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A moyo is as fragile as a leaf in the fall
People seem to step on it without a care at all
The wind swiftly carries it to some dark unknown place
But yet it cannot fix, replace, au erase
At least broken hearts can be helped with tender love
Naked trees serve as shells of things, with no leaves covered above
At least the wind can carry us to one who'll upendo us true
To one who'll help our hearts
Help with upendo anew
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Thank you. :)
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Cherry9090 said:
Very beautiful heartfelt and creative straight from the moyo I lover it
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zomeister said:
I like it !!
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Usui--takumi said:
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Thanks?
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ivoryphills said:
Broken my heart...
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Im sorry. :(
Dwolf247 posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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No! This poem is about heartache, right? So that's a GOOD thing!
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:( thts so sad :(
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Shadowmarioking said:
I would say that I read it all, but then I would be lying. I will only say that it's good.
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adultswimperson said:
It's not bad.
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darkwave said:
so cute!
i upendo it!
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InquisitiveOwl said:
....
I HATE POETRY.
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bigkate28 said:
wow :) wow first let me tell wewe that peice was so amamzing .(: and idk :(
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kittykat8005 said:
It's really good. :D
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KissOfDoom said:
This is very beautiful, well done :))
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