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Animaluco's juu 10 Series - Best DP sinema Screenplays

posted by AnimaIuco

In the inayofuata months, I'll write a series of 8 makala (well, I'll continue only if wewe like them, of course). The first 7 makala will be about separate aspects of the DP sinema (Score, princess, couple, screenplay, villain, sidekicks and animation/art), and in the final makala I'll make the average of the grades I gave the sinema in each aspect and make my inayopendelewa DP sinema orodha = )

This is the sekunde makala in the series "Animaluco's juu 10". It covers all DP Movies' screenplays! Enjoy!

10. Cinderella - 6,75

This movie's screenplay has nothing special. Though it doesn't onyesha any continuity/logical problems (not that I have noticed), it has nearly no action (only a tension moment in the last minutes) and there are way too many unnecessary scenes with the mice. Somethings happen too slow and somethings happen too fast (like its ending).

09. Aladdin - 7,0

I thought about putting this in the #10 spot, somehow forgiving Cinderella's filler parts for being an older movie, but my intention was to rank the sinema from an objective point of view, so I think Aladdin's screenplay is slightly better because it definetely doesn't lack in action. However, out of all the Disney Movies, this one has the biggest logical problems. I could spend hours naming them, but the single fact of Jafar not recognizing Aladin is enough to make the plot stupid.

08. The Princess and the Frog - 7,5

The first 25 dakika of the movie are perfect. Everything moves fast and clearly. However, as everybody knows, the middle part of the movie is filled with filler scenes and filler songs, and the last moments lacked a lot in action compared to other DP Movies. And it still has some logical problems, like I wrote link.

07. Sleeping Beauty - 7,75

This screenplay doesn't have any clear logical problem, though it was kinda forced when the vichimbakazi left Aurora alona exactly in the siku Maleficient's spell was about to be cursed. Besides, the middle part can be kinda slow and boring, specially if wewe don't appreciate its classic score.

06. Beauty and the Beast - 8,0

This was the first Disney Animated Movie to have its screenplay completed before the uhuishaji was started, but I don't think it has one of Disney's best screenplays, because it has serious issues with the time thing. The time Belle spent in the ngome is enough for a season to pass, but it doesn't seem to take much time since Maurice left the ngome and went there again. And did Lefou really stay all that time in Belle's door? The screenplay also makes a mistake kwa dedicating too much time to the initial scenes and it lacks a better development in the couple's relationship.

05. Pocahontas - 8,25

This screenplay is OK. Not a lot of filler parts (in fact, the scenes with Meeko and Percy were necessary as comic relief), and all the scenes seem to have a function in the story. The biggest problem was the excuse they found to start the battle between the natives and the english men - Why on earth would the indians hide that gold?

04. Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs - 8,5

Some of wewe may think this one is a bit too high, but I disagree. It doesn't have any logical problems and it has a nice final action scene. Its only problems are 2 scenes with the dwarfes that are too long - The first one when they get nyumbani and discover that someone's at the house and the sekunde during their bath.

03. Mulan - 9,0

This movie has a very clean and clear screenplay, with definite acts and nearly no filler scenes. I am putting it behind the inayofuata 2 sinema because one of the final elements - The huns emerging from the snow seemed a bit too forced as an excuse to continue with the story.

02. Tangled - 9,25

Tangled has an amazing screenplay. It has not a single filler scene and I think that it has the element that avoided the movie to flop like PatF. In fact, a movie released in 2010 has to manage to keep the audience atention during all the scenes, and Tangled manages to do that, including amazing action scenes. I'll put it in #2 because of how easily Mother Gothel seemed to discover that Rapunzel left the tower with Flynn. And how Rapunzel managed to hide that crown during a whole day.

