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First off, sorry for the title. Haha I didn't have a snazzy title, so I just made it original.

Now, I would like to point out... I actually liked this trailer! Most of wewe had probably seen me griping about the awali New Moon trailers saying as how they do not portray the books. (well, the first and sekunde New Moon trailers didn't anyways)

But, I really liked this trailer. Of course I have to critique it, so there are positives and negatives, but overall, I'm a happy sailor... for now. :P

Enough of the introduction, onto the review!

I'm going to start off with the over all look of the trailer.

-The cinematography is beautiful! Even zaidi so than New Moon! The contrast between cool tones and warm tones. Spectacular!

-I liked how they did the Summit Logo. I thought it looked "neat" as in clean. It was simple, but it looks nice and polished. I don't know if I'm making sense. lol

-I upendo that they are keeping the same themes throughout the trailers of each movie. They always have a shot of the landscape.

Now, to the footage! I'll start with positives first.

Positives:
-I liked the balance. In New Moon, we saw a trailer with almost all Jacob, which I thought was unfair since we didn't have a "Meet Bella Swan" au "Meet Edward Cullen". But in this one, it wasn't centered on one character. However, i'll maoni later on the center-focus of this trailer...

-The meadow, I thought was beautiful. In Twilight, the meadow was lacking...to put it nicely. But, this meadow, was perfect.

-The make up, judging from this trailer, looked way better. Edward actually looks 17! The Bella wig... I don't find anything wrong with it. I've heard some complaints about it, but I don't really see the big deal.

Negatives:
-The trailer was focused on the "love triangle". I like how at the end of New Moon, Bella chooses Edward. The audience, who haven't read the books, will be wondering what's going on when they see this trailer. I think the main reason why they focused on the "love triangle" was to lure people in out of curiousty, au to "tease" since this is a "tease"er trailer. However, I hope that is not the center-focus of the movie. We all know Summit likes to pimp the "love triangle" as seen in New Moon, when there should NOT be one. The "love triangle" in the vitabu didn't even happen til after Chapter 22. Hopefully, for the 2nd teaser and the final trailer, they will touch on everything such as the vampire army for the sekunde teaser then maybe a little bit of everything on the third and final trailer :)

-Sorry, but the panning to Jacob shirtless? That was SO unecessary. This is again, completely transparent to what Summit is trying to do. What did that give to the trailer? NOTHING. They put that in there out of spite. The series is not about the shirtless guys Summit! No matter how much money wewe rake in. Completely unnecessary.

Now to the dialog:

For the mostpart, I thought the voiceovers were pretty good.

The lines were a little dramatic, but I think that's what Summit was trying to do here. They were going for a dramtic feel. However, I will say this. And this is going to be critical about Jacob's lines.

In the trailer, wewe see soft-spoken Jacob. But, as most of wewe know, he can be a jerk sometimes. Who isn't? I hope they portray that rough side to him and not just make him look like this sensitive guy.

Same thing with Edward. wewe see him a little angry in the books. I would like to see a little spark of anger with him. Also, in the books, he has some light moments. Alot actually. People just forget about them because of the movies. But, I hope Summit puts his light moments in there too. Give him some fluff!

Bella, they do a pretty good job with her. However, the script, there are inconsistencies, so I can't judge her yet. From the looks of it, they changed the script a little. I don't remember some of the lines from the trailer that were in the script.

And, since this is kind of a touchy subject, I'm going to post a paragraph about Bryce Dallas Howard as Victoria:
-When they showed Bryce Dallas Howard as Victoria, I have to say, I'm still uchungu, chungu about Summit replacing Rachelle Lefevre. wewe can tell that it's a different person. However, the wig isn't as bad as everyone is making it out to be. Well, not to me anyways. I can't judge her uigizaji since she had no lines, but from the looks of it, the new Victoria isn't bad, but it's not Rachelle. We can't write off Bryce just yet :)

So, this is my review! Like, I said, I was ujumla, jumla pleased. this is probably the first time I am.

maoni would be lovely. I upendo hearing what wewe guys have to say. :)
posted by karpach_14
 nessies
nessies
Chapter 19
Ivan opened his eyes a little and then a little zaidi until he opened ham all the way.
“nessie?” he alisema quietly. He remembers me. I looked at him and he had a smile on his face and then I tried to put up a smile too but I failed miserably.
“ivan , how did u get in an accident?” I asked him. Eager to know.
“when I left the reservation I was driving back nyumbani but then I remembered your face how wewe looked at me before wewe left so I turned around and started driving back to the reservation but then a car came out of nowhere and that’s all I remember” he told me.
“the good...
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posted by karpach_14
 nessies outfit
nessies outfit
"hi guys, whacha talking about?" i asked them. they turned toward me and Jake smiled. he was kwa my side in a sec. he grabbed me and swang me aroung.
"Y havent u visited me for so long?" jake asked playfully.
"family problems" i answered. before Jake au anyone else could say something, Eric comes out of the woods.
"what are wewe doing here?" jake asks Eric with a tilt of anger in his voice.
"can't i see my imprintee?" he asked jake. seth embry, jared, paul, quil, and sam widend their eyes.
"whats wrong ?" i asked sam.
"only one person can imprnt on you, if there's two they have to fight, and only...
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3

I woke up at 6 am,it was Saturday.I had planned to go to the mall with Elizabeth and Sophie today.I found these normal things in my life strange since I had become a werewolf.Out of place.But it was nice to go out once in awhile since the vampire hype lately.Jay had been training us for nights on end.Training us for what was coming.He kept repeating the same thing,
“Watch each others backs”
“Look out for each other”
“Work as a team”
It was good my little brother,Michel had just joined us,the zaidi the better.Because we all new that we needed as many people possible to do this.

