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Chapter 9............Death is sad...Abi
I got up an freddy for got I can revie my self...I stood up an saw garret....
"Oh god.."
I ran to him an I got to my nees an said
" plz plz I upendo u plz look at me plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz"
I started to cry on him an alisema
"Don't not now.."
I thought my spell should work...
I kissed him an gave him the kiss of life an then he started to cough...
"Oh thank wewe god..."
I gave him a hug an I started to kis him an then Jason came in an took mine an garrets hand an draged us an we both woke up on a kitanda at his house..
"Abi..."
"Garret..."
I kissed him an alisema
"It's over its over..."
Then freddy shows up an says no no no
We both screammm..........
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Chapter 8.......Garret.....
I was walking to her house an found that Abi was gone....I was worried about her sooo much...I knocked on the door....Her mom answerd..
"Miss Dahlem..."
"yes..."
"Is Abi home..."
"A noo actully she went to your house.."
"What.."
"Sorry..."
"No it's ok..."
I walked away an thought of something bad didn't happen...to her...
I was walking down the kilima an I saw Jason he stood there an turned his head...
"Oh god..."
I ran to my house an I locked the door...Then the door was busted down...
I ran to my room but my door would not lock soo I ran to the bathroom an sat in the tube an then I herd some noise an I was scard.....
"Then I breathed heavly then the door busted down....."
"Oh god....!"
He grabbed me an I woke up an I saw Abi laying on the floor with her eye's close...
"Abi..."
I ran to her an I picked her head up an saw the marks on her arm's....
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Chapter 7.....Shadow's come...Liz...
I Woke up an saw Abi lying there....
"Well that was wierd...."
I came over a saw her an felt her head...she was colder than ice...
"Someone help me...."
No one came.....then she got up an her eyes were as black as blood...
"Abi are wewe ok..."
She started to walk an she went of of the hospitle an she walked in the road an car's came...NO one hit her....She started to walk down this mitaani, mtaa called Elm Street...An I stopped an saw Jason....
"Freddy stop...."
Then Abi stopped an turned back an smiled...Then Abi's boddy just dropped....Jason came an walked...I had to run as fast as I could an got her arm an started to drag her.. Jason got to wewe an raised his arm with the big meshady an...I thought if freddy is there then were is Abi I let go an I started to run back.... I looked back an saw him dragging her to cryistle Lake....
"Hey you...."
He turned an saw me....
"You want Freddy Krugger...."
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Chapter 6....Stage fright...Abi
I woke up in the hospitle an I saw Liz there standing an holding my hand...
"Liz why am I here..."
"Someone tried to kill you..."
"No I was just sleeping an..."
Then my moyo felt really slow an I herd a voice saying.....
"Come on Abi wewe now wewe want to dream...hahaha..."
"Noooo!" I screamed....
"What's wrong Abi.."
"Liz he's here an..."
I felt pain through my whole body an somthing grabbed my legs an I started to get dragged under the kitanda an I screamed....
"Abi..."
Then freddy's hand came up from under an grabbed me an got me.....
Then I woke up an saw Liz....
"Liz what happend..."
"Did wewe have a night mare...."
"Yes..."
Then Liz turned into freddy..."
"Well it seem's like wewe did plz don't..."
"What do wewe mean I'm saving you..."
"Plz leave me alone.."
"Well ok...Never.........."
"Then Freddy put his hand on my head an I screamed......."
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Chapter 5.....Bad dream...Liz
I woke up on my kitanda an sweat came down my face....I thought what happend really happend...I decided to call her an tell her...I got my I phone an typed her number in an called her...
"Hey its Abi I guss I forgot to answer this call sorry plz leave your name number an I will get back to you....."
"Well thats odd she usally is up kwa now...."
I got up an walked to the jikoni an found out my mom an dad left for work....Then my cell phone ringed an it was Abi...
"Oh thank god its her.."
I answerd it...
"Hello Abi I'm.....
"What board tired I don't care ok soo why don't wewe do me a faver an stop calling..."
She hung up an I looked at my phone an said...
"What happend to her.."
I got ready for school an went on the buss an saw Xavier...
"Hey whats up my Liz.."
"Nothing but I called Abi an she was all mad for some reason she didn't feel like her she's always talking to me in the morrning..."
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Chapter 4.....The hunt....Abi
I was walking with Dezzy an I herd a noise coming form a room....
"Did wewe here that..."
"What...."
"That noise..."
"No..."
"It sound's like a scratching noise on a chalk board..."
"Really it sound's like your crazy..."
