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Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. kwa no means am I forcing wewe to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless wewe truly believe that the club will be improved with the addition of this character. It helps if the new character has some relation to one of your existing characters, but it's not necessary.
2. Write something about them before wewe start posting. It can be as little as a bio, au as big as an entire makala series, but whatever the case, your character will generally be better recieved if we feel like we know them a little bit first.
3. Don't go overboard with the powers. I'd say no zaidi than 5 distinct powers, otherwise it gets to be overwhelming and annoying if your character can do everything. No one likes the character that, whatever situation he au she is in, can pull out another trick out of his au her hat.
4. If wewe absolutely must give your character tons of powers, then give them 1 to 3 "favorite powers". It's much less annoying if your character usually only uses a couple of his au her powers, as opposed to all 20.
5. Make their powers related. It drives people nuts when your character has thirty different powers that are completely bila mpangilio and unrelated to each other. They should be logically connected. For example, my OC Jackson (Thunderblade). His main power is communication with metal, and his other two powers, swordfighting and magnetism, logically stem from that.
6. Hero names should have some relation to them and/or their powers. There are exceptions, but still. It's confusing when wewe have, say, BlackCat whose powers are flight and telepathy. It just doesn't make sense.
7. Try not to copy others directly.. Yes, yes, I know, imitation is the highest form of flattery, but no one likes a deliberate copycat. That seems to be a trend with this group. One character gets pregnant, and the inayofuata siku you've got 3 other OCs that are preggo. One person creates a child that has some relation to their OC, and before we know it, the cave has turned into a daycare center.
8. Appearance and pets should, again, be related to their powers. Pets can be great when they are a familiar, that either has powers of its own au is linked to the character. And my biggest example of the appearance thing is the hivi karibuni outcropping of characters with cat ears and sometimes tails. Those are fine when they're actually related to their powers (if they have catlike senses, for example, au claws) but it's just annoying when they're completely unrelated.
9. Don't kill your character without a good reason. If wewe must kill your character, at least do it dramatically! And give a reason for why they must die! Don't just do it for attention, au so that your other characters have a reason to moan and be depressed.
10. Don't reincarnate your character unless necessary and justified. Which it usually isn't. But there are exceptions. And if wewe do provide a good reason, at least make it a process that takes up time. For example, when Fin was killed, it was logical that she would be reincarnated, since she was part phoenix. And it didn't happen overnight. It took a couple months for her to come back.
11. Don't make your character completely invincible. Your character can have limited invulnerability, kind of like Superman, but they can't be completely resistant to death and damage. Make it realistic, people! Even superheroes couldn't get shot au stabbed in the heart, then pop up dakika later completely fine, like nothing had happened.
12. Give your character a unique personality. Put simply, don't make them dull au flat. This goes back to the idea that a new OC should be making some sort of contribution to the group. It's a lot better if their personality affects the others in some way.
13. Give your character some weaknesses and/or flaws. Preferably both of them. That's all I can say.
14. Be careful if making your character related to au dating a canon character.. Make sure that it's realistic and not annoying. Same goes with if they're related to au dating another OC, especially if that OC was not created kwa you.
15. Make sure your character isn't a Mary Sue. No one likes a Mary Sue. link Mary Sues are honestly, just plain annoying. I'm not saying that if your existing character has some elements of "Sue-ism" that they're bad and need to be changed, but try to keep it in mind for new characters. If your not sure if your existing au potential character is a Mary Sue, au if wewe suspect he/she is, but don't know how to change it, wewe can take link. If wewe want, wewe can post the results here (Aisling got a 19, in case wewe were curious, which wewe probably weren't...).
So, that's all I have for now. Rage on me all wewe want, but just know that I don't care. Once again, kwa no means do wewe have to follow these. They aren't rules, merely a few suggestions.
For now,
AislingYJ :)
posted by Robin_Love
 Zeth
Zeth
I’ll add his OC Bio underneath all this. He’s one of the Outsiders, just one I don’t always use.

LAYER ONE: THE OUTSIDE
Full Name: Zeth Parker
Nickname: Z, Zay
Reason au meaning of name: Gift of God
Eye Color: Green
Hair Style/Color: Brown, short
Height: 5’ 7”
Clothing Style: Modern
Best Physical Feature: Eyes

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: Being found
Your Guilty Pleasure: Warm Fires
Your Biggest Pet Peeve: People wewe can’t trust
Your Ambition for the Future: Is to live an option?

