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Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. kwa no means am I forcing wewe to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless wewe truly believe that the club will be improved with the addition of this character. It helps if the new character has some relation to one of your existing characters, but it's not necessary.
2. Write something about them before wewe start posting. It can be as little as a bio, au as big as an entire makala series, but whatever the case, your character will generally be better recieved if we feel like we know them a little bit first.
3. Don't go overboard with the powers. I'd say no zaidi than 5 distinct powers, otherwise it gets to be overwhelming and annoying if your character can do everything. No one likes the character that, whatever situation he au she is in, can pull out another trick out of his au her hat.
4. If wewe absolutely must give your character tons of powers, then give them 1 to 3 "favorite powers". It's much less annoying if your character usually only uses a couple of his au her powers, as opposed to all 20.
5. Make their powers related. It drives people nuts when your character has thirty different powers that are completely bila mpangilio and unrelated to each other. They should be logically connected. For example, my OC Jackson (Thunderblade). His main power is communication with metal, and his other two powers, swordfighting and magnetism, logically stem from that.
6. Hero names should have some relation to them and/or their powers. There are exceptions, but still. It's confusing when wewe have, say, BlackCat whose powers are flight and telepathy. It just doesn't make sense.
7. Try not to copy others directly.. Yes, yes, I know, imitation is the highest form of flattery, but no one likes a deliberate copycat. That seems to be a trend with this group. One character gets pregnant, and the inayofuata siku you've got 3 other OCs that are preggo. One person creates a child that has some relation to their OC, and before we know it, the cave has turned into a daycare center.
8. Appearance and pets should, again, be related to their powers. Pets can be great when they are a familiar, that either has powers of its own au is linked to the character. And my biggest example of the appearance thing is the hivi karibuni outcropping of characters with cat ears and sometimes tails. Those are fine when they're actually related to their powers (if they have catlike senses, for example, au claws) but it's just annoying when they're completely unrelated.
9. Don't kill your character without a good reason. If wewe must kill your character, at least do it dramatically! And give a reason for why they must die! Don't just do it for attention, au so that your other characters have a reason to moan and be depressed.
10. Don't reincarnate your character unless necessary and justified. Which it usually isn't. But there are exceptions. And if wewe do provide a good reason, at least make it a process that takes up time. For example, when Fin was killed, it was logical that she would be reincarnated, since she was part phoenix. And it didn't happen overnight. It took a couple months for her to come back.
11. Don't make your character completely invincible. Your character can have limited invulnerability, kind of like Superman, but they can't be completely resistant to death and damage. Make it realistic, people! Even superheroes couldn't get shot au stabbed in the heart, then pop up dakika later completely fine, like nothing had happened.
12. Give your character a unique personality. Put simply, don't make them dull au flat. This goes back to the idea that a new OC should be making some sort of contribution to the group. It's a lot better if their personality affects the others in some way.
13. Give your character some weaknesses and/or flaws. Preferably both of them. That's all I can say.
14. Be careful if making your character related to au dating a canon character.. Make sure that it's realistic and not annoying. Same goes with if they're related to au dating another OC, especially if that OC was not created kwa you.
15. Make sure your character isn't a Mary Sue. No one likes a Mary Sue. link Mary Sues are honestly, just plain annoying. I'm not saying that if your existing character has some elements of "Sue-ism" that they're bad and need to be changed, but try to keep it in mind for new characters. If your not sure if your existing au potential character is a Mary Sue, au if wewe suspect he/she is, but don't know how to change it, wewe can take link. If wewe want, wewe can post the results here (Aisling got a 19, in case wewe were curious, which wewe probably weren't...).
So, that's all I have for now. Rage on me all wewe want, but just know that I don't care. Once again, kwa no means do wewe have to follow these. They aren't rules, merely a few suggestions.
For now,
AislingYJ :)
posted by BloodyMascara_
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So uh....yeah! I dont think Im alone on this never ending road of horror! Its like, Lady Gaga's song "Bad Romance" isnt even about a guy! Its about the abusive relationship with- with- with delicious things that wewe wanna eat, but wewe dont wanna eat, then wewe eat it then wewe beat yourself up and ugh! wewe cant win! READ IT au I WILL EAT MEL!

