Ok this is my first makala ever on here so go easy on me.
For my first makala I dacided to review Breaking Dawn since I have strong opinions on the book andso do most of wewe guys.sooo without further au do....
"Breaking Dawn Review"
Good Things:
1.)Personally I thought the wedding was beautifully portrayed and the way I imagined it and Bella finally stopped whining about Jacob long enough tosay "I Do" to Edward.
2.)I like how Stephenie Meyer gave a surprise withthe whole Renesmee thing.I also like how she made it lead up to think that Ness was going to be a boy.
3.)The book was well written and very descriptive and informative.She settled it down to three vitabu finally changing it form Bellas POV to Jacobs.
4.)The Humor:) Ilaughed like crazy in this book.
5.)The Cullens.It seemed they became closer and zaidi like a family then a clan in this book.
Bad Things:
1.)Personally Im Switzerland but i mean seriously does it seem Bella mourns over the Jake situation a little to much and a little toooo long???
2.)I really would of preferred Edwards POV instead of Jakes. Is it just me au does it seem Edward barely shows his face in this book.
3.)I upendo fluff so I would have prefered zaidi Daddy/Daughter moments between Edward and Renesmee.He held her 3 times in the whole book andhes her dad!!!
4.)The Ending.It wasnt the best way to end a saga.
5.)The Nahuel Situation.Well I liked Renesmee being unique and not like anyone else so there are 4 of her species on earth!!!
Characters At There Best:
Edward
Alice
Jacob
Emmett
Rosalie
Esme
Renesmee
Characters At There Worst:
Bella
Jasper
Carlisle
Renee
Charlie
Over all 3.5 out of 5 stars
-Thx for reading:)
For my first makala I dacided to review Breaking Dawn since I have strong opinions on the book andso do most of wewe guys.sooo without further au do....
"Breaking Dawn Review"
Good Things:
1.)Personally I thought the wedding was beautifully portrayed and the way I imagined it and Bella finally stopped whining about Jacob long enough tosay "I Do" to Edward.
2.)I like how Stephenie Meyer gave a surprise withthe whole Renesmee thing.I also like how she made it lead up to think that Ness was going to be a boy.
3.)The book was well written and very descriptive and informative.She settled it down to three vitabu finally changing it form Bellas POV to Jacobs.
4.)The Humor:) Ilaughed like crazy in this book.
5.)The Cullens.It seemed they became closer and zaidi like a family then a clan in this book.
Bad Things:
1.)Personally Im Switzerland but i mean seriously does it seem Bella mourns over the Jake situation a little to much and a little toooo long???
2.)I really would of preferred Edwards POV instead of Jakes. Is it just me au does it seem Edward barely shows his face in this book.
3.)I upendo fluff so I would have prefered zaidi Daddy/Daughter moments between Edward and Renesmee.He held her 3 times in the whole book andhes her dad!!!
4.)The Ending.It wasnt the best way to end a saga.
5.)The Nahuel Situation.Well I liked Renesmee being unique and not like anyone else so there are 4 of her species on earth!!!
Characters At There Best:
Edward
Alice
Jacob
Emmett
Rosalie
Esme
Renesmee
Characters At There Worst:
Bella
Jasper
Carlisle
Renee
Charlie
Over all 3.5 out of 5 stars
-Thx for reading:)
I have all the Twilight books, but I Lost Eclipse and really want to read it. Does anybody know a website wewe can read the whole book on? I've been dying to read past the first chapter wewe get from New Moon. It sucks I really want to read it, and I can't do that. Please help me with this. From a shabiki to a fan. wewe know how great the book is so help me, a person who wants to read it. Please just find the website and post it to me. Thank wewe so much! I hope wewe already know one, au can easily find one. Thank you!!
Golden brown eyes, like hardened syrup in a pool like shape of a continuance lifetime of some burdened sadness.
Lifeless he is, like a beautiful statue, numb to the world around him.
Only the silent whispers of feeble minds he hears.
The red seductive toxin running through their veins, of which he hungers for… his ‘own personal brand of heroin’.
His thirst for normality is torturous to his eternal, tormented soul.
A secret torture for this masochistic lion,
This old face holds many secrets, some unable to tell but all not forgotten.
Lifeless he is, like a beautiful statue, numb to the world around him.
Only the silent whispers of feeble minds he hears.
The red seductive toxin running through their veins, of which he hungers for… his ‘own personal brand of heroin’.
His thirst for normality is torturous to his eternal, tormented soul.
A secret torture for this masochistic lion,
This old face holds many secrets, some unable to tell but all not forgotten.
