hujambo this is the first chapter of a story i m writing. if u like it comment! if ppl like it i'll post more!
I was walking outside of my house when I saw him. He was unloading a moving van across the mitaani, mtaa with who looked like his father. His hair was a glistening golden-red color. I completely froze. I was stunned kwa the beauty that was standing a few yards away from me.
He caught me staring, causing my face to turn a bright shade of red. I could tell he was laughing at my cherry-colored face.
I rushed into my house almost running my face into the door, because I didn't unlock the door fast enough for the speed I was wanting to go.
I ran up the stairs into my bedroom on the sekunde floor. I looked out the window to see if her was still laughing. He had a smile on his face as he caught my eye in the window. He gave a slight wave, and I quickly shut the curtains. My moyo was flying.
I saw the moving van pull away, so I decided now was as good a time as any to come down from my room.
"Melissa? Is that you?" my mother called from the kitchen.
"Yeah mom. What's up?" I alisema walking into the kitchen. My mom was holding a bowl of chakula with tin foil on it. She grabbed her kanzu, koti and shoes and turned to me.
"Do wewe want me to go to the new neighbors house? I am going to give them some of my pasta, tambi salad." she alisema grabbing the doorknob.
"Um, sure." I alisema trying to cover my excitement and nervousness.
We walked across the mitaani, mtaa and up the steps of the old blue house. My mom tapped lightly on the door. Nervousness completely consumed me as the door opened.
I was walking outside of my house when I saw him. He was unloading a moving van across the mitaani, mtaa with who looked like his father. His hair was a glistening golden-red color. I completely froze. I was stunned kwa the beauty that was standing a few yards away from me.
He caught me staring, causing my face to turn a bright shade of red. I could tell he was laughing at my cherry-colored face.
I rushed into my house almost running my face into the door, because I didn't unlock the door fast enough for the speed I was wanting to go.
I ran up the stairs into my bedroom on the sekunde floor. I looked out the window to see if her was still laughing. He had a smile on his face as he caught my eye in the window. He gave a slight wave, and I quickly shut the curtains. My moyo was flying.
I saw the moving van pull away, so I decided now was as good a time as any to come down from my room.
"Melissa? Is that you?" my mother called from the kitchen.
"Yeah mom. What's up?" I alisema walking into the kitchen. My mom was holding a bowl of chakula with tin foil on it. She grabbed her kanzu, koti and shoes and turned to me.
"Do wewe want me to go to the new neighbors house? I am going to give them some of my pasta, tambi salad." she alisema grabbing the doorknob.
"Um, sure." I alisema trying to cover my excitement and nervousness.
We walked across the mitaani, mtaa and up the steps of the old blue house. My mom tapped lightly on the door. Nervousness completely consumed me as the door opened.
"It shocked me.I was not sure if she meant to attack.That's the only interpretation of her behavior that my past had to offer.But she was smiling.And the emotions that were emanating from her were like nothing I'd ever felt before.
"'You've kept me waiting a long time,'she said."
I didn't realize Alice had come to stand behind me again.
"And wewe ducked your head like a good Southern gentleman,and said,'I'm sorry ma'am.'"Alice laughed at the memory.
Jasper smiled down at her."You held out your hand,and I took it without stopping to make sense of what I was doing.For the first time in almost a century,I felt hope."
Jasper took Alice's hand as he spoke.
Alice grinned."I was just relieved.I thought wewe were never going to onyesha up."
it is just MY opinion...
i think it was very well done thinking of it just as a movie wewe know it wont ever be exactly like the book ... au with such many detailz
things i loved:
*the humor they use (for example bella: if things end bad like i would become the meal) haha
*alice ! the character is very well portrayed
*the end ( victoria watching)
*the baseball game!
*men cast haha =P
*stephenie meyer appearing wooow!
things that dissapointed me:
* the clearing ! i dont liked the sparkling effect ...
*it was really fast everything
*alice's story was missing ...
things that were wrong: (i didnt noticed until the third time i saw it)
*billy was driving !