"Really this isn't funny I'm really being real about this..."
"Right..."
Then I saw a piece of chalk on the floor an it rolled my way....
"What the.........."
"Abi this isn't funny..."
"I didn't do it..."
"Well I belive you..."
We both turned an saw a man with a burnt face...
"Who are you......" I said..
"You don't rember your friend from any of your dreams...."
"Shut up..." I screamed...
"You leave her alone.."Dezzy screamed...
"Why that isn't very nice after all the time....Abi I'm really upseated..."
Then his arms streached over to me an grabbed me...
"Dezzy do something..."
Then Freddy starts to laugh...
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Chapter 3...The Scream...Liz
I stayed at the spot he told me to an I laid my back against the wall.....Then I herd I scream from it...I ran as quickly as I could an all of the sudden....The door quickly locked its self.....
"Xavier are wewe ok?..."
"Help...."
I tried to open it but it was stuck an I tried to even kick it but still nothing....
"Xavier it wont open..."
"Help....."
Then I thought of one thing raming my body aginst the door...I went to the ukuta an alisema to my self....
"This should work...."
I ran an hit the door...I busted the door down an saw Xaviers legs sticking out of the mirro an I grabbed him an pulled him in.....
"Thank wewe Liz...."
"No problem....What were wewe doing...."
"Dude I don't know last muint I was washing my face then inayofuata a guy was in the mirro an he just grabbed me kwa my shirt...."
"Well at least your not hurt..."
"Yeah that is true..."
"Here let me help wewe up..."
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Chapter 2......Last dream.......Xavier..
I saw the house...My eyes almost dropped out of my head.......
"Abi....What do we dooo..."
"Well face the truth we are going to die..."
"How.."
"Dude see these cuts on my arm.."
"Yeah...."
"Thats from freddy an if I'm right we might just give up now..."
"How do we get out of here..."
"Easy just wake your self up.."
"How..."
Then Abi imanged my friend Dezzy was here....an also Lizzy..."
Then I saw them right inayofuata to me...
"Abi...." they both said...."
They ran up an hugged Abi an an said....
"How did wewe both get here..."
"Actully I was laying on my kitanda an I felt really dizzy I found my self right here.."Dezzy said...
"I was just danceing an my teacher became this burnend face man an he just pushed me an I to are here..."Liz said....
"Well what do we dooooo..." I said...
"I don't know I guss go in to the house..."Abi said....
We walked in an saw what looked like a normal house....
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CHAPTER 1....Never onyesha your self....Abi
I was walking to Xaviers house for krisimasi eve... I got to his house an laid on the kitanda an Xavier came over an said...
"I got wewe something....."
He walked over to the krisimasi mti an he grabbed a box....
"This is something special to me..."
I opend it an saaw a dead hand an I screamed an woke up an saw Xavier over me saying
"Abi are wewe ok...."
I looked up an saw him I got up an alisema
"What happend........."
"I dont now........ omg look at your arms!"
I looked down an saw blood coming out of my arms an I said........
"What did wewe do....."
"I don't know.."
Then I grabbed Xavier's shati an fell to the floor an I felt Xavier fall with me an I stood up an saw a house....
"Abi were are we...."
"We are in the play house of freddy....."
"Is that bad..."
"Yes... Yes it is......
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*Wes Craven wanted Freddy's sweater to be black and yellow, so what ever he turned into would be the same color as his sweater.
*When Nancy sleeps at Tina's house, and Freddy comes down throw the ceiling, wewe can see Jason's hockey mask.
*Before Glen (Johny Depp) gets killed kwa Freddy, the radio says the name of the station he was listening to, KRGR.
*Wes Craven wanted Freddy's face to have open wounds that had puss coming out of it, but the make-up artist alisema that would be to hard to make.
*New Line Cinema was going to go bankrupt but A Nightmare on Elm mitaani, mtaa saved them, so now they call New Line "The house that Freddy built."
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Freddy
*When Tina meets Freddy outside, he tries to scare her kwa cutting off his pinky and ring fingers, but blood only comes out of his pinky.
*When Nancy lights Freddy on fire, he is screaming but his mouth is not moving.
*When Nancy first tries to bring Freddy into the real world, her blue phone is on the left side of her bed, but when she wakes up screaming, its on the right.
*When Freddy falls down Nancy;s basement stairs, one of his razor fingers breaks off, but when he gets back up, its back on.
*When Tina falls asleep, Freddy jumps out of a mti behind her, his glove, glovu is on his left hand, instead of his right.

So many mistakes! There are zaidi bloopers, but I'm not telling!
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