It's nice but here's some critiques, first of all i can barely even see his body, i don't even know which angle his body. I suggest that inayofuata time wewe have to make it zaidi noticeable. sekunde his head shape, it looks kinda wonky so try to use sketch line for future references. And last, wewe should try using a darker pencil, a pen, au a marker, for the outline if you're coloring the piece because if wewe color it (with that style of coloring) without any outline, it kinda decrease the quality of the picture, but that's just my taste.
here's a recourse if wewe wanna improve your skill:
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