bila mpangilio

jibu swali hili

bila mpangilio Swali

School Project! I have to make a Dystopian Movie, and this is my plot. Please tell me how good it is.

Plot:

The world now has half human, half animal beings. Laboratories have taken these beings to a place known as Area 18. Now, an outside half wolf, half human named Nick Wolfe must save the mutants.
 BlondLionEzel posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
next question »

bila mpangilio Majibu

prussiaducky said:
Haha XD that's cute
 select as best answer
posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita 
*
thanks
BlondLionEzel posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
*
welcome ^^
prussiaducky posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
*
:)
BlondLionEzel posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
Faithgurl said:
This reminds me a lot of Dewsparkle's RP--you might want to change it a little bit. But over all sounds good.
select as best answer
posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita 
*
thanks :)
BlondLionEzel posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
HeitsiTsegin said:
Often, dystopian sinema involve government. I would suggest trying to find a way to tie in a corrupt totalitarian government in with this, like have the government doing this in order to create super soldiers to help in a war that they are waging to take land from a neighboring democratic country.
 select as best answer
posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita 
*
sure!
BlondLionEzel posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
delusional said:
Don't think I don't know what wewe doing! >:)
 select as best answer
posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita 
*
eh?
BlondLionEzel posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
*
Well, I don't know if I should say it out loud, I might pset you. But just so wewe have an idea of what I'm talking about......I know this is about Maximum Ride.......I'll say the rest out loud if wewe want me to.....
delusional posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
Shadowmarioking said:
the plot is flat and not interesting
as stated beforehand, dystopian sinema are set around the government restricting the rights au oppressing the masses in a certain manner. dystopian sinema can also revolve around there being no government; an anarchy if wewe will.
the idea of the plot is thoroughly flawed since it fails to provide necessary detail. "half human half animal" can be replaced w/ "mutants" au "genetically altered beings". the swali as to "why" all of this is happening fails to be addressed, zaidi importantly why nick has to save the mutants. who is he saving them from, anyway?

wewe seriously need to address the faults in your ujumla, jumla idea if wewe want to get anywhere with it. everything must be accounted for au the script goes nowhere
select as best answer
posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita 
next question »
Cookies help us bring you Fanpop. By using Fanpop, you agree to our use of cookies. Learn More Got It!