should i include titles? i don't know all my Marafiki in reality say i should but i don't know well maoni if i should au not, and enjoy the story

"Are wewe okay" Louis asked, his arms around Mendy. "No, Harry has shunned me ever since i turned down his proposal" Mendy alisema sniffling. "Proposal?" Louis asked with a raised eyebrow. "This isn't happening" Liam alisema his eyes wide looking at his cell phone. "What's wrong Liam" Zayn asked. "Harry's quitting" Liam said. "Quitting what" Louis asked. "The band" Liam alisema softly. "H-He's quitting the band" Mendy asked. Meanwhile at a small nyumbani in Cheshire....

Three days later Niall and Ruby rode down the road to their house. She just got out of the hospital and she was kinda sad about it. She really liked the hospital. On Fridays they brought mtoto wa mbwa to the hospital and she got to play with them. On Saturday, the last night she was there, she and the other kids got to go to the hospital maktaba and have a ice cream party. She also meet a few of the kids like Andrew, who was in a car wreck and got amnesia, and Dani who broke from falling off a roof -yeah, she isn't the brightest in the world.
But now, she's going nyumbani and isn't very happy about it....

Harry went to sit on the chairs and was having his juisi in his hand. He started to sing.
Harry: But I see wewe with him slow dancing tearing me apart, ‘cause wewe don’t see
Zayn joined harry while imba and continued the other part….
Zayn: Whenever you’re kissing I’m breaking, oh how I wish
Harry: That was me!    
Tears rolled out of Harry’s eyes.
Everyone turned to see them and clapped their hands.
Jenny came closer to Harry clapping her hands.
Jenny: woah! wewe have a great voice…. Harry
She hugged him.
The whole time everyone were enjoying.
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I see Lindsey as Taylor mwepesi, teleka and Alana as Selena Gomez! If wewe see them as someone else, tell me who wewe think they seem like!
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"Are wewe sure?" Harry asked Alana taking a sip of his punch.
"Yes. Positive! What should I do?" Just dakika zamani Alana saw Daniel Jason, Lindsey's tarehe to Tanner Kingston's Spring Break party, kissing another girl.
"Well, there's nothing wewe can do! If Daniel is a true man, he will tell Lindsey."
"Oh, Are wewe a true man?" Alana shifted her weight.
"I would never cheat on a women, unless I was drunk and had no clue what I was...

Riley's P.O.V

I woke up the inayofuata siku remembering the concert. I dragged myself out of kitanda heading to the bathroom taking a kuoga and freshening up. Today I decided to go like lazy and baggy clothes so I got dressed in this link . Everyone else was knocked out. I got my wallet and headed out to the board-walk. I was humming Good Time. Skipping smiling. Holding a HUGE teddy kubeba and cotton Candy link . I went back happy dancing. I went to the arcade played games. Yeah I am a true meat-ball. I went back in the flat. woozy and falling from the spinning ride. The lads looked at me funny and laughing....

Zayn POV:

I ran after Lilah but when I got outside she was gone. I sighed and walked down the drive way and down the road. A car came kwa me and slowed down, "Mom!" Someone yelled. The big black car rolled it's windows down and a women peaked her head out, "Need a ride?" She asked. I nodded and climbed into the car. The car was silent and smelled like McDonald's over-cooked-greasy-fries. A girl was sitting in the front passenger kiti, kiti cha but it was to dark to see what she looked like.
"So, where do wewe need to go?" The woman asked.
I sighed, "I don't even know," The girl in the passenger kiti, kiti cha turned...

[Liam]
Lately I found myself thinking
Been dreaming about wewe a lot
And up in my head I'm you're boyfriend
But that's one thing you've already got

[Harry]
He drives to school every morning
While I walk alone in the rain
He'd kill me without any warning
If he took a look in my brain

[Zayn]
Would he say he's in L-O-V-E
Well if it was me, then I would (I would)
Would he hold wewe when you're feeling low
Baby wewe should know that I would (I would)

[All]
Would he say he's in L-O-V-E
Well if it was me, then I would (I would)
Would he hold wewe when you're feeling low
Baby wewe should know that I would

[Niall]
Back in my...

As an tempt to stall,I looked at my past self and called him in to the hallway.
"Bye,Doctor Rosswell."Anna alisema in a flirty voice.
"Quit flirting with the doctor."Wispered my past self thinking I didnt hear.
He walked into the hall,Still panicking.
"Calm Down."I told him."Deep breathes."
"Shouldn't wewe be telling her that?"
"No,Your not a doctor."
"What?"
"I'm wewe from the future."
"Haha,Your funny."he alisema in disbelief.
I pulled out my ID card and showed it to him.He Lost his laugh.
"Yea,Not so funny any more."
"So I'm going to be a doctor?"
"Nope,But I'm going to help with the birth of our child."
"What???"...

