Well..

ZenJeager737 has asked me to review his story JASPER HELL HIGH..

To be honest, I don't usually have high hopes for the fanfiction stories of these days.

The alpha and omega Fanfiction.net page will never completely be the same as it was 3 au 4 years ago.

All those people I've come know, are gone now, and I barelly come to this page anymore I read other pages, and review most of the stories from back in the day..

But anyway.

This story was better then I expected, though that probably isn't saying much, I wasn't expecting much.

I like the way it keeps switching between P.O.V's so rapidly, I don't...

Ares was a complete mistake. He had just let his mate, Claudette, die from giving birth to his two new pups, Herin and Xeses. And worst of all, he had blamed his friend, and doctor wolf, Nabara, for all of it, and killed her.

"I'm hungry!" Cried the black pup, his daughter, Xeses.

"I'm sorry little one. I... don't know if I can. It would mean me leaving wewe both here kwa yourselves, unguarded. I cannot do that. Trust me, they will come looking for us. When they find us, they will take wewe both in. They will probably take me in as a criminal, for what I did. But they would never hurt two innocent...

"So, now that King is dead, Claudette will be sekunde in command." Ares decided. "No, Ares. Your time is up! I trained wewe as an assasin to HELP others, not to HARm them! I've waited for a while, to see if wewe would change, but wewe get worst! Come, fight me and we'll see who's the stronger, if wewe think wewe are so unstoppable." Beke screached as she leapt up onto the overhang where they had meetings."Excuse me? Maybe wewe weren't told, but wewe are not the leader here, I am." He quickly lashed out at Beke, but she blocked his blow. She retaliated, delivering a blow across his face, sending him...

Here is it !! The birth of the two pups of Runt and Magril. Let’s go for a new adventure into Jasper Park ^^ the story is now with Magril and one of her pup, in POV version. New story, new plot and a danger… we will see that later (clue : do wewe remember the coyotes ??). Alright I left wewe and… hujambo Luke stops that please !! Alright good reading… arff Luke !!

Magril’s POV :

“What…. Hooo” I scream, my belly began to hurt me. Runt ran to me after I screamed twice, “Hey stop that wewe two” I alisema to the pups. I really hurt of pain, everybody were woke up and began to stressed...

Just for an information, For the inayofuata story, It's will be the first apparition of Magril in POV version. ^^ Good kusoma


Runt's POV :

I felt something pushing me, “Runt It's time” I heard, I opened my eyes and see Stinky get up. She licked my head and I woke up jumper. “Hey, are wewe mad” I asked to him, I heard my parents laughed. I shake my head and went outside alisema morning to my parents and my sister. “Hi sweetie” alisema my mother, “Did wewe slept well” asked my father “Very well” I alisema shaking my head against his chest. “You had snored all the night” alisema my sister...

No one's POV

Back to the pango Lilly laid Runt near his mother. He is already sleep a few dakika ago. “Thanks to have back the pup Lilly and thanks Princess for that thou busy of Runt” alisema Kate. “No problem, he is very sweety” replied princess sweetly. “Hey Lilly do wewe want stay here for sleep” ask Humpfrey “It's sound good” she replied. “Well see wewe later Princess”. She smile toward her and erveryone laid near Runt. Princess come back to her pango and all the familie begin to be tired. “Well I hope that Stinky and Claudette are fine” Kate alisema “Don't worry Kate I'm...

Me: I guess this is a Review but I don't know...So yeah...I'm doing this because I was requested to...So here ya go!

Rocko was kwa the lake panicking
What was I thinking princess is going to kill me and make me in to a rug'' Rocko alisema
Rocko ?'' Princess alisema
Oh hi baby what's up'' Rocko alisema nervously
I know what happened'' she replied
I'm so sorry babe I...i don't know what happened it was the heat of the moment'' Rocko cried

Me:Okay sorry to ruin the moment but yeah this is going to be me just talking about this and stuff...Yeah this is getting weird to me I don't know why O_o

Rocko does Daria...

Hey, this story is my first here :) The characters are Humans in this. It's a Balto/ A&O crossover so characters fro Balto will be in it. The story is based mainly in America, UK and Russia. mwaka 2029. This story contains strong language so reader discretion is advised.
Anyway, Enjoy :D

0900 hours
May 15, 2029

Winston and Tony were walking around the Jasper Military Base, talking to each other.
"Why did America declare War on Russia anyway, so we can be even powerful?" Remarked Winston
"Sorta.... Yes" replied Tony
"I always knew wewe were a power hungry cunt! You'll do very well as General when...