Who is Mary Sue, wewe ask?
She is a pest, a scourge, a CURSE upon the world of fiction; a dull, cliche character who mostly invades the shabiki fiction universe (especially in fandoms like Lord of the Rings au Harry Potter), but can also be found in original work, TV shows, books, movies, etc. In shabiki fiction, she's usually the fangirl's way of inserting herself in the story and pairing herself up with the cutest/hottest character. This infamous evil can be identified kwa the following traits:
1: She is stunningly/unusually beautiful. Oh she may deny it, claiming to be a "plain Jane" and modestly deflecting any compliments on her looks, but everyone else in the story will be sure to drool all over her. Mary Sue is perfection incarnate - perfect hair, perfect eyes (the kind that "sparkle like jewels" au "pierce into your soul"), perfect skin, perfect figure, gorgeous gowns/snazzy leather warrior outfits, cool-looking weapons, etc...though she may kubeba a striking resemblance to the mwandishi of the story. And she sometimes shares the author's name (that includes middle, last, nicknames, acronyms, etc.) Mary Sue could easily be described as an "author's pet" au a self-insert.
2: She has multiple special abilities au skills (like she can somehow "wield a blade" really well without years of training and experience...unless, of course, she's been trained kwa the best since age four). There's nothing she can't do au excel at, everything gets handed to her on a silver platter, and her Speshulness knows no bounds. She could be a shape-shifter with Super Powerful Shiny Magic and a wow-the-crowd imba voice, au a genius computer hacker who can play the flute and violin, has a black ukanda in karate AND can recite encyclopedia excerpts on a dime, au a half-angel warrior princess who sends the Bad Guys buggering off just kwa going all "echo-y voice and holy light"...you get the idea.
3: Going hand in hand with the above, she's always being uber-heroic, rescuing bila mpangilio people and saving the day. The fate of Life, The Universe and Everything depends on her. Without her Speshulness to aid the Good Guys in the epic battle, the Bad Guys are sure to win and the world is utterly DOOMED.
4: She's kind and virtuous (unless she's an EVIL Mary Sue) and has no big character flaws of any kind. (And no. Clumsiness and/or a feisty temper do NOT count; they're far too generic and only serve to make her look "cute".) She's usually either a "sweet angel" type, "mysterious woman" type au the "rebellious princess" type.
5: At least one character falls immediately/insanely in upendo with her, and vice versa (usually the hottest guy. Go figure.)
6: All the good characters in the story just seem naturally drawn to her (especially children and fuzzy animals). She's maarufu where it matters. EVERYONE likes her. Except the Bad Guys, of course...as well as any unimportant characters who serve no other purpose in the story than to be annoying and/or jealous of her utter perfection.
7: Sometimes there is a prophecy au legend about her. Usually it says something about her Speshulness, an all-important destiny, Twoo Wuv written in the stars, blah blah blah...
8: She is portrayed as being cooler/more mature au zaidi important/powerful than everyone else in the story. Though on the flip side, she could also be portrayed as the poor, defenseless, yet ever courageous damsel-in-distress. Everything's always either about her au her love-interest. She doesn't know the meaning of "teamwork" and she steals the spotlight from everyone else.
9: She often has a tragic/angsty/mysterious past and her upendo interest has to "heal her wounded heart" au something. If she doesn't have a tragic/angsty/mysterious past, she always finds SOMETHING to angst about...and of course, her Twoo Wuv always rushes to comfort her. Oy.
10: She is so darn perfect and 2-dimensional that it's annoying and boring. She's either so perfect, so weird au so lacking in personality that the readers can't relate to her au grow to truly care about her as her own character. Strip away the beauty, the magic powers, the all-important destiny and the upendo interest and what do wewe have underneath? Virtually nothing.
Now that we've met Mary Sue, let me introduce wewe to her lesser-known cousins! Yeah, that's right...she has relatives.
Meet Gary Stu, the boy version of Mary Sue! He can be all of the above, as well as being the muscular, uberly-hot guy who's always saving the damsels in distress, bravely fighting the Bad Guys, hacking into computers like an expert and diffusing the bomb that's hidden in the wedding cake with the pair of pliers he just happened to have in his pocket.
