-EVERYONE IS AT DUNCAN'S HOUSE HAVING A PARTY AT 9 PM-
Gothel: Nice party Duncan! *winks*
Duncan: wewe know I'm still dating Gwen, right?
Gothel: Ya....
-COURTNEY IS COOKING chajio, chakula cha jioni BECAUSE DUNCAN IS TOO LAZY TO DO IT, DJ COMES AROUND AND ASK COURTNEY WHAT SHE IS MAKING-
DJ: hujambo Courtney, what are wewe cooking?
Courtney: Hi DJ! Im cooking lasagna and I have cake in the oven. Oh crap, is Owen here?
DJ: No, he moved to Italy for the pizza and now is a chef.
Courtney: Oh, ok
-IN DUNCAN'S ROOM, DUNCAN AND GWEN ARE SITTING THERE QUIETLY ON OPPOSITE SIDES OF THE BED.-
Gwen: Listen, Duncan, I have to tell wewe something.... I'M CHEATING ON YOU!
Duncan: WHAT?! WITH WHO?!
Gwen: Trent. With Trent. I'm cheating on wewe with Trent and I'm glad that I know that he still loves me.
Duncan: WE'RE OVER! GOODBYE! *walks out, comes back in* THIS IS MY ROOM! GET OUT!
-GWEN RUNS OUT OF ROOM CRYING AND RUNS INTO GEOFF-
Geoff: What's wrong dudette?
Gwen: Duncan's yeeling at me because I cheated on him. But it was because he was treating me like crap because I had to do everything!!!
-COURTNEY OVERHEARS CONVERSATION AND WALKS TOWARD GWEN-
Courtney: Gwen, I'm so sorry! Will cake help? It ususally helps me get over things
Gwen: Ya, sure *takes piece of cake and starts nibbling*
-HEATHER NOTICES BLACK CAR DRIVING UP-
Heather: Who could that be? Everyone is already here!
-2 MEN STEP OUT OF BLACK CAR HOLDING GUNS AND WEAPONS WITH MASKS OVER THEIR FACE-
Robber 1: *slams open door* THIS IS A ROBBERY! PUT YOUR HANDS UP!!!!
Robber 2: IF ANYONE TRIES TO STOP US, THEY GET A BLOW TO THE HEAD
-DUNCAN HEARS SCREAMING FROM HIS ROOM AND KNOWS IT'S A ROBBERY-
Duncan: Crap! *opens door and tiptoes out of room in hopes of robber not seeing him*
Robber 1: THEY SENT HELP! KNOCK THEM ALL OUT! WAIT! No, they may still be able to remember this...
-ROBBERS LEAVE AND ROBBER 1 DROPS A SMALL BOTTLE-
Heather: What's this? *picks up* It looks like something to put in a drink, LET'S PUT IN IN THE PUNCH!
Izzy: YA!!!! *takes bottle and opurs in punch, stirs punch*
-EVERYONE EXCEPT COURTNEY DRINKS PUNCH, dakika LATER AFTER DRINKING THE ngumi, punch THEY ALL FAINT AND ARE UNCOINCIOUS, COURTNEY THINKS THEY ARE ALL JUST TIRED AND FELL ASLEEP. SHE DRINKS THE ngumi, punch AND PASSES OUT. THE STUFF THE PUT IN THE ngumi, punch WAS ACTUALLY POISON. THE 2 ROBBERS COME BACK AND PUT THEM ALL IN THE TRUCK THE TRUCK DRIVES AWAY SILENTLY IN THE NIGHT-
Gothel: Nice party Duncan! *winks*
Duncan: wewe know I'm still dating Gwen, right?
Gothel: Ya....
-COURTNEY IS COOKING chajio, chakula cha jioni BECAUSE DUNCAN IS TOO LAZY TO DO IT, DJ COMES AROUND AND ASK COURTNEY WHAT SHE IS MAKING-
DJ: hujambo Courtney, what are wewe cooking?