Mel stood on the scale, she hissed at the scale when the number '120' came up. She sat on her kitanda and poked her stomach.
"Gyah!" She alisema and poked it again.
"Diet starts today....." She said.

10 dakika later

Mel sat on the counter, a plate on her lap.
"Promised...
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posted by The_Writer
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"Girl problems?" Batgirl asked.

Revenge glared at her. She raised an eyebrow.

"You're forgetting, I work with Batman."

Revenge sighed and nodded.

"So where are we going?"

Revenge grinned. "Somewhere special."

Barbara raised an eyebrow as Revenge walked down a ramp and into a bar. The sekunde they entered, the noisy room went silent. Barbara heard whispers which inlcuded "Bat" "Make a run for it" and "Shit".

"Firefly. Where is he and who hired him?" Revenge asked.

Whispers went around the room. Finally, one guy stood up. "He ain't here."

"I gathered that." Revenge replied.

The man spoke in a strong voice....
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posted by Robin_Love
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“I'm so glad wewe all could be here. Seeing as this is your last day, we may as well make it short.”
“You're a monster Amber. wewe always were!”
Becca cringed at the sound of skin hitting skin. She grinded her teeth together, letting a low growl peep out.
“Amber, wewe better NOT have just slapped her,” Becca warned menacingly.
“What can wewe do warrior? You're bond just like-”
Amber suddenly cut herself off with a laugh. Becca wished she could close her ears.
“Oh no. This is...this is too good! Devin!”
Amber laughed again as an air of confusion fell into place. Each person waited...
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posted by The_Writer
SUPER IMPORTANT UPDATE
Concerning

Red Revenge, The Arrowette Series, Static Shock the Series, Ravager: Agent of Righteousness, Knights of Temptation (WIP), Daily (Countdown) Episodes, and Soviet: The Series




Overview: Alright. Finally moving outta this hell-hole and into a much nicer house. That's right, I'm moving. Not saying how far au when au what. Okay, maybe when. Anyways the main point is until the beginning of September, I will have almost NO time to do anything. So, I know you're dying to know what is going to happen to your inayopendelewa series. Well, here wewe are:


DAILY (COUNTDOWN) EPISODES...
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posted by Robin_Love
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Yes. I'm evil.




She stared at him, speechless. He came close to her and took her hands.
“It's okay Kitten. Relax.”
“H-how can this be? I killed you.”
“No.”
She shook her head and stepped backwards, reclaiming her hands.
“No. This...this isn't right!”
“Cat-”
“No! wewe aren't Alex!”
“Don't be so sure little Kitten.”
“Alex died!”
He stepped closer and she scratched him. He screamed and glared at her.
“You mess with a force wewe can't handle, Kitten!”
“Stop! wewe aren't Alex! Only Alex can call me that!”
The form flickered and Teague stood before her. Cat tried to run, but...
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posted by SilverWings13
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The clang of forks and knives was the only sound to fill the silence. The four of them sat together, eating a normal dinner. Like a family.
The hot-head, blind telepath, winged girl, and energy manipulator. All under the age of 18. The most normal family wewe could think of.
None of them pretended the fifth place was supposed to be empty. Their knife-wielder, ex-thief and ex-conn. Youngest. Smartest. The first to grow out of the squad. Of the Double Helex.
Each teenager glanced at the empty kiti, kiti cha multiple times. But neither had the insensibility to say anything, to call each other out. Not until...
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posted by Robin_Love
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NOW it get's fun! >:)


He stood in the shadows. Things were too calm.
“It's starting.”
A raspy whisper answered.
“Yesss. wewe know what wewe must do.”
“Destroy them.”
“Correct.”
“The fools let it happen.”
“Unfortunately. But remember, they are only human.”
“Of course. What else?”
“Remember, nothing that will happen has been foreseen. Nothing could be changed.”
“How do wewe think they'll take it when they find out?”
“Harshly. No one will hear from them for weeks.”
“They'll go into hiding?”
“Worse.”
“What will happen?”
“It will be like they were never here.”...
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Explanations One-Shot
(Inbetween Final Battle at the School and Wally's arrival in the Cave in Chapter 15)


Artemis closed the book and laid her head on it, drifting off to sleep. She hated Biology. The two things she hated zaidi were biology tests and late-night cramming for biology tests.

