#1: CUPCAKES:
I can already tell the amount of haters I'm gonna earn when I say "I wish there were zaidi writers like Sergent Sprinkles".
This is, in my opinion, the greatest creepypasta ever.
Not even for the plot. But the but most of the narration's are the reason why I would say the story is a bit of an inspiration to me.. As he/she really knows how to fill certain moods when describing the settings..
Not only that, but the fact that keki has some of the greastest shabiki video and shabiki sequels is also why I am a good supporter of the story.. It has one of the greatest songs ever "Get ready to Die/Andrew WK". Witch, according to Conan (yes, I watch Conan, deal with it, hahaha) the song was made directly for the video, same with the whole song. Guess its why most of the songs are party themed, particulary the one used for Hellsing Abridged.
Anyway.
Obviously this story two thumbs up for me.
As its "different" then every other creepypasta..
As wewe may remember, I even have a spoof of keki and upinde wa mvua Factory.
Ansd Pinkamena is in TREVOR PHILLIPS SERIES..
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#2: HELLSING ULTIMATE:
My inayopendelewa episodes are probably the first 2.
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#3: I'M STILL ALIVE:
Yes, RedRose this is YOUR story :)
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#4: SLIM SHADY SHOW:
I had a lot of fun doing this.
Wish there were more..
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#5: ROCKET TO INSANITY:
It's depressing as hell, but it's a REALLY addicting story..
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#6: FOR THE BLOOD OF THE SOUTH:
First things first.
It feels weird, giving such a review for a story written kwa one of my closest shabiki fiction friends, BRAVOBRAVO.
He, ChocolateBrownPegasis and Villain84 were to first to ever make me feel welcome on there.
Uhh, anyway.
I won't 'only' focus on the neggatives.
I'll give the positives as well.
The story is set as full out war between the Western/Eastern group, vs the mennecing Southern pack.
The worst of the Southerners, is the one who started the war.
HUNTER.
An omega hating sociopath, who in his first appeance, violently turtures Humphrey, and clearly enjoys doing it.
At the time I read this.
I wasn't as morbid as I am now. and didn't enjoy Hunter as much as I probably would NOW.
Same gose to the graphic battle scenes.
I didn't enjoy them as much as I would now, thanks to my enjoyment of saw series, Freddy Krueger, happy mti friends, and MLP creepypastas (mostly cupcakes).
Its too bad to. Cause there's one in basically every single chapter. And Andrew (bravo) dosen't hold back on graphic details for each battle.
What kind of battles?
Well.
picture the brawl between Dash and Big Mac in ROCKET TO INSANITY, times ten.
Anyway.
One of my neggatives was. The langth.
Though I don't think this one should count.
I find it too long.
Others might find it too short.
Another neggative is. The story isn't exactly 'sex free'.
And when there is sex chapters.
It's not held back on detail.
what else should I say?
I have no idea.
This story is all over the place.
So much going constantly going on. It's like PRISONERS.
Well.
Okay. It's 'nothing' like that movie.
But who cares.
PRISONERS is awesome!
I just wanted to an excuse such a film..
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#7: THE TRUTH OF LILLY:
And I am very much glad that someone did it.
Lilly has always been. What can we say. "different".
Not only is she the only omega of her family.
But she is literary the only white mbwa mwitu of the whole pack (unless I missed some).
The thought that Winston and Eve aren't her real parents.
It actually makes a shit load of sence.
Anyway.
Lilly finally discovers Winston and Eve aren't her 'real' parents. Her parents died au something. Understandably this news effects her dramatically. And she now Lost all trust towards her family and runs away.
And joining her new found anger she ends up knocking herself into a coma. DUMB BITCH! Haha. I'm joking. *pets Lilly*..
Uhh..
Anyway.
From here the story continues into a sequal called COMA.
And everybody uses flashbacks of certain moments of her life to try bringing her back to being conscience (it's zaidi touching then wewe think).
laughing) wewe probably expect to use My Little gppony, pony references from here.
Hahahah-
(almost angry) Well I will!
In fact.
This somewhat reminds me of The pink Temptation.
When Pinkie reveals her back story to Mr Cake.
But anyway.
Eventually Lilly comes too.
And all becomes normal eventually.
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#8: NOSTAGLIA CRITIC/TEEN TITANS GO:
It made me smile..
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#9: THE PROMISE:
This counted as the first time I read a Humphrey X Lilly. As, with any other Humphrey X Lilly, Kate nd Garth become the angonists, and cheat on them for no complete reason. In the one. Kate and Garth are killed off at the very begining. Are killed when trying to kill carribu (kinda ironically).
Like most of these stories, Kate's last words involve Humphrey needing to take care Lilly.
No.. Not sexually. Get your minds out of the gutter.
starts off somewhat boring. As Humphrey and Lilly are always moaning about there loss's. Till eventually they leave the park for several months au something.
Eventually Humphrey gets into a brutal fight against some nut job. I think Humphrey got injured in the leg but still the best part so far. There is a lot of other exciting things in the story. But I won't go though all of it. This is a review, not a plot summery.
point being.I have nothing but respect towards this with all the long sequels what I never read the third of.
This story has so many great things.10/10 for me..
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#10: KATE'S INNER MONSTER:
This one is for a story from Fanpop, from back in the nostaglia days (2011/2010)
orodha possibly one of the first stories I ever read orginally. And it's still just as good.
It's nice not to have to read to sex scenes for once. And the pictures are a nice touch.
The story is about Kate having doctor Jykll mr hyde type of deal..
But she learns to CONTROL it..
Anyway.
THats all I got.
Till inayofuata time.
I can already tell the amount of haters I'm gonna earn when I say "I wish there were zaidi writers like Sergent Sprinkles".
