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Heyy tell me what wewe think of this poem i wrote. I wrote this poem cause i was recently backstabed kwa someone i called my bestfriend. (Btw let me know if i need to change anything to make it better au any suggestions please & thank you)

Bestfriends are suppose to help wewe up when you're down, Not help wewe make your way down. Bestfriend should care & upendo wewe for who wewe are, Not what wewe look au act like. Bestfriends should know the real you, not the fake you, Bestfriends should never make wewe change, They should like wewe for being yourself. What's the true meaning of a bestfriend?
 Isabella_17 posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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afsha1997 said:
oh good but it's not rhyme sorry. wewe should write like these
best Marafiki supposed to help wewe when wewe are sad
when everything wrong everything is bad
my best friend leave me alone when i need her
now there's nothing just dark blue colour
why did wewe betrayed me i'm feeling all alone
feels like my moyo falls to pieces now i'm gone.
i knw my also weird :P
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That good:] bettr than mine
Isabella_17 posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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