Last and definitely least, there's Marty Sam. He's closely related to Gary Stu, only he's a lot zaidi sensitive and angsty. Usually he has a dark, super-tragic past (like his alcoholic dad beat him as a kid au something) and he's always throwing melodramatic pity parties about how miserable and wretched he is. He swoons over the beautiful girl of his dreams and goes on and on about how he's such a HORRIBLE MONSTER who's oh-so-unworthy of her. He can be every bit as hawt as Gary Stu, au he can pull a Hunchback of Dotredame routine, i. e. so ugly that his beautiful upendo interest can't help but take pity on him and fall in upendo with him for his "beautiful, broken heart".
So how can wewe avoid turning your characters into Mary Sues/Gary Stus/Marty Sams?
Well, one thing I've found that leads to a Mary-Sue is getting too attached to your heroine. wewe might have a brilliant back story for your girl, but does the audience really need to know every detail? wewe might have designed every ounce of her clothing and styled her hair just right, but is it integral to the plot? Probably not. A lot of the time what makes a Mary-Sue so awful is that so much of the focus is on this character that no one kusoma the story really cares all that much about her.
Another thing to keep in mind is to avoid having the character be too flawed. If wewe have a character that has a terminal illness, a bad back, is blind, can't hear, and is wielding a sword in battle and totally kicking butt and saving the day, you've got a problem. It's fine to have a character with one of those "flaws" au traits, but not all of them, and make them act accordingly. Make sure the flaws have something to do with the story and aren't just things wewe stick in to make her appear less perfect. Too flawed is just as bad as too perfect.
AFTERTHOUGHT: It should be noted that there IS such a thing as a "good" Mary Sue, and that there are a few exceptions where characters can have a lot of the symptoms above and NOT be a Mary Sue (like the elves in Lord of the Rings, for instance). There are many examples of "good" Mary Sues out there, such as Nancy Drew, Sarah Crew from A Little Princess, Buffy the Vampire Slayer and other characters. What makes them different from other Mary Sues is that they are all believable, vibrant, well-rounded, likable characters that people can root for.
Having alisema that, DON'T get cocky. These kinds of exceptions are rare. Most likely, if wewe have written a main character into one of your stories who possesses many au all of these qualities, wewe have created a Mary Sue (or one of her cousins). So get someone to look over your work, lest this infamous pest overtake you!
If wewe would like to test your character for Mary Sue symptoms, I highly suggest visiting these sites:
The Universal Mary Sue Litmus Test
link
The Writer's Mary Sue Test:
link
She is a pest, a scourge, a CURSE upon the world of fiction; a dull, cliche character who mostly invades the shabiki fiction universe (especially in fandoms like Lord of the Rings au Harry Potter), but can also be found in original work, TV shows, books, movies, etc. In shabiki fiction, she's usually the fangirl's way of inserting herself in the story and pairing herself up with the cutest/hottest character. This infamous evil can be identified kwa the following traits:
1: She is stunningly/unusually beautiful. Oh she may deny it, claiming to be a "plain Jane" and modestly deflecting any compliments on her looks, but everyone else in the story will be sure to drool all over her. Mary Sue is perfection incarnate - perfect hair, perfect eyes (the kind that "sparkle like jewels" au "pierce into your soul"), perfect skin, perfect figure, gorgeous gowns/snazzy leather warrior outfits, cool-looking weapons, etc...though she may kubeba a striking resemblance to the mwandishi of the story. And she sometimes shares the author's name (that includes middle, last, nicknames, acronyms, etc.) Mary Sue could easily be described as an "author's pet" au a self-insert.
2: She has multiple special abilities au skills (like she can somehow "wield a blade" really well without years of training and experience...unless, of course, she's been trained kwa the best since age four). There's nothing she can't do au excel at, everything gets handed to her on a silver platter, and her Speshulness knows no bounds. She could be a shape-shifter with Super Powerful Shiny Magic and a wow-the-crowd imba voice, au a genius computer hacker who can play the flute and violin, has a black ukanda in karate AND can recite encyclopedia excerpts on a dime, au a half-angel warrior princess who sends the Bad Guys buggering off just kwa going all "echo-y voice and holy light"...you get the idea.
3: Going hand in hand with the above, she's always being uber-heroic, rescuing bila mpangilio people and saving the day. The fate of Life, The Universe and Everything depends on her. Without her Speshulness to aid the Good Guys in the epic battle, the Bad Guys are sure to win and the world is utterly DOOMED.
