Silver the Hedgehog Article: Silver the hedgehog VS. Matt the Lynx

posted by Matt-the-lynx

Silver was looking at the city from a tall building...then blaze appeared!silver blused and turned away...he said"um,whatsup blaze ?" but it was not blaze...it was MTL's enemy baffle in discuise...And baffle blew up the costume and teleported!Silver's jaw droped...with a really freaked out face!!!then he found one of MTL's spikes...He teleported to MTL's universe...meanwhile...baffle pulled the same on MTL...baffle tried an nicole costume and blew up like last time,teleported,and left a threat note in silver's handwriting!!!!MTL came dashing after silver...the ran into eachoter!!silver used phicic and disable MTL's nanites....MTL used nanacto wicth reactavated all the nanites!MTL shot spikes at silver and threw them back...MTL used copy then used phycic and the them back...They did medium dammage!silver try to kick MTL...MTL used chaos master control when silver was in close range...Silver used kronos control and MTL used copy again and used kronos master control...DONE MASSIVE DAMMAGE!!!MTL used Acid wave...silver turned it around using phicic!!!MTL used the were-emrald...MTL landed on all 4S...spikes grew out of his back like bamboo...And he grew an firely mane!!!"GRRRrrrrROOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRrrrrrr!" MTWL did!MTWL dashed at silver at blinding speed then a leash rapped around MTWL's neck,it was NICOLE who threw the leash...Blaze appered and grab silver's hand and alisema stop!they were both supprised...Blaze took silver home...and Nicole Took matt to the beach, pwani to calm down and relax together...Matt returned to lynx form!meanwhile baffle alisema "Mee-hee-hee!Next...i'll pin the one who aliiba my wand and the blue hedgehog aginst eachother!!!Mee-hee-hee...I HAVE CHORTLES!!!"

MephilesTheDark Dude, you really need to stop with the VS fics. You're putting them EVERYWHERE, and to be frank, they arn't that good. If you want people to actually enjoy these fics, I suggest you stop tying it out like a Poke'mon battle and start giving them an actual plotline. In all honestly, they're all the same: Something happens that makes Matt end up battling someone, Matt wins (GARY-STU!?) and then they all make up and be friends, happy ending. Dude, PARAGRAPH. It's so hard to read when it's just one big chunk of words. ITSALMOSTLIKETRYINGTOREADTHISALLTHETIMEWHICHISPRETTYMUCHIMPOSSIBLEBEFOREYOUREREADITABOUT50TIMES Okay? More description, also. *edit* Silver stared out over the city, standing upon tall building, when his best friend and alley, Blaze,approached him. Silver blused and turned away, "Um, whats up Blaze ?" But this was not the Blaze he knew, it was, in fact, famed Matt the Lynx's enemy, Baffle. *end edit* See how much better that reads?