Sorry in advance for bieng so short and to the piont, but it is great none the less! Please read!

The metal was empty, but the soul was full. How could anybody tell this kid that he was nothing zaidi then an empty shell? Scar couldnt take the cries of a child lightly. Without thinking he bent down and kissed the cold hard metal.

Alphonse stopped the wimpering and looked up at the scarred man in his presence. He noticed him, he actually did. Al was overjoyed and delighted at this notion that someone other then his brother had loved him in some great while. "But I thought I was dead, that I didnt...