4: She's kind and virtuous (unless she's an EVIL Mary Sue) and has no big character flaws of any kind. (And no. Clumsiness and/or a feisty temper do NOT count; they're far too generic and only serve to make her look "cute".) She's usually either a "sweet angel" type, "mysterious woman" type au the "rebellious princess" type.
5: At least one character falls immediately/insanely in upendo with her, and vice versa (usually the hottest guy. Go figure.)
6: All the good characters in the story just seem naturally drawn to her (especially children and fuzzy animals). She's maarufu where it matters. EVERYONE likes her. Except the Bad Guys, of course...as well as any unimportant characters who serve no other purpose in the story than to be annoying and/or jealous of her utter perfection.
7: Sometimes there is a prophecy au legend about her. Usually it says something about her Speshulness, an all-important destiny, Twoo Wuv written in the stars, blah blah blah...
8: She is portrayed as being cooler/more mature au zaidi important/powerful than everyone else in the story. Though on the flip side, she could also be portrayed as the poor, defenseless, yet ever courageous damsel-in-distress. Everything's always either about her au her love-interest. She doesn't know the meaning of "teamwork" and she steals the spotlight from everyone else.
9: She often has a tragic/angsty/mysterious past and her upendo interest has to "heal her wounded heart" au something. If she doesn't have a tragic/angsty/mysterious past, she always finds SOMETHING to angst about...and of course, her Twoo Wuv always rushes to comfort her. Oy.
10: She is so darn perfect and 2-dimensional that it's annoying and boring. She's either so perfect, so weird au so lacking in personality that the readers can't relate to her au grow to truly care about her as her own character. Strip away the beauty, the magic powers, the all-important destiny and the upendo interest and what do wewe have underneath? Virtually nothing.
Now that we've met Mary Sue, let me introduce wewe to her lesser-known cousins! Yeah, that's right...she has relatives.
Meet Gary Stu, the boy version of Mary Sue! He can be all of the above, as well as being the muscular, uberly-hot guy who's always saving the damsels in distress, bravely fighting the Bad Guys, hacking into computers like an expert and diffusing the bomb that's hidden in the wedding cake with the pair of pliers he just happened to have in his pocket.
Last and definitely least, there's Marty Sam. He's closely related to Gary Stu, only he's a lot zaidi sensitive and angsty. Usually he has a dark, super-tragic past (like his alcoholic dad beat him as a kid au something) and he's always throwing melodramatic pity parties about how miserable and wretched he is. He swoons over the beautiful girl of his dreams and goes on and on about how he's such a HORRIBLE MONSTER who's oh-so-unworthy of her. He can be every bit as hawt as Gary Stu, au he can pull a Hunchback of Dotredame routine, i. e. so ugly that his beautiful upendo interest can't help but take pity on him and fall in upendo with him for his "beautiful, broken heart".
So how can wewe avoid turning your characters into Mary Sues/Gary Stus/Marty Sams?
Well, one thing I've found that leads to a Mary-Sue is getting too attached to your heroine. wewe might have a brilliant back story for your girl, but does the audience really need to know every detail? wewe might have designed every ounce of her clothing and styled her hair just right, but is it integral to the plot? Probably not. A lot of the time what makes a Mary-Sue so awful is that so much of the focus is on this character that no one kusoma the story really cares all that much about her.
Another thing to keep in mind is to avoid having the character be too flawed. If wewe have a character that has a terminal illness, a bad back, is blind, can't hear, and is wielding a sword in battle and totally kicking butt and saving the day, you've got a problem. It's fine to have a character with one of those "flaws" au traits, but not all of them, and make them act accordingly. Make sure the flaws have something to do with the story and aren't just things wewe stick in to make her appear less perfect. Too flawed is just as bad as too perfect.
AFTERTHOUGHT: It should be noted that there IS such a thing as a "good" Mary Sue, and that there are a few exceptions where characters can have a lot of the symptoms above and NOT be a Mary Sue (like the elves in Lord of the Rings, for instance). There are many examples of "good" Mary Sues out there, such as Nancy Drew, Sarah Crew from A Little Princess, Buffy the Vampire Slayer and other characters. What makes them different from other Mary Sues is that they are all believable, vibrant, well-rounded, likable characters that people can root for.
