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so i was going thru my notebook and i found this single paragraph :

I woke up early in the morning and put on my coat. I walked outside and put my kofia up. I began to walk the white snow crunching beneath my feet. I was soon walking through the forest, suddenly a mist came out of nowhere. I could only see a few paces in front of me. The inayofuata thing i new there was a bag over my head and i was being carried somewhere.
 XxEmolovexX posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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r-pattz said:
On a scale of one to ten... three.

Not lower because at least your grammar doesn't suck.

But it was boring as hell. Come on, where are your descriptive words and interesting verbs? Does the word 'syntax' mean anything to you?

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posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita 
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au a thesaurus, that could help too.
justliveitlive posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
chattycandy said:
well its... intresting and at least the part at the end was...interesting kinda. the words should be better.it should be zaidi captavateing.
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posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita 
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i plan to make it exciting later on i guess...
XxEmolovexX posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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