Ronnie's POV:
After Rebbeca and Angel went to kitanda I snuck downstairs to Derek's room.I knocked gently on the door,and went in.He was laying on his kitanda white t-shirt and gray sweat pants.
"They fell asleep on me."I smiled.
"That's fine kwa me."
"Are wewe even tired?"I asked as I sat inayofuata to him.
"Kind of."
"Oh,Um do wewe want me to go?"
"No,I want wewe to stay."
Hearing that he wanted me,made gave me great confidence.
"Your so sunburnt."I giggled.
"Yea,I shouldn't have fallen asleep in the sun like that."
"Oh you'll be fine."I giggled."Or will you?"
I poked him.
"Oww!....Um yea I'm fine..ow...I mean oh."he lied.
"Okay sure,Guess I'll just leave.."
"Wait!...um"He got shy."I need a big favor from you."
"Um,Sure,What?"
"I..Um...Can wewe put this on my back?"
He gave me a bottle of cream.
"So wewe admit.."I smiled.
"Yes,I admit it.Im not okay.."
"And wewe need.."
"Yes I need your help."
"Okay..I guess so."
He took off his shirt.
Oh shit..I thought.
I put some on my hand and rubbed it in his back.His back was muscular and strong.I felt turned on but awkward,And turn on but very very awkward.My dad would kill me if he found out,But the thing was I didn't give two shits.I felt Derek's arm and I froze.
They were strong even when he wasn't flexing.I let go.
"I'm done."I wispered.
He was laying down,He had fell asleep.I smiled and laid inayofuata to him.
"You are my sunshine,My only sunshine,You make me happy..."I sang a lullaby till I fell asleep.
After Rebbeca and Angel went to kitanda I snuck downstairs to Derek's room.I knocked gently on the door,and went in.He was laying on his kitanda white t-shirt and gray sweat pants.
"They fell asleep on me."I smiled.
"That's fine kwa me."
"Are wewe even tired?"I asked as I sat inayofuata to him.
"Kind of."
"Oh,Um do wewe want me to go?"
"No,I want wewe to stay."
Hearing that he wanted me,made gave me great confidence.
"Your so sunburnt."I giggled.
"Yea,I shouldn't have fallen asleep in the sun like that."
"Oh you'll be fine."I giggled."Or will you?"
I poked him.
"Oww!....Um yea I'm fine..ow...I mean oh."he lied.
"Okay sure,Guess I'll just leave.."
"Wait!...um"He got shy."I need a big favor from you."
"Um,Sure,What?"
"I..Um...Can wewe put this on my back?"
He gave me a bottle of cream.
"So wewe admit.."I smiled.
"Yes,I admit it.Im not okay.."
"And wewe need.."
"Yes I need your help."
"Okay..I guess so."
He took off his shirt.
Oh shit..I thought.
I put some on my hand and rubbed it in his back.His back was muscular and strong.I felt turned on but awkward,And turn on but very very awkward.My dad would kill me if he found out,But the thing was I didn't give two shits.I felt Derek's arm and I froze.
They were strong even when he wasn't flexing.I let go.
"I'm done."I wispered.
He was laying down,He had fell asleep.I smiled and laid inayofuata to him.
"You are my sunshine,My only sunshine,You make me happy..."I sang a lullaby till I fell asleep.
Kay,so I want help from wewe all for what I should do for What Makes Him Beautiful. Do wewe have any ideas to suggest? I'd really upendo to hear what wewe want to happen in What Makes Him Beautiful. wewe want drama? wewe want sadness? wewe want betrayal? Start putting down your ideas on here! I'd loveeee to see your ideas. And I promise I will use them in the story. I want to make Part 16 with your ideas. And I may feature your ideas in Part 17,18,19,etc. I'm sure wewe all have wonderful ideas. and I'd really upendo to see your ideas.
If wewe haven't read What Makes Him Beautiful,here's the link to Part 9-
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Well,comment your ideas. I'll read them all and put them in the story.Thanks!
If wewe haven't read What Makes Him Beautiful,here's the link to Part 9-
link
Well,comment your ideas. I'll read them all and put them in the story.Thanks!
Ok I'm gonna make a new 1D fanfic and i need yall to help me. If you'd like to be a character in it then you'll need to fill this in:
Name:
Hair color:
Eye color:
Fave color:
Personality:
What One Direction boy do wewe want to be with?:
Ideas for the fanfic: (I don't know if I'll use your ideas but I just want to know how creative wewe are. wewe also don't have to give me any ideas if wewe don't want to.)
Fave 1D song:
Once wewe fill that in then I'll need wewe to it to me in my inbox. Put the subject as "new makala info."
On July 20th I will draw two names out if a hat and use those. I will post the first part of my fanfic. I hope all of wewe Directioners participate in this contest. I really need your help if wewe want this fanfic to be worth reading. Remember: wewe have until July 20th! Good luck!
Name:
Hair color:
Eye color:
Fave color:
Personality:
What One Direction boy do wewe want to be with?:
Ideas for the fanfic: (I don't know if I'll use your ideas but I just want to know how creative wewe are. wewe also don't have to give me any ideas if wewe don't want to.)
Fave 1D song:
Once wewe fill that in then I'll need wewe to it to me in my inbox. Put the subject as "new makala info."
On July 20th I will draw two names out if a hat and use those. I will post the first part of my fanfic. I hope all of wewe Directioners participate in this contest. I really need your help if wewe want this fanfic to be worth reading. Remember: wewe have until July 20th! Good luck!