A/N; I wrote this just as one of my MANY scripts I had during series 4- If wewe want me to pakia the others I will-
I was just sending this to Jamie Brittain cos he tweeted my friend and alisema I can send him my scripts and he'll read them =)
So just what I wanted in S4! Like the last ten minutes
EVERYTHING BELONGS TO THE AMAZING SKINS! UNFORTUNATELY NOTHING BELONGS TO ME- AS OF YET =)))
ALTERNATIVE ENDING FOR SERIES 4.
WRITER; ANGHARAD WILLIAMS
SET IN; SERIES 4: EPISODE 8 (Cook has broken into John Foster’s nyumbani looking for Freddie)
SCENE 1; John Foster’s house
Cook jumps into the house through the window, but catches his hand on a nail.
Ah! Fuck! (shakes his hand to clear the blood)
Cook walks over to packed boxes and starts opening the box. He picks up a bag with a blood stained koti, jacket in it.
He puts the bag down and picks up another bag with Freddie’s trainers in it.
Shot zooms to see “Fredster” written on the trainer.
Lights are switched on.
(Jumps back in shock) Shit!
(walks in holding a baseball bat) Let me guess. James Cook
(holding Freddie’s trainer in the bag and shoving it towards John) What the fuck have wewe done?!
She doesn’t upendo you, wewe know. It was the other one she loved- Mclair
I alisema What, the Fuck, have wewe done to my friend?
(walks closer towards Cook)
I took care of it. wewe see Elizabeth needs saving- he wasn’t suppose to save her, neither are you- but I am.
(puts Freddie’s trainer down) All right listen wewe tosser I don’t get what the hell is going on in that fucked up mind of yours but you’re gonna tell me where my friend is!
Oh don’t be a fool Cook! We don’t have time for that! Now could wewe please kneel down.
(laughs in shock) wewe killed my best friend!
Kneel down please- soon you’ll both be out of the way. She deserves much better
Freddie, my mate, my best mate in the whole world is the only, the only one Eff is ever going to love- I can’t change that and wewe (chuckles) fucking hell, wewe defiantly can’t change that
Is that so?
(nods and grins)
John hits Cook in the stomach with the bat.
Cook groans in pain.
AH! FUCKING HELL!
(steps closer to Cook)
Do I need to ask wewe again? Kneel down please James
(steps closer into John’s face)
(He throws one of the boxes at John and runs into the corridor being pursued slowly kwa John still holding his bat)
James. James come back here. I thought killing that worthless piece of shit was fun but killing wewe is going to be so much zaidi pleasurable
Cook is hiding in the jikoni as John enters clutching his bat tighter.
Cook comes from behind him and punches him to the ground.
(still hitting him) DON’T. YOU. EVER. TALK ABOUT MY BEST FRIEND LIKE THAT!! wewe FUCKING BASTARD! PIECE OF SHIT! FUCK YOU! FUCK YOU!! WHERE’S FREDDIE?! (screaming/crying) WHERE IS HE??!!
(struggling to breathe)
Somewhere she won’t find him! She can nyumbani now to me! She’s never going back there! She’s mine now! He can stay there instead of her!
(hits him again repeatedly until John is unconscious)
Cook leaves him on the floor and runs back downstairs and back out through the window he came in grabbing Freddie’s koti, jacket as he leaves. SCENE 2; At Effy’s Hospital in the woods
Cook has found a place in the woods where a hole has been filled in.
Cook is in tears clutching Freddie’s t-shirt.
FUCK FREDS! Why the fuck did wewe go there?! (gazing at the floor) wewe stupid bastard! You’ve fucking left me now! Karen’s been going apeshit looking for you- I’m sorry I thought wewe skipped town. I should have believed wewe didn’t— What the fuck am I gonna tell Eff? (kneels to the floor and clutches Freddie’s koti, jacket tighter) I promise Freds I won’t take her (pause) she’s yours, she always will be, anyway it’s not me and Eff (crying more) it was never me and Eff. It’s always been Freds and Cook. I’ll get wewe out of here now Freds. I’ll take wewe nyumbani to Effy. SCENE 3; Graveyard (Freddie’s Funeral)
Cut to a few days later at Freddie’s funeral.
