Percy Jackson & the Olympians

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Thoughts on my made up prophecy? ^__^

My horrible attempt at a Prophecy for my fanfic. :D Be honest please... I need to know if it sounds catching and makes wewe want to read zaidi about it...

Four halfbloods shall embark on a quest
to the land of the rising sun
where what they seek shall rest.
Taken kwa the one slain kwa twins
'Tis the one seeking revenge, changing skins.
Three shall be of the eldest gods
while one shall be of the goddess of thoughts.
Succeed they might, fail they may
for one shall meet the end of their days
in that lurks Death.

So...what do wewe think? Mysterious enough to keep the reader's attention? Gives away too much? FEEDBACK APPRECIATED! xx
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In the land that reeks Death* Sorry :P
cuteypuffgirl posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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I like it but who goes on the quest?
alex31234 posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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wats the title of the fanfic
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Percy Jackson & the Olympians Majibu

Nicolicious said:
Great it's really mistifiying it's better than the one i suggested
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wewe kidding? wewe inspired me! :D
cuteypuffgirl posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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Really I inspired someone :O
Nicolicious posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
sideshowbobbart said:
I like it although I think it reveals a bit too much as we can immediatly guess who the four halfbloods shall be and it maybe should be a bit zaidi mysterious ...
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Actually Zeus's kid will not be Thalia, she'll be an OC of mine.
cuteypuffgirl posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
Nikita15 said:
It sounds awesome!!! Love, love, upendo it!!
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Thanks :)
cuteypuffgirl posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
silver93 said:
Um, I don't think Athena would appreciate being referred to as the Goddess of thoughts. It sounds like they're going to Japan, are wewe incorporating Japanese Gods?
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percabethandchb said:
Its perfect 4 percy jackson!
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greeksrule11 said:
soory it's good but its to obvious and the four poeple on the quest so easy its percy thalia and nico which are the "three shall be of the eldest gods" everyone one knows that the eldest gods which are male are zeus poseidon and hades.and the last is annabeth i mean serouisly "while one shall be of the goddess of thoughts." everyone knows athena is the only smart goddess with a child.
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Technically the eldest god who would have children is Demeter.
nixiedover posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
mslone90 said:
It reveals too much information regarding what they are to do, and all letters must be capitalized in the beginning of each line.
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nixiedover said:
Most prophecies au four au six lines long, so there's that.
And no offense, but it wasn't that great a prophecy...
But that's just the prophecy itself, the plot and suspense of this book is just like, " What's gonna happen? tell me. TELL ME au I EAT YOU."
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Minus the obviousness of who's going on the prophecy...
nixiedover posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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And some other stuff, but that's it
nixiedover posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
ShortPerson said:
YES YES I WANT TO READ THIS! LINK?
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