Danie turned into a blob of apple sauce, then shape-shifted back into a human. "There" She said.
"Hey Erin! So I see wewe got my text."
"Yeah! Congrats! wewe have to tell me all about this Parick."
"No, wewe tell me about wewe being part of the Volturi."
"How did wewe know?"
"Well me being a vamp and everything, I get one power which is shape-shifting."
"What does that have to do with it?"
"Oh nothing I just needed to tell you."
"Ok, how did wewe find out?"
"Your friend Alice told me."
"Oh,ok. Yeah, so wewe know my dad is Aro and my little sister is Jane."
"I didn't even know that!" Alice said."Why didn't wewe tell me?"
"I wasn't ready to yet."
"Erin, wewe are my best friend; I tell wewe everything, wewe should tell me the same."
"Ok,sorry."
"It's fine. Now come on, let's go shopping for your friend's big day."
"Ok, let's go."
Two hours later, Alice, Erin, and Danie were still roaming around when they found the "perfect dress".
"Hey Erin! So I see wewe got my text."
"Yeah! Congrats! wewe have to tell me all about this Parick."
"No, wewe tell me about wewe being part of the Volturi."
"How did wewe know?"
"Well me being a vamp and everything, I get one power which is shape-shifting."
"What does that have to do with it?"
"Oh nothing I just needed to tell you."
"Ok, how did wewe find out?"
"Your friend Alice told me."
"Oh,ok. Yeah, so wewe know my dad is Aro and my little sister is Jane."
"I didn't even know that!" Alice said."Why didn't wewe tell me?"
"I wasn't ready to yet."
"Erin, wewe are my best friend; I tell wewe everything, wewe should tell me the same."
"Ok,sorry."
"It's fine. Now come on, let's go shopping for your friend's big day."
"Ok, let's go."
Two hours later, Alice, Erin, and Danie were still roaming around when they found the "perfect dress".
1.Erin is part of the Volturi, but she is half human-Spoiler!
2.not everything will be exactly like the books,it will be dramatized a little.
3.Erin is my best friend in real life, so I try to make her as realistic as possible.
4.This one is zaidi about me:I don't like cussing in my stories because I don't cuss a lot in real life, but it makes my stories funnier,agree?
5.We might make a movie out of this when we are done-Spoiler!
6.Erin was telling me about one of her friends, Danie, and she might be in a few chapters-Spoiler!
7.Erin tries to kill Alice later in the story-Spoiler!
EDward took off his shirt.His abs were hawt.I then went under the covers.I then felt his cool skin agaisnt mine.
U sure Soph
yes
I felt it the sex of course
I then felt my neck being nibbled
Edward! damn that hurt
I the nsaw it wasn't edward
J-J-J James.
Oh don't worry upendo wewe will be one of us
No where the hell is edward
well the volturi is dealing with the Cullens
I will kill you
Just give up wewe know tat it will spread
It's burns STOP IT IT BURNS.I then felt my death.
My moyo beat sronger than usual.I felt sclience.
ALl in my moyo was vengence on James on The Volturi Adn on the werewolves!....
U sure Soph
yes
I felt it the sex of course
I then felt my neck being nibbled
Edward! damn that hurt
I the nsaw it wasn't edward
J-J-J James.
Oh don't worry upendo wewe will be one of us
No where the hell is edward
well the volturi is dealing with the Cullens
I will kill you
Just give up wewe know tat it will spread
It's burns STOP IT IT BURNS.I then felt my death.
My moyo beat sronger than usual.I felt sclience.
ALl in my moyo was vengence on James on The Volturi Adn on the werewolves!....
ok, i know she loves both but its probably ovious who she loves more, but im not sure is it edward au jacob.
i think that if she chooses edward like she did in eclipse, there will be pain for not being with jake, but she already went through not being with edward and it almost killed her, and at the end of elcipse she had pain but it wasnt as bad. like she alisema when edward asked her,
" are wewe sure wewe made the right choice, i have never seen wewe in so much pain"
and she says "I have known worse pain"
does that mean, the worse pain was when edward left her
does anyone get what im trying to ask, if not ill try to explain better
i think that if she chooses edward like she did in eclipse, there will be pain for not being with jake, but she already went through not being with edward and it almost killed her, and at the end of elcipse she had pain but it wasnt as bad. like she alisema when edward asked her,
" are wewe sure wewe made the right choice, i have never seen wewe in so much pain"
and she says "I have known worse pain"
does that mean, the worse pain was when edward left her
does anyone get what im trying to ask, if not ill try to explain better