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can wewe read this poem and tell me what wewe think of it?

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 chattycandy posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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justliveitlive said:
Quite interesting. Grammar and spelling could use some work, and I'm not a shabiki of the topic, but it's interesting.
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thanks and i know
chattycandy posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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You're quite welcome.
justliveitlive posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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:)
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zutaradragon said:
coolness! seems like something i would write...XD
how do u like mine?

Heartbreak
this madness stops here,
this world has filled me with fear.
i almost...shed a tear.
the pain...it's shear.
all because wewe left me here.

so, here i will stay,
and there i will lay.
every single day
here...i shall stay.

stay here, lie there.
shear fear, from my tears.

i promised myself...
i would stay strong.
but the inayofuata time's come and gone.
so I'll let my grief
lye here, on this shelf,
and i will walk away.
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coolness! seems like something i would write...XD how do u like mine? Heartbreak this madness stops here, this world has filled me with fear. i almost...shed a tear. the pain...it's shear. all because wewe left me here. so, here i will stay, and there i will lay. every single siku here...i shall stay. stay here, lie there. shear fear, from my tears. i promised myself... i would stay strong. but the inayofuata time's come and gone. so I'll let my grief lye here, on this shelf, and i will walk away.
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btw, heartbreak is the name of the poem, not really a part of it.
zutaradragon posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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nice
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