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What do wewe guys think of my poem? My English teacher alisema it was good but I want to know your opinions :3 Please no harsh maoni ^_^

Dragons
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Up high in the sky they fly
baiskeli, baisikeli round and round
Their mighty wings are great things
Soaring over the clouds
One kwa one they go
Greater than birds
Greater than planes
Their large bodies lift them away
Dragon power is strong
They are a peaceful creature
Always aflight in the sky
They shall never be dismissed
And stay with us forever
Respect them
Treasure them
For soon they will be nonexistent
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it's nice .3.
XxKeithHarkinxX posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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thanks :D
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XxKeithHarkinxX said:
wewe want our opinions but we can't say anything bad?


seems legit.
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well they can be but I don't understand why anyone would say something mean D:
16falloutboy posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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Criticism m'dear.
XxKeithHarkinxX posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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@Keith Agreed. @16fallout CRITICISM learn to take it.
BlindBandit92 posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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huh
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Ssmiley_143 said:
It is good!
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It is good!
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:DDDD yay thanks
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egyptprincess7 said:
It's great.
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thanks :D
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Kenny756 said:
Its Nice! :)
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thank u ^_^
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scalesandtails1 said:
That is really good!!
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thanks :D
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BlindBandit92 said:
Half the poem didn't rhyme but ujumla, jumla I like it. But honestly it is not one of my inayopendelewa poems.
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eh I'm not that good with rhyming but thank wewe :D
16falloutboy posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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^You're quite welcome.
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Usui--takumi said:
Well.. dragoni are peaceful creature? Lmao."Respect them and treasure them..For soon they will be nonexistent". They don't exist in the first place xDD Anyway, that was sweet and nice :D
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um wrong they DO exist :3
16falloutboy posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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but anyway thx
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Anime_Gir1235 said:
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IT WUZ AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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... IT WUZ AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:DDDDDD
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