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Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. kwa no means am I forcing wewe to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless wewe truly believe that the club will be improved with the addition of this character. It helps if the new character has some relation to one of your existing characters, but it's not necessary.
2. Write something about them before wewe start posting. It can be as little as a bio, au as big as an entire makala series, but whatever the case, your character will generally be better recieved if we feel like we know them a little bit first.
3. Don't go overboard with the powers. I'd say no zaidi than 5 distinct powers, otherwise it gets to be overwhelming and annoying if your character can do everything. No one likes the character that, whatever situation he au she is in, can pull out another trick out of his au her hat.
4. If wewe absolutely must give your character tons of powers, then give them 1 to 3 "favorite powers". It's much less annoying if your character usually only uses a couple of his au her powers, as opposed to all 20.
5. Make their powers related. It drives people nuts when your character has thirty different powers that are completely bila mpangilio and unrelated to each other. They should be logically connected. For example, my OC Jackson (Thunderblade). His main power is communication with metal, and his other two powers, swordfighting and magnetism, logically stem from that.
6. Hero names should have some relation to them and/or their powers. There are exceptions, but still. It's confusing when wewe have, say, BlackCat whose powers are flight and telepathy. It just doesn't make sense.
7. Try not to copy others directly.. Yes, yes, I know, imitation is the highest form of flattery, but no one likes a deliberate copycat. That seems to be a trend with this group. One character gets pregnant, and the inayofuata siku you've got 3 other OCs that are preggo. One person creates a child that has some relation to their OC, and before we know it, the cave has turned into a daycare center.
8. Appearance and pets should, again, be related to their powers. Pets can be great when they are a familiar, that either has powers of its own au is linked to the character. And my biggest example of the appearance thing is the hivi karibuni outcropping of characters with cat ears and sometimes tails. Those are fine when they're actually related to their powers (if they have catlike senses, for example, au claws) but it's just annoying when they're completely unrelated.
9. Don't kill your character without a good reason. If wewe must kill your character, at least do it dramatically! And give a reason for why they must die! Don't just do it for attention, au so that your other characters have a reason to moan and be depressed.
10. Don't reincarnate your character unless necessary and justified. Which it usually isn't. But there are exceptions. And if wewe do provide a good reason, at least make it a process that takes up time. For example, when Fin was killed, it was logical that she would be reincarnated, since she was part phoenix. And it didn't happen overnight. It took a couple months for her to come back.
11. Don't make your character completely invincible. Your character can have limited invulnerability, kind of like Superman, but they can't be completely resistant to death and damage. Make it realistic, people! Even superheroes couldn't get shot au stabbed in the heart, then pop up dakika later completely fine, like nothing had happened.
12. Give your character a unique personality. Put simply, don't make them dull au flat. This goes back to the idea that a new OC should be making some sort of contribution to the group. It's a lot better if their personality affects the others in some way.
13. Give your character some weaknesses and/or flaws. Preferably both of them. That's all I can say.
14. Be careful if making your character related to au dating a canon character.. Make sure that it's realistic and not annoying. Same goes with if they're related to au dating another OC, especially if that OC was not created kwa you.
15. Make sure your character isn't a Mary Sue. No one likes a Mary Sue. link Mary Sues are honestly, just plain annoying. I'm not saying that if your existing character has some elements of "Sue-ism" that they're bad and need to be changed, but try to keep it in mind for new characters. If your not sure if your existing au potential character is a Mary Sue, au if wewe suspect he/she is, but don't know how to change it, wewe can take link. If wewe want, wewe can post the results here (Aisling got a 19, in case wewe were curious, which wewe probably weren't...).
So, that's all I have for now. Rage on me all wewe want, but just know that I don't care. Once again, kwa no means do wewe have to follow these. They aren't rules, merely a few suggestions.
For now,
AislingYJ :)
Her head pounded as she slowly regain consciousness, the indigo-head strained her eyes open to a bright light in her face.
"You're up." Frostbite looks up noticing a woman with long midnight black hair. Though her head ached she manage to place a smile on her face. She looked around seeing that she was bonded in a chair in chains.
"I'm so happy that Queen of the Beetle is here to greet me on my wakening."
"Its my pleasure," Queen Beetle turned to Frostbite with a slight smile on her face in return Frostbite gave her a smile, "After all wewe did give permission take the Hexagons."
"I only did it...
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posted by Kurls_Basd
The mbwa mwitu charged at full speed to the trio. They all looked at each other not knowing whether it was headed for them au was it just pasting through, but there was no time to figure that out. They separated making room for the monster. The mbwa mwitu pasted but suddenly turned around. It howled and stood ground. The mbwa mwitu was all black with grey eyes and a much zaidi fuzzy tail than other wolfs. It howled once zaidi moving from side to side, it stopped, stared of a bit then suddenly charged at Aisling. Aisling pulled out an arrow and drew her bow, running side ways she shot at the wolf. It dodged, jumping...
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posted by Robin_Love
It's weird and messed up and stupid but I felt lie uandishi so here..Also, if wewe don't know that he watched Blade (his wife) die then wewe won't understand it