Artemis was almost asleep when the phone rang. She cracked open one eye to look at the clock. It was around one o'clock in the morning. She groaned and sat up, heading over to pick up the phone.

"Hello?" she asked sleepily.

"Artemis!"

"Holly? What are wewe doing calling at one in the morning?"

"Oops! I didn't wake...
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posted by AislingYJ
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OOC: Okay let me explain and apologize. This is going to be dark, extremely dark, and probably pretty twisted too. If wewe don’t like that type of thing, don’t read this. I don’t usually write this type of stuff, but I can explain...maybe. See, lately I’ve been kusoma some pretty dark, often graphic, Slade/Robin slash on fanfiction.net. If you’ve ever read any of that, you’ll understand. I’m pretty sure it messed with my mind, because the other day, I had a very...vivid.. dream about it. So of course, me being the lunatic that I am, I had to write it down. This is the slightly...
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"And what exactly are these 'heroes' giving us nthing but destruction for property damage!" the news reported yelled at the camera. Caleb looked at the TV to his sister sitting on their kitanda then the Tv and his sister. She had a placid face while she ate her cereal. "Day why are wewe watching the news?" he asked her. "I hate this guy" she answered still watching him. "Then why are wewe listening to him?" Caleb shook his head.

"i don't know but he pisses me off" she glared. Sitting down with his toast he grabbed the remote. "okay let's watch some cartoons!" he flipped through channels. "see lets...
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posted by Robin_Love
 Irene
Irene
LAYER ONE: THE OUTSIDE
Full Name: Irene Hope Adams
Nickname: Ren
Reason au meaning of name: Peace; Hope; Man
Eye Color: Purple
Hair Style/Color: Light Purple/ lilac
Height: 4’5
Clothing Style: Depends on my mood
Best Physical Feature: My eyes

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: Killing zaidi innocents...
Your Guilty Pleasure: Flowers
Your Biggest Pet Peeve: Ignorance
Your Ambition for the Future: To be happy

LAYER THREE: THOUGHTS
Your First Thoughts Waking Up: Better get up
What wewe Think About the Most: My powers
What wewe Think About Before Bed: Staying asleep
You Think Your Best Quality Is: Uhh….

LAYER...
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posted by Robin_Love
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 Jessie
Jessie
So I did this awhile back so wewe could get to know my ocs on a bit of another level but I revamped it so Jessie gets 2

Name: Jessie Bennett

Likes: Gardening

Best Friend: Joan (Alix Penn)

Loves: Animals

Dislikes: Poaching/Hunting

Worst Habit: Sleeping at her desk

Personal Secret: Is used to hurting herself for the need of others

inayopendelewa Food: Anything Meat-Free (Vegetarian)

inayopendelewa Color: Turquoise au Jade

Code Name: None

Mentor/Inspiration: Poison Ivy

Relations: None

Base of Operations: JLA Headquarters

Personal Home: Garden of Eden
posted by Robin_Love
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 Erin Roy
Erin Roy
LAYER ONE: THE OUTSIDE
Full Name: Erin Roy
Nickname: N/A
Reason au meaning of name: name for Ireland; German for “red”
Eye Color: Purple
Hair Style/Color: Short, red
Height: 5’4”
Clothing Style: Comfortable
Best Physical Feature: My…..hair?