Courtney: Hi DJ! Im cooking lasagna and I have cake in the oven. Oh crap, is Owen here?
DJ: No, he moved to Italy for the pizza and now is a chef.
Courtney: Oh, ok
-IN DUNCAN'S ROOM, DUNCAN AND GWEN ARE SITTING THERE QUIETLY ON OPPOSITE SIDES OF THE BED.-
Gwen: Listen, Duncan, I have to tell wewe something.... I'M CHEATING ON YOU!
Duncan: WHAT?! WITH WHO?!
Gwen: Trent. With Trent. I'm cheating on wewe with Trent and I'm glad that I know that he still loves me.
Duncan: WE'RE OVER! GOODBYE! *walks out, comes back in* THIS IS MY ROOM! GET OUT!
-GWEN RUNS OUT OF ROOM CRYING AND RUNS INTO GEOFF-
Geoff: What's wrong dudette?
Gwen: Duncan's yeeling at me because I cheated on him. But it was because he was treating me like crap because I had to do everything!!!
-COURTNEY OVERHEARS CONVERSATION AND WALKS TOWARD GWEN-
Courtney: Gwen, I'm so sorry! Will cake help? It ususally helps me get over things
Gwen: Ya, sure *takes piece of cake and starts nibbling*
-HEATHER NOTICES BLACK CAR DRIVING UP-
Heather: Who could that be? Everyone is already here!
-2 MEN STEP OUT OF BLACK CAR HOLDING GUNS AND WEAPONS WITH MASKS OVER THEIR FACE-
Robber 1: *slams open door* THIS IS A ROBBERY! PUT YOUR HANDS UP!!!!
Robber 2: IF ANYONE TRIES TO STOP US, THEY GET A BLOW TO THE HEAD
-DUNCAN HEARS SCREAMING FROM HIS ROOM AND KNOWS IT'S A ROBBERY-
Duncan: Crap! *opens door and tiptoes out of room in hopes of robber not seeing him*
Robber 1: THEY SENT HELP! KNOCK THEM ALL OUT! WAIT! No, they may still be able to remember this...
-ROBBERS LEAVE AND ROBBER 1 DROPS A SMALL BOTTLE-
Heather: What's this? *picks up* It looks like something to put in a drink, LET'S PUT IN IN THE PUNCH!
Izzy: YA!!!! *takes bottle and opurs in punch, stirs punch*
-EVERYONE EXCEPT COURTNEY DRINKS PUNCH, dakika LATER AFTER DRINKING THE ngumi, punch THEY ALL FAINT AND ARE UNCOINCIOUS, COURTNEY THINKS THEY ARE ALL JUST TIRED AND FELL ASLEEP. SHE DRINKS THE ngumi, punch AND PASSES OUT. THE STUFF THE PUT IN THE ngumi, punch WAS ACTUALLY POISON. THE 2 ROBBERS COME BACK AND PUT THEM ALL IN THE TRUCK THE TRUCK DRIVES AWAY SILENTLY IN THE NIGHT-
Duncans POV:
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Did wewe want some thing princess?
Courtneys POV:
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YEs Duncan I dont know how to tell wewe this but...... Im pregnent but...... its not your baby.
Duncans POV:
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Whos is it I mean who would do this to you?
Courtneys POV:
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Its.............I cant tell wewe its to painfull he raped me a I was powerless Im so sorry Duncan please forgive me it was a mistake.....
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Did wewe want some thing princess?
Courtneys POV:
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YEs Duncan I dont know how to tell wewe this but...... Im pregnent but...... its not your baby.
Duncans POV:
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Whos is it I mean who would do this to you?
Courtneys POV:
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Its.............I cant tell wewe its to painfull he raped me a I was powerless Im so sorry Duncan please forgive me it was a mistake.....