The click-clack of her shoes echoed in the long hallways as she made her way to the back of the stony building. She found him standing at a door, arms folded across his broad chest, head down and eyebrows furrowed. He looked up as she got closer and gave her a small sad smile.
"Still?"
"Fraid so. Shall we?"
She nodded her head and opened the door. The room was dark with the exception of a few clusters of lighted candles. The room was bare,...
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posted by BladeYJ
 I can't get over this fudging photo.. It's just.. Mmmmmph~
I can't get over this fudging photo.. It's just.. Mmmmmph~
((Phoebs I totally ripped your bio layout off, don't hate me, it was just so simple and easy to read /. ))

Name: Blade Serenity Howard-^insert Terror's last name-which is secret-here^

Class:Hero

Current Living Location: She owns an apartment, where she usually stays, but also has a room at The Cave if she wants to crash. Currently she is M.I.A.
((Though she is Missing In Action. I do break the rules that I've made, occasionally, and RP with her.. So what.. sue me.))

Race: Half Human-Half Vampire/Caucasian.


Age: Seventeen, but due to the vampirism, immortal-Age Wise-

Hair: Her hair is a bright blonde...
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posted by Robin_Love
 My guardian demon
My guardian demon
{Tara pov on this one. The last I ilitumwa was about Devin. IF wewe remember}



I wasn't always this way. I didn't always think about killing myself when things went wrong. Not until I got the worst shock of my life. The image is so clear in my mind after all these years that I can still taste the smoke in my nostrils and see the moto behind my eyes. I've lied about my past, about who my family was. But if things got out, I was scared to loose zaidi than I had. But now I have nothing else to loose.
So let me take wewe to the night my life became expendable and the dakika I realized how utterly lost...
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posted by Red-Revenge
Greetings! I come in Geekiness!

Not really, just with some good news and bad news. Which do wewe want to hear first? Bad news it is. I'm cancelling the Red Revenge four part finale and the four season web-series that would've followed.

*Listens to silent audience* I'm sorry you're so displeased. *more silence* Anyway, onto the good news.

I just purchased a website which will become the nyumbani of the Black Hero in the very near future. I'm working on books, videos, character slots, and maybe even a game for the website! No confirmed tarehe when this will be up but hopefully this summer.

Also, I'm restarting the Red Revenge series in his own world where everything belongs to me. The first book (the creation story, what else) will be published in three parts (for zaidi details, stay tuned to my wall.)

So, while I'm cancelling Red Revenge VI: The Legend Falls here, I will be opening the Black Hero's website and publishing the first in a ten book saga this Summer. Stay tuned!
posted by FangYJ
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I’ll seek wewe out,


Brendan stepped back to feel a pistol on the back of his head.
"State your name and business"
"Brendan Adams, proud husband and father of...four kids? I Lost count after two,  Lieutenant of the US Marine Corps."

Flay wewe alive

The gun was dropped and Brendan spun around, kicking it up and pointing it at the target. Once again the gun was dropped. 
"Scott!

One zaidi word and wewe won’t survive

"Hey." Scott pulled the kofia off his head
"I thought wewe were dead!" 
"I was dead, for two days. Then I was kept hostage...
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posted by Robin_Love
“Give me till afternoon.”
“Tara no!”
She ignored Alek's protests, fixing her eyes on the other party in the room. He dark red eyes looked her over once.
“I'll give wewe till three after. Then I'll be back to collect you.”
“Come alone Kuran.”
He gave her a smile.
“I will.”
She nodded, watching as they left. Then she swiftly turned, exciting the room. Alek, Silver, Ciel, and Fang followed her; Fang for majibu zaidi than anything.
“Tara what are wewe doing?! Who was that?”
Alek moved into her path and she avoided his eyes.
“Who is he?”
“His name is Satstruiku Kuran. He is an...
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posted by InfinityYJ
Future Fin fic. Warnings for major F-bombs. Based loosely on a prophecy line.

Rough weeks never end good for heroes. For a normal person you’d have a weekend to relax, watch some televisheni au play a video game. But for the protectors of a city, country, planet, there wasn’t much to go nyumbani to, au much of a weekend to relax with.
Fin had had one of those weeks where she was just done. But a distress call from a warehouse two blocks down had her setting off in the direction opposite Happy Harbor. The fifteen mwaka old was starting to wonder if this was actually something she’d be doing for...
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posted by CoaxochYJ
Just cuz I was borrrrrred.

This one~shot has no moral, its just stuff to read if your bored.






