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Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. kwa no means am I forcing wewe to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless wewe truly believe that the club will be improved with the addition of this character. It helps if the new character has some relation to one of your existing characters, but it's not necessary.
2. Write something about them before wewe start posting. It can be as little as a bio, au as big as an entire makala series, but whatever the case, your character will generally be better recieved if we feel like we know them a little bit first.
3. Don't go overboard with the powers. I'd say no zaidi than 5 distinct powers, otherwise it gets to be overwhelming and annoying if your character can do everything. No one likes the character that, whatever situation he au she is in, can pull out another trick out of his au her hat.
4. If wewe absolutely must give your character tons of powers, then give them 1 to 3 "favorite powers". It's much less annoying if your character usually only uses a couple of his au her powers, as opposed to all 20.
5. Make their powers related. It drives people nuts when your character has thirty different powers that are completely bila mpangilio and unrelated to each other. They should be logically connected. For example, my OC Jackson (Thunderblade). His main power is communication with metal, and his other two powers, swordfighting and magnetism, logically stem from that.
6. Hero names should have some relation to them and/or their powers. There are exceptions, but still. It's confusing when wewe have, say, BlackCat whose powers are flight and telepathy. It just doesn't make sense.
7. Try not to copy others directly.. Yes, yes, I know, imitation is the highest form of flattery, but no one likes a deliberate copycat. That seems to be a trend with this group. One character gets pregnant, and the inayofuata siku you've got 3 other OCs that are preggo. One person creates a child that has some relation to their OC, and before we know it, the cave has turned into a daycare center.
8. Appearance and pets should, again, be related to their powers. Pets can be great when they are a familiar, that either has powers of its own au is linked to the character. And my biggest example of the appearance thing is the hivi karibuni outcropping of characters with cat ears and sometimes tails. Those are fine when they're actually related to their powers (if they have catlike senses, for example, au claws) but it's just annoying when they're completely unrelated.
9. Don't kill your character without a good reason. If wewe must kill your character, at least do it dramatically! And give a reason for why they must die! Don't just do it for attention, au so that your other characters have a reason to moan and be depressed.
10. Don't reincarnate your character unless necessary and justified. Which it usually isn't. But there are exceptions. And if wewe do provide a good reason, at least make it a process that takes up time. For example, when Fin was killed, it was logical that she would be reincarnated, since she was part phoenix. And it didn't happen overnight. It took a couple months for her to come back.
11. Don't make your character completely invincible. Your character can have limited invulnerability, kind of like Superman, but they can't be completely resistant to death and damage. Make it realistic, people! Even superheroes couldn't get shot au stabbed in the heart, then pop up dakika later completely fine, like nothing had happened.
12. Give your character a unique personality. Put simply, don't make them dull au flat. This goes back to the idea that a new OC should be making some sort of contribution to the group. It's a lot better if their personality affects the others in some way.
13. Give your character some weaknesses and/or flaws. Preferably both of them. That's all I can say.
14. Be careful if making your character related to au dating a canon character.. Make sure that it's realistic and not annoying. Same goes with if they're related to au dating another OC, especially if that OC was not created kwa you.
15. Make sure your character isn't a Mary Sue. No one likes a Mary Sue. link Mary Sues are honestly, just plain annoying. I'm not saying that if your existing character has some elements of "Sue-ism" that they're bad and need to be changed, but try to keep it in mind for new characters. If your not sure if your existing au potential character is a Mary Sue, au if wewe suspect he/she is, but don't know how to change it, wewe can take link. If wewe want, wewe can post the results here (Aisling got a 19, in case wewe were curious, which wewe probably weren't...).
So, that's all I have for now. Rage on me all wewe want, but just know that I don't care. Once again, kwa no means do wewe have to follow these. They aren't rules, merely a few suggestions.
For now,
AislingYJ :)
HOLA!!!

