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my mom says that no one will ever read this, but i wanna know what wewe guys think.

Kitsunes
In Hanagasa high school, there are a group of gorgeous students that don’t really fit in…or at least, choose not to. The reason they don’t fit in and keep to themselves is because they are Kitsunes. A Kitsune is a half human half cat creature that can go from a cute kitty cat to a vicious flesh eating monster in a matter of seconds. This group of students named Ikuto, Amu, Rin, Len, Finny, Kisa, and Nerine secret is in danger when a teenage girl named Toeto figures out their secret. They then depend on her to make sure their life stays normal and that no one finds out there secret.

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Half human and half cat? wewe mean their one parent is a cat? And it had sex with a human? XO (I'm sorry, i had to ask)
KissOfDoom posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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no, they are cursed with it.
narlyvamp1234 posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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kitsune is Japanese for fox, not cat
RikuSoraKairi3 posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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It's a great idea, but me kusoma it would depend on how u wrote it... good job so far!
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xElvenPiratex said:
That actually sounds very interesting to me! You'd have to be careful how wewe write it, though, as it might be hard to gain sympathy for a bunch of perfectly gorgeous people, even if they are outcasts. wewe wouldn't want them to be too flawless au they might get boring au be completely unrelatable, so you'd need to make sure wewe give them very interesting and intricate personalities to balance them out. But yeah, from the description wewe gave, I would definitely give the story a read! It's a very intriguing plot! :)
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thx :)
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Camilie39 said:
Maybe I would :) I have to say, it's really original!
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thx :)
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luna-lefright said:
I think its good!!!! R u uandishi more?????
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yeah, this was just the introduction, if wewe want when i am done with it i can post it on here and give the link so wewe can read it.
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sehdt said:
Your mum is wrong lots of us have read it and its really very good. Well Done
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thx :)
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chickencheese said:
Don't listen to your mom! So long as wewe write it well then people will read it! It's not really the kind of story I tend to be interested in, but I know lots of people do like that genre so I'm sure people will want to read it!
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writer67 said:
not bad, jeckle and hyde type of reasoning of a personality, adaptable and good, should have made bet with mum;-]
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EclecticFan78 said:
Definately sounds interesting, but I do have one question. If they can turn into flesh eating monsters why don't they just attack Toeto so no one finds out their secret? I am just curious as to the motives.
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well, wewe see, Ikuto won't let them do that...you will have to read it when i am done to find out why.
narlyvamp1234 posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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Ah, okay. Well wewe definately have my intrest peaked. I for one will look mbele to kusoma it.
EclecticFan78 posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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awesome!
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samuraibond005 said:
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Kutsune is half human, half fox
Neko is half human, half cat.
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i know, but i kinda wanted to shake it up.
narlyvamp1234 posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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Well okay, the idea sounds great, but mixing up the proper terms like that would make it hard for anyone who knows what Nekos ore kitsunes are to read it.
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Me_Iz_Here said:
Sounds good, but it's really similar to this TV onyesha that I know about.
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fruits basket?
narlyvamp1234 posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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Actually, the Nine Lives of Chloe King. It's about high schoolers who are basically half-cat with powers and stuff.
Me_Iz_Here posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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yeah, i wanted to watch that onyesha but i don't have the channel for it.
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adamk said:
Sounds cool and actually original. Are wewe going to post it on here?
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i will soon, i am almost done with it.
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JaseKS said:
Hey, our moms would get alng great ^_^
And yea, I would read that
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crazywolf23 said:
Please write more! im begging!
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i'll post it and give wewe the link when it is done, okay?
narlyvamp1234 posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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ok thanks!
crazywolf23 posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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almost done! can't wait to see what people think.
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madening_mahem said:
definitely, I would totally read it!
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definitely, I would totally read it!
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Maachi said:
wewe definitely have talent...keep working it!
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torilee07 said:
Sounds very original & interesting. I would definitely read it!
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MiyaShuni said:
Its good, but I think wewe should really change the names because they're all from maarufu mangas I know(Except for Toeto, cool name):
Ikuto and Amu= Shugo Chara!, Rin and Len=Vocaloids,
Finny= Kuroshitsuji/Black Butler, Kisa= Fruits Basket.

tried to come up with zaidi uncommon names. NIce job apart from that.
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oh, i didn't know that ;)
narlyvamp1234 posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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its cool. Good Luck. I hope i get to read it :)
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Albina21 said:
Sounds really good! I would read that! Did wewe get the idea from matunda Basket? That's the one where they turn into Cats right? au is it another anime?
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a lot Animes inspired it
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nimratanveer said:
hey, ive been there, my whole family thinks i cant write and it is not a good 'career option'
.but wewe know its up to u.dont be discouraged, cuz youve got talent, wewe just need to express it and be what wewe really are. for me, i really like the idea, seriously, and im totally thinking 'man, you're good'.no offense, but i kinda disagree with your mom. tons of people will read it, just dont give up.
i think its great.keep working.the world needs people like you....:)
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snootygirl50701 said:
I WOULD SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO READ IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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CosmoLuvsTails said:
awesome! are wewe gonna post on here? If so, how soon?!
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