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I Know it Sucks Dx but What Do wewe Think?

Of these lyrics I wrote, obviously they aren't done yet but I just want to know if it's still good. I think it sucks because I cannot write lyrics for my life.

"It's time to face the destiny. just stand in time, release the flames. Every siku wewe just see the sights,

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Stand tall, stand now and see what we're fighting for. Die now, die trying. We all just live in big shame, incomplete history. Listen to those who care."

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BlondLionEzel said:

Nice :)

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THank wewe :)

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sieluvzsoul said:

Very good

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thanks! :)

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pokemonfan909 said:

Its nice. Why do wewe think it sucks?

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Because I never wrote a song before and I know I suck at it

16falloutboy posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita

wewe don't....

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misscrazel said:

It's great, if wewe want any tips on songwriting message me. ^-^

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Alright will do ^^

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True-Finn-Fan said:

i can dig it... wewe know what's so weird? i wrote a song earlier today for a completely different reason and was just thinking "somebodies gonna post something and onyesha me up" XD

coincidences.

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