Having alisema that, DON'T get cocky. These kinds of exceptions are rare. Most likely, if wewe have written a main character into one of your stories who possesses many au all of these qualities, wewe have created a Mary Sue (or one of her cousins). So get someone to look over your work, lest this infamous pest overtake you!
If wewe would like to test your character for Mary Sue symptoms, I highly suggest visiting these sites:
The Universal Mary Sue Litmus Test
link
The Writer's Mary Sue Test:
link
During the first episode of "Austin and Ally", Ross and Laura already had lots of chemistry.
At the end of season 2, there was a very magical moment in the austin and ally life, there was a first kiss, after "Ally" Lost her stage fright.
In season 4, if wewe remember the ballroom dance class, "Ally" asked "Austin" to dance, and wewe might have saw a lot zaidi Ross than "Austin", but Laura is better at hiding herself
Out of Austin and Ally,
Anytime that Ross, Laura, Calum and Rani sit in Ross' car, Laura and Ross always sit together. Although Laura may have a boyfriend, I still believe that Raura could, in future times, be real!
At the end of season 2, there was a very magical moment in the austin and ally life, there was a first kiss, after "Ally" Lost her stage fright.
In season 4, if wewe remember the ballroom dance class, "Ally" asked "Austin" to dance, and wewe might have saw a lot zaidi Ross than "Austin", but Laura is better at hiding herself
Out of Austin and Ally,
Anytime that Ross, Laura, Calum and Rani sit in Ross' car, Laura and Ross always sit together. Although Laura may have a boyfriend, I still believe that Raura could, in future times, be real!
Alright, well as all wewe Naruto mashabiki may know, the new movie Blood Prison has recently came out. I finish watching the movie and it made me completely mad...
The main conflict in Naruto Shippuden is Akatsuki and their plan to rule the world with the Eye of the Moon Plan. In this movie, the nyasi Village wants to accomplish the exact same thing... but with a box that grants wewe any wish.
The Akatsuki is know to be the toughest and have the most skilled people in its clan... so why would they have not just used the box from the nyasi villa the from begging if it holds such immense power. Why would the masked guy known as Tobi go through the process of capturing all the Jinchūriki when he could just grant a wish for all his plan to happen...
This is what left me thinking what in the world is this...
The main conflict in Naruto Shippuden is Akatsuki and their plan to rule the world with the Eye of the Moon Plan. In this movie, the nyasi Village wants to accomplish the exact same thing... but with a box that grants wewe any wish.
The Akatsuki is know to be the toughest and have the most skilled people in its clan... so why would they have not just used the box from the nyasi villa the from begging if it holds such immense power. Why would the masked guy known as Tobi go through the process of capturing all the Jinchūriki when he could just grant a wish for all his plan to happen...
This is what left me thinking what in the world is this...
mwezi 10
Kat's POV
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"I think they're dating..." some girl alisema to her friend as we passed them, holding hands. We didn't care what they said, and all of it was true. We were dating, we were in upendo with eachother. We kissed eachother in public, we held hands, we told eachother we loved them every 5 minutes. I didn't like to wonder what would happened when Will found out about this, au what I would do when his time came.
AFTER SCHOOL
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"Love you, Sadao." I told him.
"Love you, too, babe."
We kissed eachother, and thought of what to do, considering it was Friday. "We could go out to eat again!" I suggested. "Just somewhere except for that sushi place, I'm getting tired of that place." So, we decided to go to a pizza place a couple blocks down.
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Excuse the shortness of this chapter.
Kat's POV
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"I think they're dating..." some girl alisema to her friend as we passed them, holding hands. We didn't care what they said, and all of it was true. We were dating, we were in upendo with eachother. We kissed eachother in public, we held hands, we told eachother we loved them every 5 minutes. I didn't like to wonder what would happened when Will found out about this, au what I would do when his time came.
AFTER SCHOOL
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"Love you, Sadao." I told him.
"Love you, too, babe."
We kissed eachother, and thought of what to do, considering it was Friday. "We could go out to eat again!" I suggested. "Just somewhere except for that sushi place, I'm getting tired of that place." So, we decided to go to a pizza place a couple blocks down.
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Excuse the shortness of this chapter.