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Should I keep on making short stories? (Please no rude maoni :))

The Not So Worm
A Short Story kwa :YoshiStar
One siku when I was at least 2 au 3 years old I was outside with my dad. I saw something through the nyasi and I picked it up. At first I thought it was a worm. So I waved it in the air and said: "Look daddykins a worm!"
And my dad said: "Holly S***!!! That's not a F***** worm! That's a nyasi snake!"
And so I said: "OH" and droped it. And walked back into my house and ate some strawberry ice cream...

Please tell me what wewe think. Should I continue au no? And please no rude comments:)
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kittencutie119 said:
No
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Thank wewe for answering:) I really apreciate it:))
YoshiStar posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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Your welcome. With a little moe practice, wewe could eventually get a little better wth progress
kittencutie119 posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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thank wewe sooooo much! This helps alot:)
YoshiStar posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
JudyNails said:
I think wewe should!
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Thank you!:D
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Shadowmarioking said:
lol that is a hilarious story wished that'd happen to me XD

go ahead, continue :D
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I'd be glad to!:D
YoshiStar posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
IHWTA said:
That was.... A really short, short story...
Kind of... random...
I say no. No offense of anything.
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Thanks anyway:) None taken BTW
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YOUTH-UNLIMITED said:
It's not actually a story.these are the lackings of this story.try to correct your faults and practice more.
1.the story doesn't got any meaning
2.the story doesn't got any moral
3.the story doesn't got any climate
4.the story doesn't got any message and aim. So...if wewe can overcome this faults and practice more,you will be able to make great stories.good luck:)
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Thank you:)
YoshiStar posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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wewe are most welcome:)
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hellokittygirl2 said:
i think yes u should make it little funny and scary
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I will:))
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Brandey said:
Hm...It's kinda strange,I don't know what to say.
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Same.
mitchie19 posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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Well its kinda zaidi like a strange event that heppened in my life...I should have mentioned that:)
YoshiStar posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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Ok than :)
Brandey posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
dreamfields said:
If wewe enjoy writing, then continue. The zaidi practice wewe have, the zaidi details wewe will include. Nobody sits down and writes a masterpiece on their first try. The story was really short, but it gives wewe a start to build on. Have fun!!!
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Thank you:))
YoshiStar posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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Your welcome :D
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