imba My original Song- It hurts! kwa Ellie Cowell ( my real name)

wierdgem7 posted on Jun 05, 2011 at 04:32PM
*Verse 1*
It hurts when I see you with her
And I know its rude, but I have to
stop and stare
*chorus*
But every time I look at you,
I feel like I'm in love
But it still hurts
It hurts

*verse 2*
Is lonely me?
Is lonely me?
Is lonely what i'm destined to be

*Chorus*


*verse 3*
When I try to get It right
It just ends up in a fight
So why don't I just stop trying?
Because it feels like i could be dying?

* Chorus*


Is love supposed to hurt?
Nothing I've ever felt
Has hurt like this
Do you know what I'd do
For a kiss?

*Chorus* (x2)






Hi there! Did you like it? I dont like it myself.. but i want to know what you think!

imba 5 majibu

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zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita GrenadeGirl337 said…
sunny
Maybe make it a little longer? i dunno.
zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita wierdgem7 said…
It sucks. I know it does!
zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita applies112 said…
zzz
that made me fall asleep
zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita zaedenwild said…
whats the tune?
zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita webkinzluv said…
smile
i have the same problem with writing short songs. but it is a nice song.