Duncan's P.O.V
Well this sucks. I woke up with a nasty cold from the rain last night on Gwen's special day. I looked at the clock. I have an saa to plan Gwen's birthday breakfast. I got dressed and woke all of the dudes. "Dude, it's like 6:00 in the morning." Geoff complained. "I need help for Gwen's birthday breakfast guys." I exclaimed. "Today's Gwen's birthday?" DJ asked. "Yeah, now c'mon guys." I ordered. On my way through the door, I started coughing. "I think wewe should sit this one out bromigo, wewe look pale." Alejandro assured me. "No, nothing is going to stop me from celebrating Gwen's big day." Before my whole body was out the door, I turned around to see Trent, still lying on his bunk.
"Hey douchebag, just because Gwen wouldn't go out with you, doesn't mean that wewe have to be a stick in the mud and not celebrate her birthday."
"I don't even like that slutz as a friend."
"Listen, my Gweny is not a slutz! If you're just too brain dead to realize that, then that's your Lost buddy, not mine."
I ran out of the cabin, kibanda to see that the dudes have already set the table. Chef brought out the eggs, toast, strawberries, and cheese wraps. I have to admit, they actually look good. Perfect, now I just have to give Bridgette the signal. I had a walkie talkie in my hand. I pressed the left side button and whispered, "Bridge, come in Bridge." I waited for a response. "Hearing wewe loud and clear Duncan, is it time?" she asked. "On my cue. Go!" I told her. Bridgette woke every single girl in the cabin, besides Gwen. After about 10 minutes, they entered the mess hall with us. "Is everything ready?" LeShawna asked me. "Yep, bring her in." I commanded her. LeShawna rushed back to the girls cabin, kibanda to wake up Gwen. I turned off the lights and gave everyone directions. I heard footsteps. Everyone was quiet. "LeShawna can wewe please tell me why I have a blindfold on?" she asked. "Just calm down we're almost there." LeShawna instructed. Gwen walked in the room as LeShawna pulled off her blindfold. "You brought me to a dark room?" she questioned her. Gwen flickered on the light switch. We all jumped up out from our hiding places and screamed, "Surprise! Happy Birthday Gwen!" Gwen smiled. "Thanks everyone!" she chanted. Gwen ran over to me and gave me a long kiss.
"Happy Birthday Babe!"
"Did wewe do this all for me?"
"Yeah, because I upendo wewe and this is your special day. Now, just sit down and enjoy your breakfast."
Gwen took a kiti, kiti cha and enjoyed her eggs, toast, strawberries, and cheese wrap. "Nice job Chef, wewe have really outdone yourself." she complimented him. Chef blushed. "Yeah, well-" he responded. I grabbed Gwen kwa the hand. "C'mon gorgeous, let's get going." I instructed her. "Where are we going?" she asked me. "To the dock." I replied. Gwen and I rushed to the dock and we got on a boat. "Why are we on a mashua again?" she asked me. "We, my birthday princess, are going to LaPlaya de Losers." I informed her. "You mean that place where Ezekiel and Harold got sent to after their elimination?" (i forgot to add that harold got eliminated when the kangaroos lost)
"Yep, wewe should really check that place out, it's a paradise."
"Wow, then I should really get myself eliminated."
"Nah,I'll miss wewe too much."
I started coughing like I was about to hack up an internal organ. "Are wewe ok Duncan?" she asked me. "Yeah, just got a little sick from the rain last night." I stated. "I told you. wewe should've kept your shati on." "Yeah, but it was a sacrifice I was willing to take." Gwen smiled at me. Her smile was beautiful. We finally got to the island. I got off the mashua first. "Birthday Princess." I alisema while holding out my hand. Gwen chuckled. "Why thank you." she joked. I helped Gwen off of the mashua and led her to the pool. "Hope wewe brought your bathing suit babe." I joked. Gwen sighed. "Oh, sorry Duncan, I didn't know-" Before she could continue I pulled out what was, her black bathing suit. "How did wewe get that?" she asked me. "I have my connections." (Bridgette) "Now, go get dressed and meet me back at the pool." I alisema as I shoved the outfit in her face. Gwen walked over to the changing room. I took off my shati and relaxed in the pool. I saw Harold walk by. "Duncan, finally get eliminated?" Harold joked.
"Nope, if wewe must now, it's my sweetheart's birthday and I decided to take her to this 5 nyota resort."
"Wait, wewe mean Courtney?"
" I mean Gwen. I broke it off with Courtney over 2 weeks ago."
"So, why did I just see Courtney storm into the girls changing room? She looked pretty steamed."
