: Hello, and welcome to a new season of Total Drama! This season will be a little different because-

Pinkie Pie: Instead of winning a million, gazillion dollars, the prize is your cutie mark!

Chris: Right. I'm your host, Chris Mclean.

Pinkie Pie: And I'm his co-host and camp counselor, Pinkie Pie!

Chris: And without further a do, here are our other camp counselors.

*Twilight Sparkle, Fluttershy, upinde wa mvua Dash, Rarity, and applejack come out of the mess hall building*

Twilight Sparkle: I'm Twilight Sparkle.

Rainbow Dash: I'm upinde wa mvua Dash!

Rarity: I'm Rarity.

Applejack: Howdy, I'm Applejack....

I was at my house surrounded kwa my animal Marafiki and Angel. "You guys want to hear a story", I asked them. They all nodded. "Yay! Okay, so wewe guys probably don't know this, but I wasn't always shy like this." My animal Marafiki and Angel looked bewildered. This made me smile. One of the squirrels asked how did I change. "I was just about to tell you, sweetie. So it started like this..."

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I was walking through Everfree forest when I heard thunder and lightning, but I didn't run away and hide. I just kept on galloping. As I got to the end, I flew off and headed straight for the clouds. Up...

Now, you're probably wondering what this is all about. Today is Halloween, not only is it a fun holiday, but it also marks my one mwaka anniversary of being a shabiki on this club, and my Hedgehog In Ponyville series. That's what HIP stands for. STH on the other hand, stands for my username, Sean The Hedgehog.

STH: And now to celebrate Non My Little gppony, pony related username's one mwaka anniversary, we regretfully present, STH/HIP Abridged!!
Fanpop users: yaaaaaaaaay
Canada24: Whoopdy friggin do.

October 31, 2012
Hedgehog In Ponyville

STH: WHY IS THIS THE SAME BEGINNING AS MAFIA 2?!?!?!
NocturnalMirage:...