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Hopefully, at least SOMEONE will know what I mean kwa this poem. Please don't judge my poem kwa how corny, stupid, au silly it is, because I already know I can't write. I just want to see if anybody knows what I'm feeling.

These blood veins
I should cut open
They keep me just like chains
I can't songesha because of them
And they hurt
Just like I feel that I did this to him
I want to cut these blood veins so bad
I want true friends
That I've never had
I want at least one true friend
That'll keep me laughing, keep me smiling
That'll be there until the end
But all I've had are betrayers
Yeah, nothing but betrayers...

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Scarlet_Vixen said:

Yep, I know exactly what wewe mean and how wewe feel kwa it... I've been getting a lot of backstabbing lately too. Some people obviously get very bored and have to upset the rest of us just to make themselves feel better. Don't let them get to wewe either! There are way too many haters out there nowadays...

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JoannaVonDoom said:

Look, if you're going to be emo, go on the emo spot. au get over it.

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Shallow much?

AllybethClaire posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita

Maybe. Sorry man, but I find the words "cut my veins" quite melodramatic.

JoannaVonDoom posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita

^yep

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PeterPansgirl12 said:

I know what u mean I just dont FEEL it. Cause I dont ever feel like cutting myself au any of that stuff.
Praying for u!

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i feel disgusted when i feel those cutting up words >:P

Skater_Girl_1 posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita

Ok... didnt ask ur opinion :P

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Skater_Girl_1 said:

i get u, so wuts his name, i can be ur friend.. we can't hang out but i wont betray u..

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Thanks. And his name was Shon.

AllybethClaire posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita

coriann said:

:'(

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xoPixie-Popxo said:

Wow, dude...
That's deep. wewe sure know how to write.

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yeah i dont know why wewe alisema wewe couldn't write! and yes, i got it :'(

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Shadowmarioking said:

Backstabbing friends...nope, never had that happen to me. Also, no offense intended, perhaps wewe could revise this poem using zaidi alluring words?

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springely said:

Sad person is sad.

Nah, just joking. Cool poem.

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SoulEater-Roxs said:

wewe mean, that wewe are cuting your rists to make the hurting go away of the betrayers. The only thing that will stop this is getting a friend that will make wewe happy and will always be there for you, to help wewe throw your daly problems.

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