this is my first fanfiction and it probley aint that good so could wewe please comment
chapter one
the sun was shining through the window, i felt the heat on my back, i rapped my arms around edward we both knew we had to get up not that we wanted to. i sighed and started to get up when i felt a strong arm pull be back down on the kitanda "were do wewe think your going" he wispered as he kissed my neck.i kissed him and sighed "we have to get up" he started to shake his head and kissed me again "edward we really have to get up,nessie is gonna be awake soon" he ignored me and carried on kissing me just under my jaw, i gave in then and wrapped my arms back around his neck and started kissing him so passionatley that this time he was the one to remind me that we had to get up that our little girl was waking up in the inayofuata room and as always he reminded me with one word "nessie" he crowed in my ear. i was up and out of his arms in a second, nessie wasnt exactly a little girl anymore she is technacally seven years old but phisically she looks sixteen years of age,she is really smart and spends all her spear time studying of with jacob.me and edward were in our over sized wardrobe when i heard my best friend and favirote mbwa mwitu running to our door,he would knock in exactly two seconds,i sighed and put my blue v-neck jumper on the walked to the door.he didnt even say high he just rushed past me still in mbwa mwitu form into nessies room i ran after him what has him so worried "jake,jake" i asked i was worried now. in the living room i heard edward answer the door again i got a wiff of the scent and realised it was alice, i heard edward growl from hearing her thoughts . i turned back to jake wanting majibu he was in his human form now he sat down on the side of nessie's kitanda and started to stroke her hair i waited for him to tell me what's going on,he looked up at me and alisema two words that made me frezze into place "the volturi"
chapter one
the sun was shining through the window, i felt the heat on my back, i rapped my arms around edward we both knew we had to get up not that we wanted to. i sighed and started to get up when i felt a strong arm pull be back down on the kitanda "were do wewe think your going" he wispered as he kissed my neck.i kissed him and sighed "we have to get up" he started to shake his head and kissed me again "edward we really have to get up,nessie is gonna be awake soon" he ignored me and carried on kissing me just under my jaw, i gave in then and wrapped my arms back around his neck and started kissing him so passionatley that this time he was the one to remind me that we had to get up that our little girl was waking up in the inayofuata room and as always he reminded me with one word "nessie" he crowed in my ear. i was up and out of his arms in a second, nessie wasnt exactly a little girl anymore she is technacally seven years old but phisically she looks sixteen years of age,she is really smart and spends all her spear time studying of with jacob.me and edward were in our over sized wardrobe when i heard my best friend and favirote mbwa mwitu running to our door,he would knock in exactly two seconds,i sighed and put my blue v-neck jumper on the walked to the door.he didnt even say high he just rushed past me still in mbwa mwitu form into nessies room i ran after him what has him so worried "jake,jake" i asked i was worried now. in the living room i heard edward answer the door again i got a wiff of the scent and realised it was alice, i heard edward growl from hearing her thoughts . i turned back to jake wanting majibu he was in his human form now he sat down on the side of nessie's kitanda and started to stroke her hair i waited for him to tell me what's going on,he looked up at me and alisema two words that made me frezze into place "the volturi"
Okay beacause I am a huge Twilight shabiki I have joined this club. I fell in upendo after the first 3 chapters of Tiwilight and I am still in the process of kusoma the books. If wewe could please at least say in the beginning of your makala that it is concerning X books. That would help me out soooo much because I only have a limited amount of time I can read because of school and homework. The mentioning of things that I have not read yet is making me want to read the vitabu so much zaidi and it has caused me to get in trouble at school for kusoma when I shouldn't be. Thank wewe so VERY much.
okay so we all know that edward is the best charcter in twilight. why? because of how loving he is. He treats bella like if she were dhahabu and his biggest treasure.Many of us wish to have a boyfriend au girlfriend like edward. It makes someone really happy to be loved so greatly.
Edward is amazing. That is why he is the best character of twilight because he really shows how much hes in upendo and protects bella through alot of troubles. Another reason why we would upendo edward would be because he is so hot!! hes the best looking in the movie! He is so GOOD looking...We all think that right? Cuz its so true!! hes awesome!!
okay so i havent read any of the vitabu yet...but im judging from all the previews ive seen of the movie. Dont worry, ima read the book this week...ima go buy it at the store to read it! im so excited...!!!!! >.<
thank wewe for taking your time to read this (if u did read it...) please maoni of wat u think of my article...=þ
Edward is amazing. That is why he is the best character of twilight because he really shows how much hes in upendo and protects bella through alot of troubles. Another reason why we would upendo edward would be because he is so hot!! hes the best looking in the movie! He is so GOOD looking...We all think that right? Cuz its so true!! hes awesome!!
okay so i havent read any of the vitabu yet...but im judging from all the previews ive seen of the movie. Dont worry, ima read the book this week...ima go buy it at the store to read it! im so excited...!!!!! >.<
thank wewe for taking your time to read this (if u did read it...) please maoni of wat u think of my article...=þ
YOu know what my friend Adriana I got her this awesome Chritmas preasent it is a Twilight shrit that I got a the Willowbrick Mall (Also Adriana is obsesed with Twlight)
thanks for kusoma im really new at this as some of guys can tell