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I want feedback on this drawing.

Rate it, hate it, critique it, I don't really care. But so far three au so of my close Marafiki on fanpop have seen it, and haven't really gone into detail about my style rather than the imagery itself gives off melancholy vibes. Opinions?
 I want feedback on this drawing.
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coolie said:
It's a little dull, and It's not very interesting. It doesn't make u say, " wow! i can't believe u did that. But its good too.It's mysterious. The eyes bring out a mood. It's not great, but not bad.
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but the words make it better
coolie posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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My drawings are pretty dull, but it's only because I lack the education I need on drawing. Thanks, anyway.
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NomyCake said:
It's cute in a kind of sad, depressing way. I really like the largeness of the eyes and the appearance of heartbreak au unpleasant surprise on her face, too!
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Thanks :)
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Trainofdoom said:
The eyes are off, the hairline are non-exsitant, the background is boring-and so is the ujumla, jumla composition. The girl needs to be shaded, wewe need to add zaidi detail-especially in the hair(which I like the most along with the mouth and nose)
However, wewe draw very well, keep up the good work and consider taking drawing classes!
P.S Look for me on deviantart, I have an account of the same name there!
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Yeah, I'm pretty abstract when it comes to proportions and realism in drawing. Thanks for the tips.
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