So recently I have joined a new Young Justice Roleplay group and we need zaidi people to join! It's CANON ONLY! NO OCs. I know how much wewe guys upendo your OCs but we need people. So heres some info about the group. (At the end I will give all viungo cuz wewe need to read this IMPORTANT info on the group :D)

~It's on Tumblr- wewe must have a tumblr account to apply. Then wewe must make a separate account for the character

~We follow the show- Everything that's happened in the onyesha we work off. It's based off the INVASION. So we have all new characters and all the old team members are all...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
These took me 2 weeks to finally finish -_- Gyah.
Name: Blair Wayne
Alias: Luna
Age: 17
Occupation: Hero
Relation to team: Bruce Wayne’s daughter
Powers: Blair is able to control all elements of the earth including “Air, water, fire, and earth “along with light, hand-to-hand combat, acrobatics
Past: Blair also knew her father was a Vigilante. Especially when he left one night, and didn’t come back until the inayofuata week with broken ribs and scratches. She followed him one night, realizing her father was Batman, and that herself had gained powers
Notes: -Blair has a twin brother named Brett
-Her...
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posted by Robin_Love
She was running along the street, a blur to all. She did a few tricks over cars, going too fast for any one to appreciate them. She laughed, enjoying her fun. She skidded to a stop when she saw a blonde haired boy in a black trench kanzu, koti running away. She looked at him for a minute. Why was he running? She raced towards him.
“Hey softie!” she yelled teasingly.
The boy stopped, turning to her. He scowled.
“Shut up Erin!”
She stopped in front of him.
“Awww! C'mon Terror! I was just playing!”
“I don't give a care. Leave me alone!”
Terror turned to leave, but Erin grabbed his wrist. A...
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posted by Robin_Love
Only one thing to say this time. MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA!!!!!




“I've heard a few things. Whispers of conversations. But wewe apparently had some kind of fall in with Bloodmist.”
Becca blinked.
“Why would I? I don't mind him being anywhere close to the team.”
“I know. That's why I'm confused.”
Becca nodded. She looked at her Angel friend.
“Devin, what have wewe experienced?”
“Becca, what I say inayofuata can not be repeated.”
“I promise.”

“I feel bad for lying to him, Becca. But...I felt like I had to protect him.”
“From what Dev?”
“Myself. I don't know why but I felt this voice...
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posted by Scarlet_YJ
 Scarlet's new civvies
Scarlet's new civvies
Name: Scarlet Adenfeld
Alias: Ember
Age: 16
Power: witch who can control moto and uses magic

Alliance: for right now I don't even care the line between villian and hero is basically non-existant so call her whatever wewe want

Appearance: long machungwa, chungwa hair (now tied up in either a ponytail au pigtails), brown eyes, 5 ft. 8"

Personality: Calm, hot-tempered, withdrawn, loner(ish), serious, loud, trust issues (I might have mentioned this before but her trust issues have gotten worse), friendly, brave, strong (I mean emotionally strong), courageous

History: the only thing that's changed is that her father killed her evil grandmother then her father was murdered.

Other: Scarlet iherited her mother's immortal hunter gun called "Fire Crossing", she has some expierience in martial arts, and she has a dog familiar named Cole
 Scarlet's new mission outfit
Scarlet's new mission outfit
posted by Robin_Love
 Trevor-day
Trevor-day
I KNOW I make alot, but I upendo them all so much!!!


Name: Trevor Wright
Alias: Secret
Occupation: Hero
Powers: Trevor posses different powers at different times of day. Day-strength, light, fire, wind. Night-speed, shadows, darkness, water. Trevor is also a master spy and trained extensively in combat. He has never been detected and has endurance that lasts twenty-four hours. Trevor loves to use a gun in the siku and a sword at night.
History: Trevor was raised on the streets of London, England. He is, as far as he knows, an orphan. His powers manifest from his X-gene. He was taken in kwa a sly shape-shifter,...
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posted by Mclovin_69
 Bentley
Bentley
He sliced at a dummy with his sword making it fall apart and heard a little noise behind him and loooked from the corner of his eyes to see two attackers coming at him from both sides, he backflipped out of the way and took out his small daggers throwing them at the incoming dummies and made them fall apart aswell, he landed on his feet swiftly at ease and stood in a ready position with his regular sized sword breathing heavily with sweat running down his forehead, he heard clapping behind him and flipped his sword back into his side pouch and turned around smiling. The man who approached him...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
25 ways to piss off Fang.