At the grave is Freddie’s father, grandfather, Karen, Pandora, Thomas, JJ, Emily, Naomi, Katie, and Effy. + a few other unknown faces.
Shot of Freddie’s coffin being put in the ground.
Effy is the only one not crying.
As the vicar speaks shots of Cook talking the police to John Foster’s house.
John Foster being arrested for Freddie’s murder.
Cook is arrested again but only for his awali crimes
Freddie’s body being found and Karen and their father identifies the body and breaking down.
Shot back to the funeral.
As the vicar leaves the others begin to follow.
Katie steps up behind Effy and holds onto her hand.
(crying) Eff... Freddie was amazing- wewe were the lucky one, he loved wewe so much, just... I’m here if wewe want me okay
Pause. Katie looks awkward as Effy looks down at the coffin.
wewe talk to him for a while yeah
Katie leaves Effy kwa the grave and walks away as she follows the others out of the graveyard Cook arrives handcuffed to a police officer.
Katie hugs Cook.
I’m so glad wewe could come- she needs someone Cook- I can’t help her
no one can babe
The police officer begins walking away pulling Cook with him.
Police officer pauses and Cook turns around.
I’m so sorry. I miss him so much I don’t know how wewe must feel- wewe knew him better than any of us and I...
And Cook, I’m glad you’re my friend- Freddie was lucky to have someone like wewe and so am I- I hope wewe get out soon wewe don’t deserve to be in prison. wewe deserve a medal for what wewe did for Freds
Cook slightly smiles at her. Katie walks away.
The policeman leads Cook to the grave inayofuata to Effy.
Effy turns around and shows no expression on her face.
Cook goes and stands near her.
Do wewe think he can hear us?
Freds can do anything Eff
Yeah- that’s what I love. Do wewe think he’s up there?
Yeah- he is (starts to cry) he’ll always be up there, looking after you
Just like he promised (looks up at the sky then looks at Cook) Why are wewe crying?
Why aren’t you?
Freddie told me not to cry, he doesn’t like it when I cry. It fucks him up.
(chuckles) Look at us. Freds, Eff and Cook all together again
Police officer pulls on Cook’s arm to leave.
wewe have to go now right?
Five zaidi dakika man!
Police officer shakes his head.
(walks over the grave, crying a lot) I fucking upendo wewe Freds (kisses his hand and places it on the grave) I’m gonna miss you, wewe tosser. It’s not gonna be same. (looks at Effy) Don’t worry Freds I’ll look after her for wewe (pause) and no not like that Freds. I told wewe man-It’s Freds and Cookie. That’s it. Us against the fucking world.
The police officer leads Cook away as he passes Effy, Cook holds her hand for a few sekunde before letting go and walking away.
Effy looks up at the sky and hears a Freddie whisper.
I upendo you. I upendo you. I upendo you. I upendo you. I upendo you. (Starts to cry) Freddie... Please... Please tell me you’re coming back. I upendo wewe so much. It’s my fault. wewe shouldn’t be up there. Freddie...?
(whispering in the wind) I upendo wewe
Effy laughs and turns to Cook who is nearly gone.
COOK! COOK! He can hear us! Cook He can hear me!
Of course he fucking can! He’s Freddie.
(smiles and turns back around to look at the sky) I was wrong Freddie wewe don’t make me weak- you’ve made me strong. I’m strong now. I’m being strong. For you.
Shot closes of Effy smiling and spinning around in the graveyard as Cook smiles on.
Shot zooms out from the ground into the sky.
A/N; YES I HAD TO PUT COOK/KATIE IN THERE! SO WHAT SUE ME! HAHAHA!
So I am back on fanfiction for a while now =)
au maybe I'll keep scripting! Cos I do upendo it <333