LAYER THREE: THOUGHTS
Your First Thoughts Waking Up: Must...sleep
What wewe Think About the Most: My old master...
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posted by MafiaYJ
DID A WHOLE REVAMP FOR THIS GAL

General

Full Name : Katyushka Matryona Pavlova; Katyushka Dmitrievna
Nickname: Mafia, Cad, Yushka, Yona, Nana, Kat
Gender: Female
Place of Birth: Nyda, Russia
Birthday: April 22, 1994
Currently living in: Based in Gotham; constantly traveling
Species/Race: Human
Ethnicity: Russian
Occupation: Formerly, assassin
Sexual Orientation: Heterosexual
Social Status: Unknown

Appearance

Body Build: Muscular, some curves
Height: 5’5
Weight: 144 lbs
Skin colour: Warm Ivory
Hair style: To her shoulders to chin, depending on when wewe catch her, always down.
Hair colour: Red
Eye colour:...
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posted by Robin_Love
 Kai Conley
Kai Conley
LAYER ONE: THE OUTSIDE
Full Name:Kai Conley
Nickname: None
Reason au meaning of name: moto
Eye Color: Brown
Hair Style/Color: Blonde, wild
Height: 5’10”
Clothing Style: Modern?
Best Physical Feature: Everything ;)

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: Dying without living
Your Guilty Pleasure: Video Games
Your Biggest Pet Peeve: Fakes
Your Ambition for the Future: To live

LAYER THREE: THOUGHTS
Your First Thoughts Waking Up: I’m not ready for this
What wewe Think About the Most: Fire
What wewe Think About Before Bed: Finally over
You Think Your Best Quality Is: I don’t judge

LAYER FOUR: WHAT’S BETTER?
Single...
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posted by SilverWings13
It was her brother's idea of apologizing. Every time Ana left for an errand, au to go for a run as she had done two hours ago, she returned to find a new contribution to the ancient two-bedroom cabin. Yesterday it had been a pile of dry firewood, the siku before a repaired jikoni window. She had considered tossing the logs into the freezing river au shattering the window with a stone, but despite her anger, those resources allowed her to stay in the dilapidated cabin, kibanda away from the ngome where her brother lived like the false prince he was. The freezing mountain side was unfamiliar territory...
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posted by SilverWings13
LAYER ONE: THE OUTSIDE
Name: Callaghan Ivan Rurik
Reason au meaning of name: Callaghan like the royal O'Callaghans of Ireland, Ivan for Ivan the Terrible of Russia, and Rurik because my mother's last name is zaidi valuable than my father's.
Species: Warlock
Eye Color: Honey in the sunlight, midnight in the shade
Hair Style/Color: Short and dark with blonde highlights
Height: 6' even
Clothing Style: Flannels, t-shirts, jeans, and my glasses
Best Physical Feature: Everything (his humility)

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: Bats... Big, flying rats *shivers*
Your Guilty Pleasure: All night movie marathons...
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posted by Robin_Love
 Tara
Tara
LAYER ONE : THE OUTSIDE
Name: Tara Almaraz
Reason au meaning of name: “Queen” (Irish), “Star” (Asian)
Eye Color: Brown
Hair Style/Color: Blown, worn down mostly
Height: 5'7
Clothing Style: Uhm..suave nerd?
Best Physical Feature: Hair

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: Uhmm.....skip
Your Guilty Pleasure: Chocolate
Your Biggest Pet Peeve: Personal space
Your Ambition for the Future: To live...

LAYER THREE: THOUGHTS
Your First Thoughts Waking Up: I'm so sore
What wewe Think About the Most: Do white-haired Siberians count?
What wewe Think About Before Bed: I wish this was over already
You Think Your Best Quality...
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posted by SilverWings13
Note: Happens simultaneously as link


Hounds on the Bridge

The girl blinked quickly as her eyes adjusted to the sunlight while the white portal she had stepped through faded from existence. A warm Mediterranean breeze rustled her untidy red curls, carrying the scent of the sea. As much as she wanted to run through the narrow streets until she was panting for that sea salt sweet air, there was no time for such leisure. Her concern was for someone who had been left behind in the city kwa mistake.
Before she could even wonder about the trio that had meant to accompany her, her eyes found them. Though...
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posted by Robin_Love
 Jessie Bennett
Jessie Bennett
Name: Jessie Bennett
Alias: None
Powers: Healing, combat
Occupation: Doctor
Weakness/Limits: Unknown
History: Jessie Bennett came from a long line of pure-blood healers. Her race is unknown, despite how human she looks. Her aliyopewa name has been forgotten. She came to Earth much like the Man of Steel. But she was found kwa a traveling caravan in an Arabian desert. She grew up among them and immediately took a fondness to medicine. kwa accident, she found out her inhuman abilities when she was five. Almost immediately, she was sent away, to America. She spent almost a mwaka in a facility, learning English....
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posted by Eclipse-YJ
(In the not too distant future)

“I think Dad moved all the decorations down here” alisema Jayson pulling on the cord switch. The florescent lights illuminated the basement with a series of clicks and flickers. Christian followed Jayson down brushing his platinum white dyed hair from his eyes.