1). Poke him and continuously and ask if he’s goth

2) Poke him between the wings then run away screaming “I TOUCHED A GOTH KID!

3.) Dye his hair pink while he’s asleep.

4.) Lock him in a room with bright pink walls. (And a barf bag)

5.) Take a toy kisu and ask Fang if he’s Lost his.

6.) Tell Fang that wewe upendo him.

7.) Hack into his blog and change his status
update too “I upendo Hannah Montana.”

8.) Touch his hair (only Devin can)

9.) Give him McDonald’s chicken nuggets and tell him he’s eating his mom.

10.) When Fang appears kick his shins and say wewe didn’t...
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OOC: This is a re-pub of my very first story, Expectations. So basically, this happens before Fin is dead (that’s why Fin is in this. duh.) and it takes place right when Aisling joins the Team. So yeah. God, it was so long zamani that I wrote this! Well anyway, here it is..
I don't remember the siku I found the Team. Those memories--all memories of my past--are gone, corrupted and removed; but zaidi on that later. I only know now what they told me, but from what I've heard, I picture myself as a kitten. A lost, scrawny, water-sodden kitten, that somehow dragged itself--myself--onto the doorstep...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
Iraq
5 years later
"Soldiers! wewe are not in combat training anymore! Welcome to the real war, the real thing. We have some returning veterans to the battlefield." The commander turned and held out his hand to point at Derek. "Soldier Adams, thank wewe for returning to battle. Your assistance is much needed" Derek nodded once and shifted his sniper rifle. Soldiers starting running and grabbing guns and ammo as the threat of a bomb filled the air from the radios. "ADAMS! Get to higher ground, use that sniper to take enemy targets down." Derek nodded and grabbed ammo and running out of the tent,...
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posted by Kenzie_KarmaYJ
After the large round of laughter and ironic applause, not to mention Robin nearly fearing for his life, the team looked over to Delta for an explanation, although someone had an inclination on what it might be about.
Batman, who had since dried himself off and calmed down, picked up Kenzie, looking very innocent, making Batman himself look innocent in a very scary way. Delta sighed and picked up the wilted rose, twirling its stem between her fingers.
“I’m not sure exactly how to explain this,” she began. “But I know this is Fin, I can feel it. I used to...” She gave a half-hearted...
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posted by Red_HoodYJ
My name is Red Hood. And here's a little information on me:

Gender: female

Alter Ego: Aeronwen Todd

Nickname(s): Red, Aeron, Aero (prefers Aeronwen)

Age:17

Known Locations: Gotham City, Blüdhaven

Personality: smart-ass, sarcastic, sly, intelligent, hot-tempered

Appearance: Black hair, green eyes, 5'10, 127 lbs

Civvies: black elbow sleeve mashua neck shirt, black loose jeans, belt

Powers: trained kwa Red kofia to use firearms, knives and multiple other weapons, higher resistance to injury then the average human, perfect aim/never misses unless purposely