Before he could say anything else, I ran as fast as I could to the changing room. I banged on the door. "Gwen, are wewe in there? Gwen, Gwen, can wewe hear me?" I cried out. After about 5 sekunde of silence, I tried to bang the door open. It was locked. I took up every ounce of my strength to bust it open. Finally, I was able to get in. I checked through all of the stalls to find Gwen. I found her in the last one, COUGHING UP BLOOD? I rushed to her side. "Gwen? Gwen, babe. Who did this to you?" She managed, "Courtney." Gwen closed her eyes. I started shaking her. "Gwen, Gwen, Gwen! Do. Not. Leave. Me." I screamed. I caught myself crying. Still no response. I carried Gwen bridal style out the door. I had to get to the hospital. The mashua was gone but I saw a note taped to the dock. It read:
I see that wewe and you're sweetheart were able to make up after I have created that fake makala on your Romance Records. I'm impressed, but not impressed enough. This is your final warning. Courtney was just one of my, let's call it, devil helpers. Just someone to do my dirty work for me. Now, wewe better hurry along, I hope wewe can swim. ;)
I crushed the note in my hand. Well, there was only one way out of here. I jumped in the water, and swam, all the way to Camp Wawanakwa ( i totally didn't spell that right) I finally got there. The first place that I went to, was the infirmary. No one was there and Gwen looked like she was almost dead. I rushed over to the mess hall and saw everyone standing there, including Courtney. I shoved my way through the crowd.
"Chris, I need help, now!" I raised my voice at him. I was red. "Medic!" Chris screamed. I saw 2 dudes take Gwen away on a gurney. I started to burst out in tears. Everyone crowded around me trying to comfort me, except for Courtney. I have to admit, even Trent felt kinda bad. I stormed over to Courtney and yelled, "You bastard! What did wewe do to her? wewe just had to ruin Gwen's big day? I hate you! I hate wewe bitch! Rot in hell!" I then stormed off to the infirmary. I saw Gwen with a bunch of tubes connected to her. "Gwen! This is all my fault! I should have never let wewe out of my sight. I upendo you. Don't leave me. Please." I begged. I stared at a lifeless Gwen. I gave her another kiss. Then, I heard a noise that would ruin my life for ever.
It was a straight, clear 'beep!' sound.
I turned around to see Gwen's moyo meter thingy majiger. (Y'know the thing that goes, beep, beep, beep, beep.) It displayed one straight line going through it. No crooked lines, just one continuous straight one. I stared at Gwen's now, completely lifeless body.
Then I knew, she was gone.
Well this sucks. I woke up with a nasty cold from the rain last night on Gwen's special day. I looked at the clock. I have an saa to plan Gwen's birthday breakfast. I got dressed and woke all of the dudes. "Dude, it's like 6:00 in the morning." Geoff complained. "I need help for Gwen's birthday breakfast guys." I exclaimed. "Today's Gwen's birthday?" DJ asked. "Yeah, now c'mon guys." I ordered. On my way through the door, I started coughing. "I think wewe should sit this one out bromigo, wewe look pale." Alejandro assured me. "No, nothing is going to stop me from celebrating Gwen's big day." Before my whole body was out the door, I turned around to see Trent, still lying on his bunk.
"Hey douchebag, just because Gwen wouldn't go out with you, doesn't mean that wewe have to be a stick in the mud and not celebrate her birthday."
"I don't even like that slutz as a friend."
"Listen, my Gweny is not a slutz! If you're just too brain dead to realize that, then that's your Lost buddy, not mine."
I ran out of the cabin, kibanda to see that the dudes have already set the table. Chef brought out the eggs, toast, strawberries, and cheese wraps. I have to admit, they actually look good. Perfect, now I just have to give Bridgette the signal. I had a walkie talkie in my hand. I pressed the left side button and whispered, "Bridge, come in Bridge." I waited for a response. "Hearing wewe loud and clear Duncan, is it time?" she asked. "On my cue. Go!" I told her. Bridgette woke every single girl in the cabin, besides Gwen. After about 10 minutes, they entered the mess hall with us. "Is everything ready?" LeShawna asked me. "Yep, bring her in." I commanded her. LeShawna rushed back to the girls cabin, kibanda to wake up Gwen. I turned off the lights and gave everyone directions. I heard footsteps. Everyone was quiet. "LeShawna can wewe please tell me why I have a blindfold on?" she asked. "Just calm down we're almost there." LeShawna instructed. Gwen walked in the room as LeShawna pulled off her blindfold. "You brought me to a dark room?" she questioned her. Gwen flickered on the light switch. We all jumped up out from our hiding places and screamed, "Surprise! Happy Birthday Gwen!" Gwen smiled. "Thanks everyone!" she chanted. Gwen ran over to me and gave me a long kiss.
"Happy Birthday Babe!"
"Did wewe do this all for me?"
"Yeah, because I upendo wewe and this is your special day. Now, just sit down and enjoy your breakfast."
