My little sister (she's 10) had to make a story in class and it was about a land of treats. She made her favourite character (Lindsay) a lolli-pop and Beth, a chokoleti bar and Owen an evil snake! So here's her story...
World Of Treats!
In the World of Treats, there lived two best friends, LindsayPop and BethChoc and they loved to play together.
One day, Lindsay and Beth were playing in the park, when Owen (aka the snake) jumped out of no-where and alisema ‘I’m going to take over and eat wewe up!’ Then they both ran as fast as they could, when Lindsay fell over. Owen grabbed her and ran away with Lindsay! Lindsay screamed at the juu of her lungs and yelled ‘Help me! Help me!’ Beth alisema back ‘I will save wewe Lindsay!’ She then thought ‘I have an idea!’
Later Beth went to the snake’s secret lair. ‘How did wewe know about my secret lair?!’ Owen alisema as he appeared. ‘Well, outside it says “Secret Lair” Now give me my friend!’ yelled Beth. Owen replied ‘NO! I will not!’ Beth told him ‘Then I will eat wewe up!’ ‘You eat me up? wewe wish!’ Owen alisema back. Beth alisema ‘Oh, yeah?! I will onyesha you!’ Beth then started to eat Owen up. ‘Why do I feel a lot smaller? No, no! Tell my mum I upendo her, NO!’ yelled Owen when he was getting eaten up. ‘Thank you! Thank wewe so much Beth! Do wewe want to get something to eat?’ asked Lindsay. ‘No, I’m full!’ Beth replied.
So Owen the snake will never be seen again! Lindsay and Beth will never run into that again and everything was back to the where it was!
World Of Treats!
In the World of Treats, there lived two best friends, LindsayPop and BethChoc and they loved to play together.
One day, Lindsay and Beth were playing in the park, when Owen (aka the snake) jumped out of no-where and alisema ‘I’m going to take over and eat wewe up!’ Then they both ran as fast as they could, when Lindsay fell over. Owen grabbed her and ran away with Lindsay! Lindsay screamed at the juu of her lungs and yelled ‘Help me! Help me!’ Beth alisema back ‘I will save wewe Lindsay!’ She then thought ‘I have an idea!’
Later Beth went to the snake’s secret lair. ‘How did wewe know about my secret lair?!’ Owen alisema as he appeared. ‘Well, outside it says “Secret Lair” Now give me my friend!’ yelled Beth. Owen replied ‘NO! I will not!’ Beth told him ‘Then I will eat wewe up!’ ‘You eat me up? wewe wish!’ Owen alisema back. Beth alisema ‘Oh, yeah?! I will onyesha you!’ Beth then started to eat Owen up. ‘Why do I feel a lot smaller? No, no! Tell my mum I upendo her, NO!’ yelled Owen when he was getting eaten up. ‘Thank you! Thank wewe so much Beth! Do wewe want to get something to eat?’ asked Lindsay. ‘No, I’m full!’ Beth replied.
So Owen the snake will never be seen again! Lindsay and Beth will never run into that again and everything was back to the where it was!
PD: Please dont hurt me....... PLEASE I DO ANY THING!
Guy: Any thing wewe say well a kiss would not hurt.
PD: Is that all I have to do?
Guy: Yes and play around a little bit.
PD: OK.
N:After a little bit they came to a little river and they kissed for a little bit.But a soon as they stopped the PD punched him in the kisser and took off.
PD:*I really hope he isnt following me*
N: Pretty soon the PD got to the police station and they captured the crimnal and put him in the stony lonsome then the PD stopped her job and is now working in a coffey duka and her name was Courtney.
TO BE CONTINUDE............
Guy: Any thing wewe say well a kiss would not hurt.
PD: Is that all I have to do?
Guy: Yes and play around a little bit.
PD: OK.
N:After a little bit they came to a little river and they kissed for a little bit.But a soon as they stopped the PD punched him in the kisser and took off.
PD:*I really hope he isnt following me*
N: Pretty soon the PD got to the police station and they captured the crimnal and put him in the stony lonsome then the PD stopped her job and is now working in a coffey duka and her name was Courtney.
TO BE CONTINUDE............
Chris: Hello everyone! Today we're going to Hollywood!