This is, in my opinion, the greatest creepypasta ever.
Not even for the plot. But the but most of the narration's are the reason why I would say the story is a bit of an inspiration to me.. As he/she really knows how to fill certain moods when describing the settings..
Not only that, but the fact that keki has some of the greastest shabiki video and shabiki sequels is also why I am a good supporter of the story.. It has one of the greatest songs ever "Get ready to Die/Andrew WK". Witch, according to Conan (yes, I watch Conan, deal with it, hahaha) the song was made directly for the video, same with the whole song. Guess its why most of the songs are party themed, particulary the one used for Hellsing Abridged.
Anyway.
Obviously this story two thumbs up for me.
As its "different" then every other creepypasta..
As wewe may remember, I even have a spoof of keki and upinde wa mvua Factory.
Ansd Pinkamena is in TREVOR PHILLIPS SERIES..
------------------------------------------------------------
#2: HELLSING ULTIMATE:
My inayopendelewa episodes are probably the first 2.
------------------------------------------------------------
#3: I'M STILL ALIVE:
Yes, RedRose this is YOUR story :)
------------------------------------------------------------
#4: SLIM SHADY SHOW:
I had a lot of fun doing this.
Wish there were more..
------------------------------------------------------------
#5: ROCKET TO INSANITY:
It's depressing as hell, but it's a REALLY addicting story..
------------------------------------------------------------
#6: FOR THE BLOOD OF THE SOUTH:
First things first.
It feels weird, giving such a review for a story written kwa one of my closest shabiki fiction friends, BRAVOBRAVO.
He, ChocolateBrownPegasis and Villain84 were to first to ever make me feel welcome on there.
Uhh, anyway.
I won't 'only' focus on the neggatives.
I'll give the positives as well.
The story is set as full out war between the Western/Eastern group, vs the mennecing Southern pack.
The worst of the Southerners, is the one who started the war.
HUNTER.
An omega hating sociopath, who in his first appeance, violently turtures Humphrey, and clearly enjoys doing it.
At the time I read this.
I wasn't as morbid as I am now. and didn't enjoy Hunter as much as I probably would NOW.
Same gose to the graphic battle scenes.
I didn't enjoy them as much as I would now, thanks to my enjoyment of saw series, Freddy Krueger, happy mti friends, and MLP creepypastas (mostly cupcakes).
Its too bad to. Cause there's one in basically every single chapter. And Andrew (bravo) dosen't hold back on graphic details for each battle.
What kind of battles?
Well.
picture the brawl between Dash and Big Mac in ROCKET TO INSANITY, times ten.
Anyway.
One of my neggatives was. The langth.
Though I don't think this one should count.
I find it too long.
Others might find it too short.
Another neggative is. The story isn't exactly 'sex free'.
And when there is sex chapters.
It's not held back on detail.
what else should I say?
I have no idea.
This story is all over the place.
So much going constantly going on. It's like PRISONERS.
Well.
Okay. It's 'nothing' like that movie.
But who cares.
PRISONERS is awesome!
I just wanted to an excuse such a film..
------------------------------------------------------------
#7: THE TRUTH OF LILLY:
And I am very much glad that someone did it.
Lilly has always been. What can we say. "different".
Not only is she the only omega of her family.
But she is literary the only white mbwa mwitu of the whole pack (unless I missed some).
The thought that Winston and Eve aren't her real parents.
It actually makes a shit load of sence.
Anyway.
Lilly finally discovers Winston and Eve aren't her 'real' parents. Her parents died au something. Understandably this news effects her dramatically. And she now Lost all trust towards her family and runs away.
And joining her new found anger she ends up knocking herself into a coma. DUMB BITCH! Haha. I'm joking. *pets Lilly*..
Uhh..
Anyway.
From here the story continues into a sequal called COMA.
And everybody uses flashbacks of certain moments of her life to try bringing her back to being conscience (it's zaidi touching then wewe think).
laughing) wewe probably expect to use My Little gppony, pony references from here.
Hahahah-
(almost angry) Well I will!
In fact.
This somewhat reminds me of The pink Temptation.
When Pinkie reveals her back story to Mr Cake.
But anyway.
Eventually Lilly comes too.
And all becomes normal eventually.
------------------------------------------------------------
#8: NOSTAGLIA CRITIC/TEEN TITANS GO:
It made me smile..
------------------------------------------------------------
#9: THE PROMISE:
This counted as the first time I read a Humphrey X Lilly. As, with any other Humphrey X Lilly, Kate nd Garth become the angonists, and cheat on them for no complete reason. In the one. Kate and Garth are killed off at the very begining. Are killed when trying to kill carribu (kinda ironically).
Like most of these stories, Kate's last words involve Humphrey needing to take care Lilly.
No.. Not sexually. Get your minds out of the gutter.
starts off somewhat boring. As Humphrey and Lilly are always moaning about there loss's. Till eventually they leave the park for several months au something.
Eventually Humphrey gets into a brutal fight against some nut job. I think Humphrey got injured in the leg but still the best part so far. There is a lot of other exciting things in the story. But I won't go though all of it. This is a review, not a plot summery.
point being.I have nothing but respect towards this with all the long sequels what I never read the third of.
This story has so many great things.10/10 for me..
------------------------------------------------------------
#10: KATE'S INNER MONSTER:
This one is for a story from Fanpop, from back in the nostaglia days (2011/2010)
orodha possibly one of the first stories I ever read orginally. And it's still just as good.
It's nice not to have to read to sex scenes for once. And the pictures are a nice touch.
The story is about Kate having doctor Jykll mr hyde type of deal..
But she learns to CONTROL it..
Anyway.
THats all I got.
Till inayofuata time.
