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This poem is devoted to every girl who'sad and feels like nobody understands her...I'd like to hear your opinion.

Sitting in her room,listening her inayopendelewa song over and over again...
Her head is full of thoughts she won't share with anybody but paper...
She's alone,no matter if there's somebody around.
She's alone with her thoughts,trying to get away,to suppress the dark side of her soul,to kill every dark thought that travels through her mind...
And remember,dream is just a fantasy,you won't escape from your fear,you won't find your cure dreaming better days...
And she cries only when she's alone,so nobody can hear,and she prays for the siku when the Sun will shine again,the siku when she will feel the joy of life,the purpose will be bright...

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NICE WORK!!! its nice!
viju posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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Thanks...
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i understand all thiz
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GaGaBoi said:
Personally i think she needs to get laid.
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lol
irena83 posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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LOL!
xXSweeneyXx posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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WOW!!
ashlii posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
LuvWeezy7 said:
Just so wewe don't freak out i am stating MY opinion. :)

I thought it sucked. Maybe it was good for your level of work but to me it wasn't all that great.
This must be just me but, it wasn't put together all too well. Some words didn't fit in there and other words didn't even exist where they needed to be.

Other than that wewe do have a good idea i must say.
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Sorry for being a critic. I just have a thing for uandishi and your mistakes bugged me. :( Please don't take this personally.
LuvWeezy7 posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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No,it's ok. I like honest answer.
irena83 posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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well,i'm not american,and therefore i can not express myself the way i want...
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xxXsk8trXxx said:
Honestly...me and most other girls I know are nothing like that at ALL.
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Thanks for being honest. But this poem is about barriers that should be broken. One frozen moment of sorrow.
irena83 posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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How emo. Why are there no happy poems anymore? Do all poems have to be about some type of 'sorrow' that's ruining your life?
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thanks
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depp-fan said:
ITS VERY BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!
I upendo IT
GREAT JOB!!!!!
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thanks honey.
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Goth-Girl-36 said:
i upendo it! it sounds alot like me.
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amethyst44 said:
i upendo this. poetry is something wewe should pursue. ;) <3
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;) thanks a lot.
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energizerbunny said:
I think it's a good poem, I believe there are girls like this, I may not know any but I think there are and I feel sorry for them
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thanks...
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Jamie38459 said:
It's a sad poem, so very true,that it was made 2 the others who R feelin bloo. Sorrowful and a painful life, that (maybe) only we can tell, that she'll feel down everyday, and may feel worse than hell(maybe).
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nice comment... thanks.
irena83 posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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Ur welcome :)
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skillet_luvr said:
I like it. It's really good. :)
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thanks...
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zanesaaomgfan said:
Funny...That reminds me of some girl at my school, who has issues...She touches wewe in uncomfortable ways that wewe couldn't explain, she asks to be her friend when your in a bad mood, she laughs when somebody else can't answer the swali but when the teacher calls on her she stays quiet, and she laughs at her own insults, so if wewe say, "Oh, wewe stink!" She'll freakin' laugh like your insulting yourself. Shes such an idiot! Thats why I refuse to be her friend!
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Maybe wewe should be her freind, you'll find out that people can surprise wewe like I did
K5-HOWL posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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If she touches my boobs, like she did today, should I? Umm no.
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zutaradragon said:
sounds like me...
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TheFunnyChick95 said:
Completely describes me. Thank you... :)
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What!?
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josh-ada said:
OMG!!!!
ITS SO LOVELY POEM!!!!
i m not like that girl but that poem made me cry :(
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irena83 posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
DWLoverTBCEDT said:
that's beautiful, I upendo it
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thanks...
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K5-HOWL said:
Yup
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Yup
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aw i like it....
irena83 posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
fabstar said:
luv it :)
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thanks...
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JB4E said:
I upendo the poem, I simpily upendo it.
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thanks...
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Vixie79 said:
I upendo this one. Like I alisema before, I'm so glad I'm not the only one that feels this. For years I did. Some of my fantasies have been such agony, because I never could experience them. This poem was simply written truthfully and straight forward. I upendo it! ♥
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