Hello everyone. I'm going to rewrite TDR because i don't like how they are adding so many new characters. well anyways since we don't know where TDR will take place i decided to have it take place at a Roller coaster/fair/circus type thing called Mclain Land. The returning cast will be
Heather
Alejandro
Cody
Zeke
Dj
Izzy
Gwen
Tyler
Owen
Trent
Duncan
Bridgette
Geoff
Lindsay
Noah
Sierra
Beth
Courtney
LeShawna
and 2 new "Campers"
also i will need a very good artist to draw pics for this story. so if wewe can draw (and i mean VERY VERY well then please maoni with some of your work) also i might need a few people to come up with some dialgue, so if wewe like to write maoni me about that. And this is not a post your OC thing, and i dont need challenge ideas i already came up with them. Thank wewe and i would like an artist as soon as possible and i would upendo it if one of wewe could get a hold of Escorte on deviantart! THANK wewe SOOOO MUCH!
Heather
Alejandro
Cody
Zeke
Dj
Izzy
Gwen
Tyler
Owen
Trent
Duncan
Bridgette
Geoff
Lindsay
Noah
Sierra
Beth
Courtney
LeShawna
and 2 new "Campers"
also i will need a very good artist to draw pics for this story. so if wewe can draw (and i mean VERY VERY well then please maoni with some of your work) also i might need a few people to come up with some dialgue, so if wewe like to write maoni me about that. And this is not a post your OC thing, and i dont need challenge ideas i already came up with them. Thank wewe and i would like an artist as soon as possible and i would upendo it if one of wewe could get a hold of Escorte on deviantart! THANK wewe SOOOO MUCH!
(at the grave yared)
chirs:frist bone go's toooo jakki andrea mallory
samantha samantha rollings sara ashley suna dustin rose lynn anacpriana sara kristing amy kenya the last one go's to blaze im sorry chelsea
chelsea:thats ok
tak:bye chelsea (and gives her a hug)
chelsea:bye tak
(after the show)
lucas:i have no idea wewe sing good
tak:thanxs
chirs:will tak and lucas be zaidi than friends
both:HEY
chirs:and will everyone die on this onyesha find out inayofuata time on total drama goth vs emo
chirs:frist bone go's toooo jakki andrea mallory
samantha samantha rollings sara ashley suna dustin rose lynn anacpriana sara kristing amy kenya the last one go's to blaze im sorry chelsea
chelsea:thats ok
tak:bye chelsea (and gives her a hug)
chelsea:bye tak
(after the show)
lucas:i have no idea wewe sing good
tak:thanxs
chirs:will tak and lucas be zaidi than friends
both:HEY
chirs:and will everyone die on this onyesha find out inayofuata time on total drama goth vs emo
The End
I loved Total Drama Island when it first came on "Cartoon Network", I loved how everyone had a unique personality, how Chris was cruel to the campers, and I thought the onyesha had good character and relationship development.
But then, Total Drama Action premered, and I was not that Impressed. Any character development that had occured, was erased from the onyesha all together, The contestants became annoying as hell(especially Geoff and Trent), And all the good couples were destroyed(but I don't like the GwenXTrent couple at all). The Geoff and Bridget couple was just awful, she needs to ditch him and go with DJ, and I thought that "Teletoon" and "Fresh Tv" had decided to get rid of any words like crap and screwed so there wouldn't be so many edits.
I wont even mention the abomonation that is Total Drama World Tour. They shouldn't sing at all. But I will say one thing about the two new contestants, they were created to annoy the hell out of everyone.
But then, Total Drama Action premered, and I was not that Impressed. Any character development that had occured, was erased from the onyesha all together, The contestants became annoying as hell(especially Geoff and Trent), And all the good couples were destroyed(but I don't like the GwenXTrent couple at all). The Geoff and Bridget couple was just awful, she needs to ditch him and go with DJ, and I thought that "Teletoon" and "Fresh Tv" had decided to get rid of any words like crap and screwed so there wouldn't be so many edits.
I wont even mention the abomonation that is Total Drama World Tour. They shouldn't sing at all. But I will say one thing about the two new contestants, they were created to annoy the hell out of everyone.