“whoa, got enough boxes?” Christian asked gazing on the labyrinth of old boxes and various sized bundles of stuff. Jayson smiled as he bent down to peak into the boxes closest time him.
“It’s mostly my Mums stuff and my old baby things, I think they’re too sentimental for Dad to get rid of so...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
Hi, life has been busy, sorry, kthnxbai



Chris' eyes widened as the weather began to spiral out of control, his grip on Alex tightening even more. "You're too emotional to even try and restrain him.." He swallowed and his eyes darted to Tobias who was tending to the speedster. "You three get out of here!" He handed Alex off to the two males, blowing into his hands afterwards. "Jaime!" He called out, slowly making his way through the blinding snow. Scotty snarled, snow and wind spiraled around the fox, mbweha as he made his way over towards Cadaver, shoving Erasers aside and pushing his way through,...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
 Before work
Before work
I lumped the two new ones in together because I didn't want to spam with articles.. My older characters will be out later. (:

Name: Fletcher Caverly
Alias: Was formerly known at Catalyst
Occupation: Was a hero, now is a scientist who secretly assists the YJ team.
Age: 25.
Appearance: Brown hair that usually hangs in front of his eyes, however when he is working it is usually pushed up in the front. He has dark green eyes and is unusually tan for someone who doesn't go outside much. He stands at 6'2 and is fairly thin.
Powers/skills: Fletcher is able to speed up chemical reactions with his touch,...
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posted by SilverWings13
Note: For anyone not up to speed with my one hundred and then some OCs, the small child = Alek, the hero/ Tara's boyfriend/ that guy who was practically Ary's brother but wewe all shipped them anyway. Dr. Felis is the bad guy and Aleksander's father, though Al doesn't know that until he's older. It'll make zaidi sense later.

The sun remained high in the sky, yet the air itself was practically frozen. Each breath promised a renewal of biting frost to the lungs and an exhale of smoke as white as the snow clinging to the grass. The men in black that marched toward the cliff were as silent as the...
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added by killer24
Source: Google image
added by Robin_Love
posted by DiscordYJ
 T^T
T^T
Name: Catalina Azure Liberty

Alias: Cobalt

Race: Caucasian

Nationality: French/American

Species: Half Spirit

Civvies: Varies

Costume:Doesn't have one.

Powers: She can make things die and cause things to live.

Apperance: Long blue hair with a light shaded streak down the middle of her bangs. She has fair skin and green/blue eyes.

Personality: Quiet, Content, Calm, Scared, Sad, Alone. But she also is annoyed easily and untrusting. (ONE WORDED RESPONSES)

Abilities/Skills: She was a gymnast, so she can do flips and tricks, and she is some-what skilled with knives, blades, and swords.

Background: Catalina...
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posted by Kurls_Basd
 Ashley in civvies
Ashley in civvies
Events of before and during the fire.
Ashley had just finished with a mission. Jaivus was her temporary bodyguard kwa Kaya's orders, he had just picked her up from her phone booth in her blonde wig with blue jeans and shirt
"Let's get ice-cream." She says with a thumbs up. He didn't answer but rather turn and continued walking down the road. She rolled her eyes and ran up behind he pulling his hoodie down. Jaivus turned to her exposing his sapphire eyes.
"Please.."
"You really are annoying." He replied, in a low tune walking away from her. She walked briskly pass him grabbing his hand.
"Ashley...
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posted by Blitz359
////Sigh....there's, like, one au two zaidi parts after this one.////////

Richi looked up at his friends, his eyes empty and cold, as if the moto that once fueled his emotions had finally snuffed out. They glanced over at the two bodies in the shadows kwa the corner, and an audible choke escaped from his mouth. "We're done here." stated Richi, his words monotone and meaningless, and he stepped away from the decapitated corpse. Before Richi could say anything else, a long beep emitted from the remains of Giovanni's metal suit. Without warning, the ground under the teens began to tremble and rumble,...
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posted by Kurls_Basd
 Frostbite aka Kaya Ashley's older sis
Frostbite aka Kaya Ashley's older sis
"Do wewe have any idea how hard I worked to get it like this." Aquapoint yelled, as Artemis and Mafia hit the ground. Mafia rubbed her head, "She worried about her hair and not her partners."
"At least wewe know what i have to put up with." Artemis said, as she and Mafia stood on their feet and backed up to Aquapoint.
"I'm going to turn wewe into a popsicle Sparky!" She yelled. Artemis and Mafia looked down at the protégés both astounded kwa her words.
"Wow you're pretty ticked off about your hair." Mafia said.
"You're not turning anyone into anything kid." The blue head male alisema firmly, "Look I...
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"Ugh, that girl is still confusing. Even after five years." Nye got up, holding his untouched coffee, and walked towards the door. He went back to Jennifer's place and handed her his coffee. "Here, I didn't sip any of it."

"I wouldn't have minded if wewe did," she said, taking it and drinking a little. "So, who did wewe go to meet? David? James?"

"Charlotte." Her eyes grew wide, because she knew who he was talking about.

"Why would wewe go to her?" She whispered.

"Because she's the only who'd be able to figure it out."

"That's not true. wewe could have gone to-"

"No," he interrupted. "I couldn't."...
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