I woke up, covered in soft, warm blankets. I groaned and rolled over, not wanting to songesha from my nest of blankets.
"Come on....here we go..." Ciel alisema as he picked me up.
"Good morning." I said, groggily, and cheerfully.
"Morning sleepy feathers." He said, throwing me over his shoulder. I rubbed my eyes and felt the inconsistencies as he walked down the stairs. I felt like a lump of potatos. My legs thumped against Ciel's chest with every step he took. Ciel walked into the kitchen, pulled me off his shoulder,...
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 Costume! :D
Costume! :D
Name: Candice Light.

Alias: None/Her name. :)

Nickname: Candy.. :D

Appearance: Candice has long blonde hair, usually up in a ponytail au pig-tails((OMG!! SHE'S BLONDE!! OMG I might change it.. :/)) Her eyes are blueish green.

Age: 15 and a-quarter.

Civies:: Usually a green shati and a light pink skirt. She wears her hair down with a clip in it!

Costume: A cheer-leading outfit! :D

Personality: She's a really preppy girl, she's super girly and used to attention! She is a man stealer, she hits on every guy no matter what, even if he's not single! She freaks out over bugs, spiders, stupid things. She...
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posted by Robin_Love
 Corri-Human Illusion
Corri-Human Illusion
As promised.


Name: Corri
Alias: Bruno
Occupation: Vigilante
Powers: Corri is a master of a illusions. He knows a few carnival magic tricks and uses them in different ways. Corri can also control any personal, real, au inner form of darkness. He can transport people to world he created. If he's mad enough, Corri turns into a Hell hound.
History Corri is the last of his kind; a shadow human. He has the looks of a normal human, but is like a shadow, minus his golden eyes. He had come to Earth through mysterious circumstances. It is unknown hos he survived the time from infant to six. It was when he...
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posted by Robin_Love
She heard a crash, a loud one. She groaned and pulled the covers over her head. But when the computer announced Batman's arrival, she jumped out of kitanda and into the closet. We didn't have training today. Were we supposed to get a mission? She stepped out of her room, ready for action, like most of the others who had slept in on their siku off. Blade yawned before heading into the mission room. She saw not only Batman, but also Zatanna, and a few other JLA members. Okay. Not a mission.
“Devin's gone missing,” A voice whispered in her ear.
She would have reacted, but she knew that voice too...
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posted by Robin_Love
Her footsteps pounded on the ground. She heard him behind her and kept going. Don't look back. He'll take you. She's close by. Keep going. Don't look back! The voice echoed in her head, spurring her on. She wouldn't loose to him. Not now. She had come far in a few hours. Her powers were stable. Her abilities were strong.
The shadows had taught her. This host is perfect. Everything I need. The voice spoke again, eyes shinning bright red. She panted, running still. His steps started to fade behind her. She slowed a little and tripped. She got up and pulled out her weapon.
“Come out monster!...
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There is a three mwaka time jump between Season 2 and the Arrowette Series. A few things have happened...

Darkseid invaded Earth and was repelled, but Batman, Aquaman, Hal Jordan, and Flash were killed (Batman unbeknownst to the public) during the invasion forcing Wally and Dick to fill the respected roles of their mentors. One mwaka later, Barbara Gordon was paralyzed and forced to leave the cowl of Batgirl behind and become Oracle. Stephanie Brown took her place.

Red Robin, leader of the Teen Titans (That's right, I changed their names) is still Tim drake (There will be NO Damian Wayne). Aqualad...
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posted by Obscurity98
Hero name: Obscurity
ID: Harley Mei
age:14 1/2

Powers: Cat like abilities, with retractable claws, control over water, fire, ice, earth, and air. can become the elements. ability to fly with black aura around her body, invulnerability and super stregnth.

note:she was a science experiment gone wrong, short temper. She loves to play around though, and is serious when needed be.She has a serious tone of voice like Kaldur, and is mutually fond of him as well. Kaldur loves her. but wont admit it. She likes to flirt, even when she doesn't notice it.

Stats: strength 90% speed:55% intelligent: 89%...
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posted by Mclovin_69
moto was shot and burned a mti to the ground, Bentley looked at the burnt mti and glared looking back at the source, " violence is never the answer Sable!! hasnt uncle ever taught wewe that!! " Bentley shouted, Sables hands glowed blue with moto and she grinned evily, " i dont listen to others i only listen to myself Bent " she alisema evily. Bentley glared with his swords in his hands, " has'nt anyone ever taught wewe anything.... " he said. Sable grew angry " im done with the talking!! " she shouted shooting her moto towards Bentley, Bentley put his swords infront of him in an x formation being...
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posted by SilverWings13
Oops, accidently deleted this. It’s the same Owl King as before!

Bodies leaned over standing-tables and elbowed to get a place at the bar. Voices filled the air in layers until it was a constant roar of noise. Amidst it all, a young woman in a short, sparkling aquamarine dress slipped through the bodies. She emerged from the crowd as she reached the bar, feeling a moment of respite from the suffocating stench of acrid cigarette drags, fruity e-cig puffs, and stifling body sweat. Her eyes seemed to scan the row of amber bottles on the back ukuta in front of a long mirror. Really, she was watching...
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