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: Loosing friends
Your Guilty Pleasure: Baking candy
Your Biggest Pet Peeve: Impatient people; weird. I know
Your Ambition for the Future: To run

LAYER THREE: THOUGHTS
Your First Thoughts Waking Up: Time to EAT!
What wewe Think About the Most: Fooooooood
What wewe Think About Before Bed: Do I need food?
You Think Your Best Quality...
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posted by Robin_Love
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 Dalila
Dalila
LAYER ONE: THE OUTSIDE
Full Name: Dalila Summners
Nickname: Dali
Reason au meaning of name: Dalila means “Gentle” in Egyptian
Eye Color: Green
Hair Style/Color: Dark brown/black
Height: 5’ 7
Clothing Style: Ancient
Best Physical Feature: Skin

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: I have none
Your Guilty Pleasure: Scratches
Your Biggest Pet Peeve: Loud barking dogs
Your Ambition for the Future: To thrive!

LAYER THREE: THOUGHTS
Your First Thoughts Waking Up: Another 5 dakika won’t hurt
What wewe Think About the Most: My partner
What wewe Think About Before Bed: Finally some rest!
You Think Your Best Quality...
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posted by Robin_Love
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 Terror
Terror
LAYER ONE: THE OUTSIDE
Full Name: Terror
Nickname: Ter
Reason au meaning of name: Terror means fear
Eye Color: Piercing blue
Hair Style/Color: Platinum blonde
Height: 5’12
Clothing Style: Whatever’s comfortable
Best Physical Feature: I don’t know ( His eyes)

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: That’d be telling
Your Guilty Pleasure: Sleep
Your Biggest Pet Peeve: People
Your Ambition for the Future: Living?

LAYER THREE: THOUGHTS
Your First Thoughts Waking Up: I slept?
What wewe Think About the Most: Nothing
What wewe Think About Before Bed: Must be tired
You Think Your Best Quality Is: Nothing

LAYER FOUR:...
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posted by Robin_Love
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 Alix Penn; Joan of Arc
Alix Penn; Joan of Arc
LAYER ONE: THE OUTSIDE
Full Name: Alix Penn to others, Joan of Arc to Heroes alike
Nickname: Alix, Alice, Jo, au Joan
Reason au meaning of name: Alix means “of noble kind”; Penn meaning “Enclosure”
Eye Color: Green
Hair Style/Color: Long, wavy, light brown/dark blonde
Height: 5’4”
Clothing Style: Modest
Best Physical Feature: Eyes

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: I fear nothing
Your Guilty Pleasure: French Cuisine
Your Biggest Pet Peeve: Those who think themselves higher than others
Your Ambition for the Future: To protect

LAYER THREE: THOUGHTS
Your First Thoughts Waking Up: What chai to drink?...
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added by SilverWings13
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posted by Robin_Love
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The moon was high in the sky kwa the time she got home, her slinky black dress already too uncomfortable. She took off her heels and put the gun back in her safe. She sighed as she went to the kitchen, prepping a glass with scotch from her little bar before taking a sip. She walked into her room and put the glass on the bedside table. She slipped off the dress and dressed in a pair of black shorts and a red t-shirt too large for her frame. Seeing a red light on the phone, she played the recorded message.
“Hey Becca, it’s Devin. I know wewe wanted to be alone, but Fang and I-”
The recording...
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posted by SilverWings13
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The endless halls of the immense cathedral were quiet, but not silent. Wind whispered through cracks in the ancient walls and wooden floors, like ghosts seeping in and out of the hallways. Tall stained glass windows allowed in colorful light during the day. The infirmary’s windows, however, were plain glass, and the moonlight filtered into the room as soft white light between shadows. The only color came from a single, small rose stain-glass window high above the door. Nestled in the center of the purple and dhahabu petals was a tiny angel. The Angel had its eyes closed and head bowed over the...
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posted by SilverWings13
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Oops, accidently deleted this. It’s the same Owl King as before!

Bodies leaned over standing-tables and elbowed to get a place at the bar. Voices filled the air in layers until it was a constant roar of noise. Amidst it all, a young woman in a short, sparkling aquamarine dress slipped through the bodies. She emerged from the crowd as she reached the bar, feeling a moment of respite from the suffocating stench of acrid cigarette drags, fruity e-cig puffs, and stifling body sweat. Her eyes seemed to scan the row of amber bottles on the back ukuta in front of a long mirror. Really, she was watching...
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