hujambo guys im wondering if this poem is good?

its from personal expirence, im in upendo with my best friend wat else can i say?

HELP ME!
help me help me
I've done it again
I've fallen for someone
who thinks I'm a friend
help me help me
hes my best friend
i don't think this is going to mend
tell me tell me
theres a way out
I'm Lost and confused with now way out
upendo me upendo me
why cant he see
that the person who loves him is me?
ill try ill try
with all my heart
not to lose him
ill be smart
i will i will
see the siku when he loves me
than he might see
that he might be the only one for me
if he wont if he wont
i will always call him friend
and ill upendo him ill upendo him
till the very end