Louis drove everyone back nyumbani and Jenny was taking care of Harry in the hospital. Niome went to the jikoni to prepare noodles for Harry.
Niall: Something smells great to eat….
Niall: tried to have some noodles. Niome patted him on his back.
Niome: Well, I can prepare wewe later and this is specially made for Harry…..
Niall had a sad face. Niome took another plate of noodles and gave it to him.
Niome: This one is specially made for you….
Niall had a bright face smiling.
Niall: Thanks love!
He kissed on her cheek.
Eleanor: Is it ready?
Niome: Yup!
Eleanor called out for Louis and he came running...

Chap 23 After 2 days . 

Aaliya's POV: today zee had to remove his fracture . He went to the doc the boys werent there. Jst we 5 girls. He was out from his fracture and we were home. Zee was running about in the whole house and kept yelling " I m free" 
My cell started to buzz . It was Soubaan one of my frnds from India . 
Convo::::: 
I: hi mr rude 
Soubaan: I m sorry I coudnt contact you 
I: yeah now u remember me 
Soubaan: well I called to invite wewe at my sisters wedding 
I: fauziya right 
Soubaan: yeah n no excuses 
I: Soubaan...... 
Soubaan: is zee there 
I: yeah 
I kept the call on hold...

I was very confused on what I just did. Why would I leave Louis? Why would I leave my friends? Why did I care so much that Zayn quit? Did I have feelings for Zayn that I didn't realize until now?

I was so Lost in my own mental interrogation that I had walked directly into someone. "Oh I'm so... Zayn!" I exclaimed, feeling mixed emotions as I see him smile lightly. "Hey babe." I get Lost in those beautiful eyes until I remember, Zayn abandoned his friends. I took a step back.
"Zayn, we need to talk." He gestured to a nearby bench and we sat.

"Well... what do we need to talk about?" he asks. "Us."...

Riley’s P.O.V

I slowly backed away. I just ran off in shock of course I was happy. I don’t know emotions I guess?.
________________________________2 week’s later_____________________________________

I woke up the inayofuata siku resembling my mom who died from Breast Cancer link . I walked down half awake getting some machungwa, chungwa juice. The jikoni was huge and beautiful and the house to link . I went out for a quick shopping spree. I walked out a thousand mashabiki went crazy and started chasing me saying “RILEY REED RILEY REED!!!!!!!!” I went running allover. I got exhausted and decided hujambo why not...

Chap13 : at the one direction beach, pwani house~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Tess'sPoV: we all entered the house. 
Louis: so girls did wewe like it 
Aaliya: it's amazing. 
Shenali: it's big 
Tess: it's great 
Linda: it's jst perfect. 
Liam: good to know u liked it 
Niall: everyone here has its own room. 
Louis: u can select one for ur selves. 
Aaliya and Tess made a run and went up and selected a room inayofuata to each other. Niall selected the room in front of Aaliya. And Linda inayofuata to him. I selected a room in front  of tess. Liam was in the inayofuata room and Harry and Kia zayn and Shenali were in the rooms of...

Chap 3 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Shenali's POV: I woke up and today our collage was off so I and Aaliya had to work at the Candy shop. I got dressed. So did Aaliya. 
Aaliya: u go I vl c u in an hour 
Shenali: ok c u 
I drived my bike to Candy duka some guys were standing in a hoody . I went closer to them 
I: can I help you 
They all turned around and for a gave me a moyo attack they were one direction. I pretended not to fangirl. 
Niall: hie 
Liam: hey 
I: how can I help you( she wring to faint) 
Harry: have wewe seen the fighting girl 
I: who??? 
Niall: the one I argued vth yesterday 
I: u mean...

Alicia POV:

I went to the hospital with all of them, staying far away from Louis. I knew he would find out that I was here, and he would be pissed, but I don't care. To worried. About Lilah of course.

I walked over to get something to drink when someone came up behind me.
"Hey, Alice?" I turned and saw Louis, I still had Zayn's Gucci glasses on. "Can I ask wewe about something?" I nodded making my hair itch my back. I got a water and we sat on a bench with a 'Give Blood' sign on it. "Me and this girl, went out for a while and I propose to her... but things didn't go as well as we hoped, because...