I thought I'd post this poem and try to get constructive feedback ;)
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To Know Her
She is who I see and all that I see.
Every dakika with her is a dakika to know her.
What does she like? What makes her angry?
What makes her laugh like no other?
I watch her songesha and learn her moods.
Her needs, I read like a book unbound.
I study her eyes as they speak to me
When words aren’t enough, when they can’t be found.
Her joy is mine, her emotions songesha me.
To be what she wants is no arduous task.
To protect her and know her – that’s what I do
So I find it amusing when she would ask:
“How is it that wewe know me so well?
Sometimes it seems wewe can read my mind.”
“Nah,” I smile. “I just pay attention.”
I become what she wants and needs, kwa design.
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To Know Her
She is who I see and all that I see.
Every dakika with her is a dakika to know her.
What does she like? What makes her angry?
What makes her laugh like no other?
I watch her songesha and learn her moods.
Her needs, I read like a book unbound.
I study her eyes as they speak to me
When words aren’t enough, when they can’t be found.
Her joy is mine, her emotions songesha me.
To be what she wants is no arduous task.
To protect her and know her – that’s what I do
So I find it amusing when she would ask:
“How is it that wewe know me so well?
Sometimes it seems wewe can read my mind.”
“Nah,” I smile. “I just pay attention.”
I become what she wants and needs, kwa design.
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2 zaidi million maoni needed to be at no.1!
COME ON TWILIGHERS!
link
open it in different windows to save time and all!
keep refreshing and mute the volume if wewe get sick of it!
LET'S onyesha THEM TWILIGTERS!
total maoni 8:46 EST: 2,403,785 views!!!
11:27 EST: 2,438,042 million views