Lucas: Awesome!
Jake: Sweet!
Chris: Everyone get on the Plane!
*everyone gets on the plane*
*On the plane*
Zoey: So what do wewe think our Challange is going to be this time?
Annie: Hopefully not another sports challange!
Jordan: hujambo guys who got voted off of your team?
Lexxi: Briony! Im so happy!
Zack: Yeah, she was bossy!
Chef: Attention everyone, the plane will be landin in 5...4..3..2...1!!!
*The plane lands*
*everyone gets off*
Jared: Ahh, Hollywood smells,good.
Izzy: It smells like Sex and Shoes!
Jake: Um. Okay Then?
Chris: Since we're in Hollywood, the Challange will be a sining contest!
Katy Perry: hujambo everyone!
Annie&Lexxi: OMG ITS KATY PERRY!!!
30H!3: Sup
Lucas: Oh my god, wewe guys are AWESOME!
30H!3: Yeah we know
Chris: Your Challange will be to sing a song kwa Katy Perry and a song kwa 30H!3! Got it?
*STAY TUNED FOR PART 2!!*
Lucas: Awesome!
Jake: Sweet!
Chris: Everyone get on the Plane!
*everyone gets on the plane*
*On the plane*
Zoey: So what do wewe think our Challange is going to be this time?
Annie: Hopefully not another sports challange!
Jordan: hujambo guys who got voted off of your team?
Lexxi: Briony! Im so happy!
Zack: Yeah, she was bossy!
Chef: Attention everyone, the plane will be landin in 5...4..3..2...1!!!
*The plane lands*
*everyone gets off*
Jared: Ahh, Hollywood smells,good.
Izzy: It smells like Sex and Shoes!
Jake: Um. Okay Then?
Chris: Since we're in Hollywood, the Challange will be a sining contest!
Katy Perry: hujambo everyone!
Annie&Lexxi: OMG ITS KATY PERRY!!!
30H!3: Sup
Lucas: Oh my god, wewe guys are AWESOME!
30H!3: Yeah we know
Chris: Your Challange will be to sing a song kwa Katy Perry and a song kwa 30H!3! Got it?
*STAY TUNED FOR PART 2!!*
Lucas:YA!!!!!!
Martha Stewart:Blaine,and Zoey!
Blaine and Zoey:*hug eachother*OH SORRY!!!
Martha Stewart:LINDSAY IS salama TOO!!!!!!
Lindsay:YAY!!!!!!
Martha Stewart:And Dani and Patrick is left
Dani:*crys*
Martha Stewart:And the last sweet moyo goes to...DANI!!!!!!!!
Patrick:WHAT?!
Martha Steart:2 people voted off Dani,4 people voted off you!
Patrick:*eavs in the upendo boat*
Dani:WAIT!Who am I dating then?
Martha Stewart:NO one!You'll have to play the rest of the game alone!
Dani:*crys*PATRICK!!!!!!!!
Martha Stewart:Find out what happens inayofuata time on TOTAL,DRAMA,COUPLES!!!!!
(episode 2 coming soon!)
*votting gym*
chris:okay 1 vote to gwen
mike:gulp
chris:2 kura gwen
mike:no
gwen:like i alisema behind the scenes your dead
chris:3 kura gwen
gwen:grrrr
chris:4 kura gwen... gwen i,m sorry but you,ve been elemanated
gwen:i wonder how *punches mike*
chef & tdr gaurd:come on *grabs gwen*
scout:can i see duncan now
chris:sure in the new behind the scenes show
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plz put confessanail in maoni & add some reply to the fourm called tdr my fanfic behind the scenes
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chris:okay 1 vote to gwen
mike:gulp
chris:2 kura gwen
mike:no
gwen:like i alisema behind the scenes your dead
chris:3 kura gwen
gwen:grrrr
chris:4 kura gwen... gwen i,m sorry but you,ve been elemanated
gwen:i wonder how *punches mike*
chef & tdr gaurd:come on *grabs gwen*
scout:can i see duncan now
chris:sure in the new behind the scenes show
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plz put confessanail in maoni & add some reply to the fourm called tdr my fanfic behind the scenes
the end
i
had
to
write
more