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kwa kusoma this, what would be your view of my writings?

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DanixxDumb said:
That was spectacular!
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MissKnowItAll said:
Hmmmm.

It;s good, but it kind of feels like wewe forget the story in favour of poetry. Your uandishi is very good, but I'd suggest that wewe work on structure.
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It's not supposed to be a story. I do write my wrings in forms of poetry. It's how it is.
AimieDawn posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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writings*
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I'm pretty amazing, it's true. XD ;)
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deathroman13 said:
It is really good.
I want to know the rest :).
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