the old group
Every girl walked over to the dinning hall,surprised to see Andrea and izzy not there.They turned around and saw us."For your first challenge wewe will have to dive off a huge cliff,and land into the inner ring in the water,just like total drama island.Then,we will tell wewe what's next.Oh ya,you have 5 dakika to eat this "delicious" 'food" chef made while me and Izzy get to eat gormet food."Andrea and Izzy walked away.
Brooke looked down and said"I don't even think that's eatable.""Mine...just...moved."Said Vanessa.
At the Gopher table: "Hey,Ronnie.Do wewe wanna be ina alince?I promise wewe a spot at the final two!"Juno whispered."Uh,sure."Ronnie replied."ARE wewe gonna eat that???"Miranda said."No,i don't feel like dying today." alisema Fire."Suit yourself.This is good.No wonder Owen ate evreything!"
When both teams got to the top,They just ran off the cliff:
People who jumped for the Killer Bass:Brooke,Vanessa,Izzy
People who jumped for the Screaming Gophers:Ronnie,Sumer,Juno and Fire.
"Ok so the winning team is...THE SCREAMING GOPHERS!!Oh ya,we're cutting the onyesha short so everyone on the Killer bass, besi go vote someone off."
In Confessinals
Juno:I'm still freakin mad about Miranda not jumping,and i'm still mad at Sumer for lying about Duncan.I geuss the only one i can trust is Ronnie.
Ella-Fant:People hate me cuase i'm in upendo with Justin and i make out with my kitanda and i have used justin klenex and i have a bunch of justin posters and i liked to be called justin some times and ...
Vanessa:It would have to be obvious who i;m voting for.
THE DRAMATIC CAMP moto CEREMONY
"Ok,since your al tired from your first day,i'll just toss 'em to ya.Izzy,Nikki,Vanessa,Brooke.Marshmellows for the lotta ya.Bye-Bye Ella-Fant.Your srsly creepy.
END OF EPISODE 1
The new Group
Martha Stewart
Duncans POV:
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Did wewe want some thing princess?
Courtneys POV:
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YEs Duncan I dont know how to tell wewe this but...... Im pregnent but...... its not your baby.
Duncans POV:
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Whos is it I mean who would do this to you?
Courtneys POV:
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Its.............I cant tell wewe its to painfull he raped me a I was powerless Im so sorry Duncan please forgive me it was a mistake.....
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Did wewe want some thing princess?
Courtneys POV:
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YEs Duncan I dont know how to tell wewe this but...... Im pregnent but...... its not your baby.
Duncans POV:
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Whos is it I mean who would do this to you?
Courtneys POV:
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Its.............I cant tell wewe its to painfull he raped me a I was powerless Im so sorry Duncan please forgive me it was a mistake.....
need christmas ideas and co-writer!!!
Left-Suzie, Right-BRITNEY
Hello everyone. I'm going to rewrite TDR because i don't like how they are adding so many new characters. well anyways since we don't know where TDR will take place i decided to have it take place at a Roller coaster/fair/circus type thing called Mclain Land. The returning cast will be
Heather
Alejandro
Cody
Zeke
Dj
Izzy
Gwen
Tyler
Owen
Trent
Duncan
Bridgette
Geoff
Lindsay
Noah
Sierra
Beth
Courtney
LeShawna
and 2 new "Campers"
also i will need a very good artist to draw pics for this story. so if wewe can draw (and i mean VERY VERY well then please maoni with some of your work) also i might need a few people to come up with some dialgue, so if wewe like to write maoni me about that. And this is not a post your OC thing, and i dont need challenge ideas i already came up with them. Thank wewe and i would like an artist as soon as possible and i would upendo it if one of wewe could get a hold of Escorte on deviantart! THANK wewe SOOOO MUCH!
Heather
Alejandro
Cody
Zeke
Dj
Izzy
Gwen
Tyler
Owen
Trent
Duncan
Bridgette
Geoff
Lindsay
Noah
Sierra
Beth
Courtney
LeShawna
and 2 new "Campers"
also i will need a very good artist to draw pics for this story. so if wewe can draw (and i mean VERY VERY well then please maoni with some of your work) also i might need a few people to come up with some dialgue, so if wewe like to write maoni me about that. And this is not a post your OC thing, and i dont need challenge ideas i already came up with them. Thank wewe and i would like an artist as soon as possible and i would upendo it if one of wewe could get a hold of Escorte on deviantart! THANK wewe SOOOO MUCH!
(at the grave yared)
chirs:frist bone go's toooo jakki andrea mallory
samantha samantha rollings sara ashley suna dustin rose lynn anacpriana sara kristing amy kenya the last one go's to blaze im sorry chelsea
chelsea:thats ok
tak:bye chelsea (and gives her a hug)
chelsea:bye tak
(after the show)
lucas:i have no idea wewe sing good
tak:thanxs
chirs:will tak and lucas be zaidi than friends
both:HEY
chirs:and will everyone die on this onyesha find out inayofuata time on total drama goth vs emo
chirs:frist bone go's toooo jakki andrea mallory
samantha samantha rollings sara ashley suna dustin rose lynn anacpriana sara kristing amy kenya the last one go's to blaze im sorry chelsea
chelsea:thats ok
tak:bye chelsea (and gives her a hug)
chelsea:bye tak
(after the show)
lucas:i have no idea wewe sing good
tak:thanxs
chirs:will tak and lucas be zaidi than friends
both:HEY
chirs:and will everyone die on this onyesha find out inayofuata time on total drama goth vs emo
The End
I loved Total Drama Island when it first came on "Cartoon Network", I loved how everyone had a unique personality, how Chris was cruel to the campers, and I thought the onyesha had good character and relationship development.
But then, Total Drama Action premered, and I was not that Impressed. Any character development that had occured, was erased from the onyesha all together, The contestants became annoying as hell(especially Geoff and Trent), And all the good couples were destroyed(but I don't like the GwenXTrent couple at all). The Geoff and Bridget couple was just awful, she needs to ditch him and go with DJ, and I thought that "Teletoon" and "Fresh Tv" had decided to get rid of any words like crap and screwed so there wouldn't be so many edits.
I wont even mention the abomonation that is Total Drama World Tour. They shouldn't sing at all. But I will say one thing about the two new contestants, they were created to annoy the hell out of everyone.
But then, Total Drama Action premered, and I was not that Impressed. Any character development that had occured, was erased from the onyesha all together, The contestants became annoying as hell(especially Geoff and Trent), And all the good couples were destroyed(but I don't like the GwenXTrent couple at all). The Geoff and Bridget couple was just awful, she needs to ditch him and go with DJ, and I thought that "Teletoon" and "Fresh Tv" had decided to get rid of any words like crap and screwed so there wouldn't be so many edits.
I wont even mention the abomonation that is Total Drama World Tour. They shouldn't sing at all. But I will say one thing about the two new contestants, they were created to annoy the hell out of everyone.