I was...
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posted by GothicGirl0525
Chapter 3

    Later that night when everyone was getting ready to go nyumbani I started to pick up everything around the club I rented out. I was so excited for Alice and her bothers. It took a lot of planning on my part but I did it. Today was Alice 22nd birthday and she hasn’t seen her mother, Esme Cullen au father, Carlisle Cullen in a very long time. So I thought that I would pay for them to come out from Forks, Washington and visit. At first Mr. and Mrs. Cullen wouldn’t allow me to pay for them to fly all the to New York City but I instated that they come and I won by...
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posted by uniquezandy
Bellas POV
It's the middle of the night, and I keep tossing and turning. Why though? Back in Phoenix ; I never had bad dreams. But coming to Forks, makes everything a living nightmere. A vivid; nightmere. The dream... it looks so real. I am running to reach something, au someone, but the person keeps disappearing when I reach her, au him. Just like that the mysterious stranger runs, and in a blink of an eye, he's gone. I don't realise, but I'm screaming in agonising pain. Also, I feel someone is watching me. It can't be Charlie. Then who is it? I am in too much pain from the dream to notice,...
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posted by uniquezandy
"Well we are here!" Esme alisema with delight. It wasn't as fancy as the house back in Forks, but it gave them a personailty. "Last box packed already." Carlise informed and he went over to kiss Esme. It was so sweet and they both shared delight; so the might use it. wewe see, the Cullens, (and Bella, still human, but a part of their family,) had to songesha again. This time; it's a quiet town known as Mystic Falls. As they were wondering around, Alice had a moment. "Oh my god. It can't be." Everyone was wondering, so they surronded Alice to get the whole story. "There are others, in this town who...
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posted by LexisFaith
hujambo guys! An idea for wewe all! Take one of my articles, and make your own one page story (a one shot) from it. No certin length, doesn't have to end pretty, and it doesn't matter which one wewe choose. It can even be one's that I have already ended.

Rules...

It needs to be put on my Lexis Faith makala page. That way everyone's is in one spot.

It has to be one of my stories but with YOUR twist.

It must be done and added kwa October 16. No late makala will be judged.

Jessica (JessElizabeth) my best friend will be helping me judge. Yes I know her personally, we go to school together and have been...
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Hello female mashabiki of the Twilight book series! We are inviting wewe to take part in an online study that investigates your general attitudes and beliefs about the characters in the book and about your own life and relationships. The survey will take about 20-30 dakika to complete. To participate, wewe must meet the following requirements:
    
1. wewe are female
2. wewe are currently romantically attached (i.e. wewe are dating someone, in a relationship, au married).
3. wewe have read all four Twilight series vitabu at least once.
4. wewe have proficiency in the English language.

If...
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posted by NeeNee14
I got nyumbani and changed into a pair of shorts and a tank top. I went outside and sat on the porch, listening to the city sounds of Seattle.

I was thinking about Ryan, I have known him for over a mwezi now and I really like him, I feel...complete when he's around.He makes me smile.....I heard a car pull up in front of my house and I saw a big guy, with a ski mask on his face get out and come towards me. I tried to get up and run, but he was too fast. I tried to scream and fight back, but he hit me in the face and everything went black.

I opened my eyes. I could hear the buzzing of the dim lights...
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posted by karpach_13
Chapter 20
Damn when I start uandishi a story I cant stop. Please tell me when to stop..
“ivan!” I yelled in happiness. I gave him a long kiss. Ryan was walking kwa with his friends.
“dude I think ou’re out look at them” ryan’s firnd said.
“don’t worry I’ll be with her.” Ryan told him. I pulled away from Ivan.
“how did wewe some here?” I asked him.
“you alisema you’re grandfather would be looking after me so he took me with him” he told him.
“im sohappy right now” I told him and hugged him tightly.
“its about time, wewe make everyone happy and wewe don’t care if wewe get...
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posted by karpach_13
Chapter 13