Weakness: zaidi untrusting then Batman, proud,

Story:...
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posted by Skittles98
I landed near the Brother Hood’s building. I walked in, walking up the stairs. I threw open the doors. Blob was sitting on the couch, Toad on his head, Avalanche was sitting in an arm chair watching televisheni and Quicksilver was playing pool.
“Domino, didn’t expect to see wewe here again“Quicksilver stated
“Domino couldn’t make it, sorry. She sent me instead” I snarled, charging a card. I threw it on the billiards meza, jedwali and it exploded in Pietro’s face. I glared at him.
“You three-“ I gestured to Toad, Blob and Avalanche “-scram. I have some business with Quicksilver”...
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posted by Skittles98
“Wait, he’s your dad?” Wally finally managed
“Yes” I nodded
“And wewe were hugging him because…?” Robin asked
“None of your beeswax!” I snarled
“Woah…touchy” he muttered
“I’ll onyesha wewe touchy mister ‘I’m so cool and awesome because Batman’s my mentor’” I muttered under my breath.
“Why didn’t wewe tell us?” Wolverine asked
“Because it didn’t concern you. My family concerns Me, Kurt, Laurna, Laura, Wanda and Gambit. No one else” I growled
“Why does it concern them?” Aqualad asked
“Because they’re the closest the to family I have, aside from Gambit”...
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posted by Skittles98
The smoke cleared to reveal the X-men standing there, untying Wanda, Laurna and Eclipse. Young Justice and Batman were all encased in ice, courtesy of Iceman. Laurna angrily stood. The floor around my ex-team fell away.
“You’d better explain why wewe attacked my nyumbani and tried to take my guest” she growled
“We want our friend back” Wally said
“So wewe attack her?” Wanda exclaimed, her fists glowing red.
“Yeah, babe” Wally grinned, looking Wanda up and down. Kurt’s tail twitched.
“Megan, wewe like making people happy right?” I asked
“Yeah” she nodded
“Then why do wewe wish...
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posted by BladeYJ
((I alisema these were going to get shorter...I lied....<3 sorry<3333))

The punching bag swung back and flew mbele only to be sent back again as I caught it with a hard kick. "Again," was the command that came from the form behind me. Normally, I'd just tell him to get off of it au leave me alone, but the fact that this man had one hundred years of experience, was a vampire, and could easily rip me apart, pushed me to hike my foot back and slam it as hard as I could into the bag of sand. I heard the chain creak in agony as its limits were tested. "Good, again," Damian muttered, pulling...
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posted by Mclovin_69
Name: Elizibeth Tumin (Liz) (Lizbeth)

Alias: unknown.

Age: 14 (would be 18 now)

Appearance: long blonde hair and brown eyes, hair usually worn in braid au up (ponytail, bun)

Personality: she was stubborn and always thought she could do things on her own. she was brave on the outside but was scared but never let anyone see it. She was never the one to smile so easily and be at ease. And she was never someone who Lost without a fight.

Powers/Abilities: she doesn't have any powers but combat and sword skills.

Weapons: a single sword.

Past: died in a break out gone wrong.

Others: she wasn't someone to let people into her life. But she cared if someone were sad au upset.
posted by Mclovin_69
Name: Amara Federmen

Alias: none

Age:14 (but would be 18 now)

status: deceased

Relations: a sibling like relationship/ friendship to BloodMist.

Appearance: deep blue eyes, straight black hair that goes just goes down to her elbows, 5,6 and thin.

Powers/Abilities: she was never really confident in her fighting skills but tried hard for her team to be useful in battles. She had the ability to heal others with magic, though she is unable to heal herself.

Civvies: unknown.

Past: Misty and Amara met when they were both 14, BloodMist had wandered into a city that was alisema to be abandoned with hidden riches...
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Twan stepd out of the door.
Dont worry cad its just a boring meeting, and even if they try somting il have Boris whit me.
Oke but just be careful, wewe knowe howe triky thad bird is. Cadmus replied and whit thad twan left fore the meeting just a few yarts away he heard a explotion, turing around he saw cadmus laing in the sreed uncountios blown back kwa the force of the explotion, he ran over to her seeing the left side of her body being coverd in burn-marks.
He noticed a letter also being blown out it read:
"Hey Pup.
If wewe read this thad means your little pet snake found are suprise fore her.
Hope...
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posted by Kurls_Basd
((this takes places after the incident with Honesty in: The Power of the hexagon, pembesita series."))
He fell to the floor eyes tightly shut as his back stunk from the impact of the fall. Nate, the purple eye and purple haired boy, sat up clenching his teeth from vexation as the combat panel painted in deep red the fail writing. It was the third time he was staring at that writing, but what arguer him the most was the one that made him face the letters.

He looked up seeing the most, in his opinion, disgusting creature with his death-black hair and blooded-red eyes extending his hand to put him from the...
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