*when edward is playing th e kinanda for bella he didnt sparkle
*victoria appears in the prom in the crowd (edward would read her thoughtz)
but i like it anyway ! it ir TWILIGHT !
i think it was very well done thinking of it just as a movie wewe know it wont ever be exactly like the book ... au with such many detailz
things i loved:
*the humor they use (for example bella: if things end bad like i would become the meal) haha
*alice ! the character is very well portrayed
*the end ( victoria watching)
*the baseball game!
*men cast haha =P
*stephenie meyer appearing wooow!
things that dissapointed me:
* the clearing ! i dont liked the sparkling effect ...
*it was really fast everything
*alice's story was missing ...
things that were wrong: (i didnt noticed until the third time i saw it)
*billy was driving !
*when edward is playing th e kinanda for bella he didnt sparkle
*victoria appears in the prom in the crowd (edward would read her thoughtz)
but i like it anyway ! it ir TWILIGHT !
While visiting “The Ellen DeGeneres Show,” for an episode that airs this Friday — the same siku Pattinson’s vampiric portrayal of Edward Cullen springs to life on the big screen, he denied having romantic ties to anyone.
“Now, are wewe single?” Ellen asked.
“Ah, yeah,” the British actor replied.
And it appears despite women throwing themselves at him regularly, Pattinson may be stuck in singleton mode permanently.
“No one else seems to get into a relationship with me. It’s really strange,” he told Ellen.
“People like screaming at me,” the heartthrob added. “Actually, they like screaming at me in relationships as well. No one wants to commit.”
okay, so, all these people are complaining about Bella's Lullaby. I heard, "Bella's Lullaby sucked in my opinion" au "The strings and the orchestra weren't supposed to be in the song" au "They need to cut out the orchestra cuz it sucked with that in it". Just stuff like that which is disrespectful to Summit, Carter Burwell, and all the people associated with the project. People don't need to say such rude maoni about it.
and in my opinion, this is the soundtrack. obviously they are gonna put the score they have that goes with the movie's music. It can't just be a bila mpangilio piece that doesn't fit in with the rest of the score. that's just what pisses me off. when people judge something too quickly without laying down all the facts.
and in my opinion, this is the soundtrack. obviously they are gonna put the score they have that goes with the movie's music. It can't just be a bila mpangilio piece that doesn't fit in with the rest of the score. that's just what pisses me off. when people judge something too quickly without laying down all the facts.
Hello My Follow Twilighters!
there's a New Spot Made, it's The Leah and Jacob spot, so if wewe like their friendship/relationsip couple wise, feel free to join!
link
jiunge TODAY!
where wewe can discuss their partnership, with other fans, make/find Leah and Jacob shabiki Art, and what wewe think over all of Jacob and Leah.
and if wewe have any concerns, au request for the spot, don't be scared to ask, also if wewe know anyone else who likes the Couple, please spread the Jeah upendo This way :)
DefineDelicate
aka
Tiff
there's a New Spot Made, it's The Leah and Jacob spot, so if wewe like their friendship/relationsip couple wise, feel free to join!
link
jiunge TODAY!
where wewe can discuss their partnership, with other fans, make/find Leah and Jacob shabiki Art, and what wewe think over all of Jacob and Leah.
and if wewe have any concerns, au request for the spot, don't be scared to ask, also if wewe know anyone else who likes the Couple, please spread the Jeah upendo This way :)
DefineDelicate
aka
Tiff
Hey! Do wewe guys know a good twilight shabiki site? Help us all out and tell us... so we can go on!
Heres the cool site I found: www.freewebs.com/twilighttrailer
I think that wewe all know of stephenie's website..... stepheniemeyer.com
Oh! Also- If anyones knows of a good site to see interviews au zaidi trailer... Tell Me!
Speaking of stephenie's website... did any of wewe see the "quote of the day" thing she's doing!? I upendo that idea! what do wewe guys think? I like the idea.. and I just cant wait to read Breaking Dawn! The movie should be good too :)
Heres the cool site I found: www.freewebs.com/twilighttrailer
I think that wewe all know of stephenie's website..... stepheniemeyer.com
Oh! Also- If anyones knows of a good site to see interviews au zaidi trailer... Tell Me!
Speaking of stephenie's website... did any of wewe see the "quote of the day" thing she's doing!? I upendo that idea! what do wewe guys think? I like the idea.. and I just cant wait to read Breaking Dawn! The movie should be good too :)