I introduce them.
“nice to meet you” my father said.
“niced to meet wewe too” ivan replied.i wondered if he knew that ivan was a vampire. But there would be no guessing.. my father didn’t know that I lovve ivan.. so its going to be a shock to him .eric went to the cafeteria and then s couple secconds later the kengele rang.ivan hurried to class, while I stood there with my father and aunt.
“dad ivAN IS COMING TODAY TO MEET MY FAMILY”I TOLD HIM AND BEFORE HE COULD SAY anything aunt alice grabbed to to class. After school aunt alice rode in her car and me ivan and eric rode...
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Hello, My Name Is: Death
Volume Six
BuffyFaithfan1
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[SEVEN]
    To beat the odds is to overcome a loss, au the loss of something that challenged you. When I was younger, beating the newest level on a video game after losing 20 times in a row, had me overcome the losses that were in my way so I could songesha on to the end. Every year, that loss grows, and as wewe enter the new level of your life every mwaka once you've reached the new aging mark of your life, wewe start to face challenges that are about to come into your way. Such as high school, or...
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Hello, My Name Is: Death
Volume Six
BuffyFaithfan1
_______________________________
[FOUR]
    Have wewe ever thought of a reason to stay inside for the day? Was it because wewe felt sick, au was it because wewe were just too lazy to throw your legs over the side of the bed, get up, and start the day? Whichever answer wewe choose, if it's wewe feeling sick, au wewe being to lazy, au because of a different reason, then tell me this: what have wewe done that siku to feel good about yourself? Did wewe clean your house because your family/guests are coming over? Did wewe get up to make breakfast...
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posted by mia1emmett
>>if wewe see car-- that means i forgot how to spell dr.cullens name :/ not a very good twilight shabiki i know :(
            Chapter 5
As I was walking down my stairs I saw a jeep pull up in front of my
House. When Emmett poked his head out he alisema "Ella come on" I got in to
Find rose Alice jasper and Emmett all in the car I smiled to everyone.
Then I felt something sharp as if it was hitting me in the gut. I alisema
"Thank wewe guys wewe didn't have to pick me up. I know me finding my
Brother isn't something that wewe guys should be doing...
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Chapter Three:
Alice’s P.O.V:
As we pulled into the little hut we would be staying in we heard Bella whine. “Can’t we go to a hotel?” I shook my head, “No, Bella. We’re staying somewhere private!” She finally gave up whenever she saw her room. “Nice!” It was bigger than the outside appeared and on the side of the beach. The wooden frame was painted a light green that sparked in the light. The jikoni was well kept with a cherry wood meza, jedwali and a glass vase full of daisies on the table-top. My room was painted a very light pink like a powder room and had a Queen sized bed. It...
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posted by KatiiCullen94
Waking up was the hardest part,afraid wheither i had just just had the biggest and worst dream, i diddnt want to admitt it to my moyo that my head beleived it real. kwa now, ,my moyo had a mind of it's own, and my brain was its best friend, looking out for it, but kept the harsh truth to itself. But isnt that where friendships go wrong?

I found myself in a foriegn room, with no real decor, just a room, but it appeared to had held secrets, secrets that solved the majibu behind the holes in the walls, and the windows bolted shut and writings of deleicate scribble on the walls.
The scribbe startled...
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This is dedicated to kstewrox who has aliyopewa me ideas for this story thank wewe so much!!!
♥♥NeeNee14♥♥


These past couple of months have been fantastic, I quit going to ballet practice since I was to advanced for the classes. Me and Seth were closer than ever, both volitionally and physically. School was out.
I went to the store in Port Angeles with Nessie and Kim. We walked into The CVS because the needed "Girl" things. I was walking with them, when I realized I hadn't had my Period in two months. I stopped and sat on the floor. Kim and Ness came up to, tears streaming down my face.
"Lanise...
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posted by groovychicklisa
My nerves started uigizaji up during the week that followed. Though Doctor Jamieson had told me that most first time mothers went over the due date, I still analyzed every feeling. I had experienced some Braxton Hicks contractions over the past mwezi au so, but Doctor Jamieson had assured me that I would know when the real thing started.

May eleventh came – and went – and still no baby.

"The doctor did say to expect this." Charlie pointed out that Friday, three days after my due date.

"I know." I grumbled, rubbing my back. "I was just hoping that I had passed on my punctuality."

"You weren't...
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hujambo everyone,
I'm sorry I haven't written in a while.
My family and I went camping for the fourth of July. We have been gone since Friday and just got back today.
I was camping, boating, and tubing, so I am fried and crispy lol.
I am going to write another Ever After a little later. Sorry for the wait!!!
Thank wewe for all who read and upendo my articles!

~Alexis

ps. I'm not so sure I am going to continue my Happiness article. I think I'm going to try another one about Edward and Bella and see if I like that one better. Hope wewe all don't mind.
I ran all the way back to Jake's. I knocked on the door until someone came to the door. It was Billy.
"Hey Billy. Is Jake home?'I asked.
"He's in his room Nessie."He alisema back. Billy moved out of my way so I could come in. I knocked on Jacob's door.
"Come in" He said. I opened his door. He looked at me and took in my red-rimmed eyes.
"Ness, what's wrong?" He asked. I sat down inayofuata to him and put my hand on his cheek to onyesha him what happened. When it was over he hugged me and rubbed my back.
"Do wewe wanna stay here for tonight?" He asked me after I calmed down. I shook my head yes.
Later that night...
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