01. The Little Mermaid - 9,50

wewe people can complain because this is #1 in my orodha again, but I can't find a single problem in this screenplay. This movie flows clearly and fast, with zaidi action scenes than any animated movie released upon 1989 - In fact, it started the tradition of having action scenes before the climax in animated movies. It has no filler parts and not a single logical problem. All the parts that could bring boring scenes (like the tour in the city) were shorten the maximum. However, I won't give it 100% because of the song "Les Poissons" -It was very funny, but a bit unnecessary.

sweetie-94, NightFrog and 2 others like this

DsnyPrincess I agree with most of these except Cinderella

Flutey_Girl96 Nice article. Even though I don't like Snow White, I can understand why you put it there

IsaacKuo I find this review interesting, although not what I expected. I'd call it a review of plots rather than the screenplay. To me, the most important thing about a screenplay is the quality of the dialog...logical plot consistency is just for bonus points so long as it doesn't harm enjoyment. Your review doesn't say anything about the dialog. Anyway, I disagree with some of your assessments of the plots/pacing: Beauty and the Beast: I disagree most strongly with your problems with the timing. If you don't worry about sequels and just look at the movie itself, it's clear that Belle only stays in the castle for a little more than 24 hours. A season doesn't pass, it's just a snowstorm. Keep this timing in mind and rewatch the movie. It's actually very consistent with that timeline. As for how quickly Belle and Beast fall for each other--it's really the same timing as The Little Mermaid, Shrek, Enchanted, and Tangled. Sure, Belle wasn't instantly attracted to Beast when they first met, but she starts seeing him differently on the first night when he's severely injured saving her life. So, instead of being instantly attracted, she starts being attracted a few hours after first meeting him. In that respect, it's more like Shrek or Enchanted than TLM or Tangled. Sleeping Beauty: I'd argue that this movie has disastrous pacing problems all around, but that's a matter of personal taste. I'll note a big logical problem, though--the fairies put everyone in the kingdom(s) to sleep, without considering the possibility that her true love is among them. Luckily for them, Prince Phillip is riding around the forest at the time, presumably headed for the cottage which he somehow knows the location of. (One imagines he simply visits every cottage in the forest, one at a time, ala Prince Edward in Enchanted.) Pocahontas: I disagree with your plot problem. It is perfectly consistent with Ratcliffe's stupidity and desperation. Put simply, Ratcliffe is an idiot who desperately needs to believe that there's gold in Virginia. It's his only chance to redeem himself. He starts off with the ridiculous idea that simply digging at random will produce this gold, and never shows any signs of higher intelligence beyond that. Ratcliffe does show some political talent, in his modest ability to manipulate public opinion, but he's still dumb as a post. Ratcliffe's stupidity does serve to make a serious point though--which is that people can die and wars can be started by stupid people for stupid reasons. Ratcliffe is bumbling and incompetent, but not harmless! Tangled: As much as I love Tangled, there is one major plot inconsistency. When Mother Gothel hurries back to the tower to check on Rapunzel, it clearly takes her until night-time for her to break into the old entrance and search the tower. Then the story cuts back in time, "in the meantime", showing what Flynn and Rapunzel have been up to during this time. However, Mother Gothel next appears to spy on them in the Snuggly Duckling--at lunchtime! Still in the middle of the day! This is simply impossible. But the thing about this inconsistency is...it simply does not harm enjoyment of the story. So there's a plot hole, which 99.9% of the audience won't notice due to the non-sequential scene order. So what? As for Rapunzel hiding the crown all day--it's really unclear that she did. By the second day, Eugene was in love with Rapunzel. It's not clear exactly when he felt more interested in Rapunzel than the crown, but it's clear that this occurred by the time she offered the sachel to him. He wasn't worried about the crown. It wasn't going anywhere. His new dream was really quite simple--show Rapunzel the floating lights, and he gets to have Rapunzel [i]and[/i] the crown. His plan was still to go live on some island surrounded by piles of money. He just wanted to live on this island with Rapunzel rather than alone. It's only when the Stabbingtons show up that he decides to give up on the crown. Considering how close Rapunzel came to dying the last time, he thought it would be better and safer to bribe them away. The Little Mermaid: I don't like Les Poissons, but I can understand why it was necessary. Personally, I would have rather seen Eric and Ariel's dinner date, but there are two problems with that. One is that it might not have really worked because Ariel can't talk, and Eric seems too smitten to do anything but gaze at Ariel. The other is that the target audience of kids would have been bored by it.

