I am a budding screenplay writer and wanted to write a script for New Moon. For lots of reasons. Mainly, to satisfy myself in case the real movie is not what I think it should be
I post frequently over in livejournal at the lion_lamb community and have ilitumwa it over there too.
here are viungo to my screenplay
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This screenplay has some things different from New Moon. wewe will recognize many scenes I kept. wewe will notice some things that I have combined. wewe will also notice stuff of my own. This is all typical with any adaptation.
There are also hints of Eclipse in here and set ups for it. wewe will notice them.
This is my sekunde draft, so it’s not finalized. There will be typos and such. I plan on getting this to a third au possible fourth draft, but I want to get opinions and see if I should go any further with this.
Some of the stuff was necessary in the screenplay. One scene in general I really wanted to get rid of, but my brain couldn't come up with anything else.
I left some things in the screenplay because I know some people would upendo to read it and want a full out New Moon experience. If it was a real script, and the scenes were filmed, then the editor would just take it right out and put it in the deleted scenes section. wewe could think of it like that.
It is long. Like over 2 hours long, if wewe go according to the typical 1 page =1 dakika rule. Some scenes do go kwa faster than others, so take that into account.
I know that some people will not like what I did with some scenes. But, I'm not going to please everyone. Which is why I am open to constructive criticism and look mbele to your comments.
Again, this is a shabiki made script. If wewe want to share it with friends, au what not, that’s fine. I am very satisfied with this project and hope all of wewe gain some sort of satisfaction from it as well.
I hope wewe enjoy it and QUESTIONS, COMMENTS, CRITIQUES, AND COMPLAINTS ARE ALL LOVE! Whether wewe want to PM me personally with a lengthy review au just give me a shout out on my comments, I would upendo it to death.
Thanks for reading!
I post frequently over in livejournal at the lion_lamb community and have ilitumwa it over there too.
here are viungo to my screenplay
link
link
link
This screenplay has some things different from New Moon. wewe will recognize many scenes I kept. wewe will notice some things that I have combined. wewe will also notice stuff of my own. This is all typical with any adaptation.
There are also hints of Eclipse in here and set ups for it. wewe will notice them.
This is my sekunde draft, so it’s not finalized. There will be typos and such. I plan on getting this to a third au possible fourth draft, but I want to get opinions and see if I should go any further with this.
Some of the stuff was necessary in the screenplay. One scene in general I really wanted to get rid of, but my brain couldn't come up with anything else.
I left some things in the screenplay because I know some people would upendo to read it and want a full out New Moon experience. If it was a real script, and the scenes were filmed, then the editor would just take it right out and put it in the deleted scenes section. wewe could think of it like that.
It is long. Like over 2 hours long, if wewe go according to the typical 1 page =1 dakika rule. Some scenes do go kwa faster than others, so take that into account.
I know that some people will not like what I did with some scenes. But, I'm not going to please everyone. Which is why I am open to constructive criticism and look mbele to your comments.
Again, this is a shabiki made script. If wewe want to share it with friends, au what not, that’s fine. I am very satisfied with this project and hope all of wewe gain some sort of satisfaction from it as well.
I hope wewe enjoy it and QUESTIONS, COMMENTS, CRITIQUES, AND COMPLAINTS ARE ALL LOVE! Whether wewe want to PM me personally with a lengthy review au just give me a shout out on my comments, I would upendo it to death.
Thanks for reading!