Gwen took a kiti, kiti cha and enjoyed her eggs, toast, strawberries, and cheese wrap. "Nice job Chef, wewe have really outdone yourself." she complimented him. Chef blushed. "Yeah, well-" he responded. I grabbed Gwen kwa the hand. "C'mon gorgeous, let's get going." I instructed her. "Where are we going?" she asked me. "To the dock." I replied. Gwen and I rushed to the dock and we got on a boat. "Why are we on a mashua again?" she asked me. "We, my birthday princess, are going to LaPlaya de Losers." I informed her. "You mean that place where Ezekiel and Harold got sent to after their elimination?" (i forgot to add that harold got eliminated when the kangaroos lost)
"Yep, wewe should really check that place out, it's a paradise."
"Wow, then I should really get myself eliminated."
"Nah,I'll miss wewe too much."
I started coughing like I was about to hack up an internal organ. "Are wewe ok Duncan?" she asked me. "Yeah, just got a little sick from the rain last night." I stated. "I told you. wewe should've kept your shati on." "Yeah, but it was a sacrifice I was willing to take." Gwen smiled at me. Her smile was beautiful. We finally got to the island. I got off the mashua first. "Birthday Princess." I alisema while holding out my hand. Gwen chuckled. "Why thank you." she joked. I helped Gwen off of the mashua and led her to the pool. "Hope wewe brought your bathing suit babe." I joked. Gwen sighed. "Oh, sorry Duncan, I didn't know-" Before she could continue I pulled out what was, her black bathing suit. "How did wewe get that?" she asked me. "I have my connections." (Bridgette) "Now, go get dressed and meet me back at the pool." I alisema as I shoved the outfit in her face. Gwen walked over to the changing room. I took off my shati and relaxed in the pool. I saw Harold walk by. "Duncan, finally get eliminated?" Harold joked.
"Nope, if wewe must now, it's my sweetheart's birthday and I decided to take her to this 5 nyota resort."
"Wait, wewe mean Courtney?"
" I mean Gwen. I broke it off with Courtney over 2 weeks ago."
"So, why did I just see Courtney storm into the girls changing room? She looked pretty steamed."
Before he could say anything else, I ran as fast as I could to the changing room. I banged on the door. "Gwen, are wewe in there? Gwen, Gwen, can wewe hear me?" I cried out. After about 5 sekunde of silence, I tried to bang the door open. It was locked. I took up every ounce of my strength to bust it open. Finally, I was able to get in. I checked through all of the stalls to find Gwen. I found her in the last one, COUGHING UP BLOOD? I rushed to her side. "Gwen? Gwen, babe. Who did this to you?" She managed, "Courtney." Gwen closed her eyes. I started shaking her. "Gwen, Gwen, Gwen! Do. Not. Leave. Me." I screamed. I caught myself crying. Still no response. I carried Gwen bridal style out the door. I had to get to the hospital. The mashua was gone but I saw a note taped to the dock. It read:
I see that wewe and you're sweetheart were able to make up after I have created that fake makala on your Romance Records. I'm impressed, but not impressed enough. This is your final warning. Courtney was just one of my, let's call it, devil helpers. Just someone to do my dirty work for me. Now, wewe better hurry along, I hope wewe can swim. ;)
I crushed the note in my hand. Well, there was only one way out of here. I jumped in the water, and swam, all the way to Camp Wawanakwa ( i totally didn't spell that right) I finally got there. The first place that I went to, was the infirmary. No one was there and Gwen looked like she was almost dead. I rushed over to the mess hall and saw everyone standing there, including Courtney. I shoved my way through the crowd.
"Chris, I need help, now!" I raised my voice at him. I was red. "Medic!" Chris screamed. I saw 2 dudes take Gwen away on a gurney. I started to burst out in tears. Everyone crowded around me trying to comfort me, except for Courtney. I have to admit, even Trent felt kinda bad. I stormed over to Courtney and yelled, "You bastard! What did wewe do to her? wewe just had to ruin Gwen's big day? I hate you! I hate wewe bitch! Rot in hell!" I then stormed off to the infirmary. I saw Gwen with a bunch of tubes connected to her. "Gwen! This is all my fault! I should have never let wewe out of my sight. I upendo you. Don't leave me. Please." I begged. I stared at a lifeless Gwen. I gave her another kiss. Then, I heard a noise that would ruin my life for ever.
It was a straight, clear 'beep!' sound.
I turned around to see Gwen's moyo meter thingy majiger. (Y'know the thing that goes, beep, beep, beep, beep.) It displayed one straight line going through it. No crooked lines, just one continuous straight one. I stared at Gwen's now, completely lifeless body.
Then I knew, she was gone.
I need some help I want to make another makala and I need ideas so if wewe have any put the suggestion in the maoni and I might just add wewe into the story for the juu 3 suggestions not really meaning the fist three commenters just the 3 best maoni yeah just three so quickly hurry and state what character what scenes and what part would wewe like to be ( the helper the saver ect. ) so maoni maoni maoni and if wewe have a great idea but I have written another story still put it down in the maoni and wewe will still get credit bye spand don't forget to comment!