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Mafuatano ya Twilight Swali

hi guys just being really brave here coz i dont usually do this but would u plz read a poem i wrote? it was inspired kwa twilight saga :)

my friend Twilight_lover encoraged me 2 put my poem up here! plz tell me wot u really think i want to b told the truth coz i upendo uandishi and i want to improve it thx :

upendo is the closest thing we have to magic
But It can be hurtful and painful too
it lies in those whos hearts are cold
it glows in those who are true.

wewe can find it in the least expected places,
It can kill to let upendo go
It can comfort those who are in need of help
It can fight and take over woe

upendo is something that never dies,
It stays in the hearts of the gone,
upendo is a candle that never goes out,
No one knows where its from

upendo is the glue that holds us together,
It is the thing that makes us smile
Without knowing, we rely on love
zaidi then anyone would know

It can kill those who turn against it,
It can take over those who don’t
It can bring tears and laughter and cries of pain
But die is what it wont

People hurt for those that leave
upendo finds the one who another needs
They need the ones they can’t live without
It can cause hearts to bleed


Sometimes upendo burns
To an extent that we can’t bear
upendo is an emotion,
something we can to share

Maybe wewe don’t upendo the one who loves you,
But even if your moyo is full of hate
upendo comes first before anything
It burns on after fate

upendo can bring back life to those
Who have Lost meaning and hope
So I belive upendo is good,
It warms the ones grey and cold who havn’t the strength to cope

upendo is goodbye, but also a welcome
A bird that flies there, free
upendo is something wewe can’t buy,
Whatever the price may be.

To watch a face twist up in pain,
upendo is how wewe sooth
upendo is calm but also wild,
muziki that makes wewe move

Peaceful is what upendo is,
a flutter in the air
upendo is sometimes peaceful
upendo isn’t fair

A palm on an island,
a petal on a rose
upendo never stops growing
we don’t know how big upendo grows.


upendo is the closest thing we have to magic
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sorry guys couldnt fit the rest in it was 2 long but the ending sentence was the first verse of the poem :) thx for kusoma it
Elzybells posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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thanx i luv this poem girl this rock.
blacke posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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wow great poem better than some pro work can i add u as a friend?
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Mafuatano ya Twilight Majibu

ABDCFan- said:
This poem is awesomeeee! (:
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thx!! that means alot
Elzybells posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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o and btw ur reveiw is awesomeeee! aswell ;) lol
Elzybells posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
Hellohoudini said:
Beautiful and moving! Dont be afraid to post more..
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thanks that is really really nice it means loads to me thank u xx
Elzybells posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
countrygirl2008 said:
wow that was very touching . wewe have a natural talent.!
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:::::DDDD lol thank u thank u!!!! thats really nice it means alot
Elzybells posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
ScottishChic said:
THAT WAS AN IMMENSE POEM!!!!!!!!
how'd u get so good at uandishi them??? *jealous*

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wow thx that really nice :)
Elzybells posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
twifan2010 said:
WOW, AMAZING! Could u give me some tips on how u can write poems like that, cause I really like uandishi n would like to do some more! :)
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thx ye i will x :)
Elzybells posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
loverofedward said:
hujambo there ur poem is really awesome u knw .I guess u must b in luv too dats y u wrote dis poem.U did include dat suggestions r welcome so i just felt dat ur line "love isnt fair" is incorrect as i think luv is always fair au maybe u cld xplain wat did u meant kwa it.
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kk thx and btw im not in love!!! lol thx tho
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