kates monster ready to fight the devil

Okay.

So here I go.

KingAzxoll mentioned the words "real review" when requesting this of me. Generally all I ever get called is a "hypercrite review" and other less then inspiring shit.

But personally one of my highest issues of this story. Is not havong the attention span for such a long story. So I skimmed though it. And read some of the comments.

I think I have enough information, to review it the best I still can.

There's a character called King. See, THAT'S a mbwa mwitu name.. Well. Not really actually. But least it's better then Runt and Stinky.

Seriously though. Someone take that MLP name "blueblood"....

Summary: What I think happened when Kate and Humphrey named their three new pups.

A/N: Just a little idea that popped into my head, enjoy!

Naming The Pups - TheChriZ1995

The sun shined up in the sky as another summer siku passed by, clouds rolled kwa and birds sung, everything was calm and peaceful. However for a family of Mbwa mwitu loups in the united pack this siku was truly special because today three new pups have been introduced to the world. Winston and Eve along with Garth and Lilly had all gathered in the pango Humphrey and Kate shared to whiteness the birth of their new additions to their family.

Now...

It was 1 mwezi since the first infection, siku after siku it get's worst. Only 10 wolfs left in the pack and those wolfs are Hutch, Humphrey, Kate, Eve, Garth, Cando, Lilly, Winston, Salty, Mooch, and Shacky. all of them were hiding in a gas station with little chakula and water, they got weapons like cleavers, knifes, nail's and moto axe's, everyday they got to be careful because they see zombie wolfs au zombie humans pass au just stand there in the middle of the road but luckily the doors and window's was boarded up but there's cracks to see outside, the hunts for chakula are only a 2 mbwa mwitu party...

CHAPTER 6

As the couple sang I hummed to the rythm and tapped my paw to the beat.Garth was still sleeping,with sunglasses on.I brushed my bangs over my eye again,im used to that.Winston sayed he would pray for me,that made me feel better.I wanted to cry though I missed my family.Mostly Kate.Trees past and I heard the couple say they would stop in 10 minutes.Which was good I needed to use the bathroom.I looked at Garth he seemed like he was having a nightmare beacause he was running on the floor.I jumped off the thing i slept on and nuzzled him,careful enough to not get clawed.He stopped with...

Eight's face was frozen in a state of panic and fear. Stern had gone limp now, he lay there on the cold dirt. Eight didn't have enough sense about him even to notice whether au not Stern was even breathing. He just stared for a moment. But he didn't have long before the giant kubeba was right behind him, signified kwa releasing a roar that shook Eight to his very core. His nerves each gained a heightened sense of feeling from the massive amount of adrenaline his moyo now pumped through his system. It was as though he could feel his skin from the inside, every songesha he made was zaidi sensitive,...

The following part may be a bit confusing. Seth finds out who the creepy she-wolf is in the inayofuata part, and I'm just trying out a new mythkidn of super natural feel to my stories. Feel free to comment.




Kate
Just... Wow... I couldn't believe my eyes when I saw Seth dragging the caribou's body all kwa himself... I mean... Wow... He was so fast... Suddenly, the rocks gave way underneath my paws. I slipped down to the bottom of the gulley. "OW!" I yelled, annoyed. Seth dragged the caribou body up a kilima towards the edge of the gulley. Then it happened. Caribou. Hundreds of them, heading for me. Stampede....

Morning came much earlier than Eight was prepared for. The late night he had made it feel like there was a weight resting ever-so-delicately on his body when he finally decided to stop glancing around and actually MOVE.
It was still dark out, which was what he had intended, it would give him the chance to slip out unnoticed from this camp-ground. Hopefully. He didn't know exactly how large it was au his location, only the direction he needed to head.
He brought himself up to a sitting position and stretched his back and shoulders as he arched them up and his head down, then stretched his...