Swanpride I would have put tangled first, because the whole scene with Louis and Sebastian is a totally unnecessary comic-relief filler scene, which has bearing to the plot at all. Actually....I think I would have put Mulan first and The Little Mermaid third. I also see everyone acting as if they are blind in Aladdin as a bigger problem than the Mice scenes in Cinderella, especially if you are ready to overlook all the dwarves filler in Snow White, which take much more time away than the mice in Cincerella. (And who cares about the action?). I would have put Cinderella way higher, because there isn't a single problem with the screenplay. At least the scenes of the mice making the dress have a purpose (giving Cinderella hope, which then gets destroyed again, which is way more emotional than her simply staying back while everyone goes to the ball), while the dwarfes washing themselves serves no purpose at all.

Swanpride @IsaacKuo It's not nighttime when Gothel breaks into the tower...I really don't get why you think it is.

Jessikaroo @IsaacKuo I agree with Swanpride, it wasn't nighttime, and do you know it was noon at the Snuggly Duckling. And saying that Beauty and the Beast's time frame was only 24 hours seriously diminishes the movie and how it took time for Belle to fall for Beast, it kind of crushes one of Disney's greatest romances and it's the only saving grace of the movie to me, so I highly disagree. @Animaluco, I greatly look forward to the rest of your articles. I may disagree with some of the placings, but it was well written and you made some very good points. Good job!

IsaacKuo It was in the late afternoon when Gothel arrived at the tower. Based on the lighting and shadows, the sun was low in the West at the time. It was nighttime by the time she finishes breaking through the old entrance and reaches the top. The coolness of the soft light entering from the glass windows was moonlight, not late afternoon sunlight. And it was lunchtime when Flynn and Rapunzel went to the Snuggly Duckling. Flynn said, "Are you hungry? I know a great place for lunch." Believe me, I've obsessively reviewed that portion of Tangled to try and figure out a way to make everything make sense. It's impossible. The closest I've come is assuming the sudden appearance of dark clouds while Gothel is breaking into the tower, but even that scenario requires a highly uncharacteristic lighting mistake in the shots when Gothel arrives at the tower. (Which would be very odd, because the lighting in [i]every[/i] other scene accurately reflects the time of day and movement of the Sun.) @Jessikaroo - Sorry if you don't like it, but that's what's actually shown in the movie. They could have tried to show more passage of time by mixing up morning/afternoon/night or showing a variety of weather, but they didn't. Instead, there's just one unbroken sequence of morning to afternoon to night, and a steady sequence of the previous night's snow gradually melting throughout the day.

Swanpride It was sunlight...but the curtains were closed, so it looked a little bit darker. Well, that and they deliberatly created a scene of "emptyness" by avoiding bright colors, but that's not supposed to be moonlight. Yes, they are clouds, for the mood. The scene would have less impact if everything in the tower was shown in bright sunlight. That's not odd, that's a normal arrangement. The coolness of the light is supposed to reflect a certain mood, not a certain time of day. I also doubt that it was noon when Rapunzel reached the Ugly Duckling. After all, the sun was allready going down when they left the river.

IsaacKuo @Swanpride - Umm...no. Mother Gothel ripped the curtains on the window open, and it was still dark. That's when she saw the glint of the crown in the moonlight. Also, the main door/window was open (that's how Rapunzel left, leaving no one else behind to close the main door/window). It would seem to have been afternoon when they reached the Snuggly Duckling, but still considered lunchtime. They take an unknown amount of time to walk through the caves to reach the waterwheel. It could have been hours.

AnimaIuco @Swanpride I'm pretty sure the mice scenes are more numerous and longer than the dwarfes' ones. There are only 2 with the dwarfes, while the mice try to get their lunch and there is that long sequence with Gus and Lucifer, there is the dress-making scene, the scene when Jack and Gus go after the pearls...

starlight77 I didn't really get this article. I'm not good at reading analytical stuff.

Swanpride @Animaluco Believe me, the scene in which the Dwarves entering their home alone is at least 15 minutes long! Then you add the washing scene (which isn't particular short either), and the scene in which you can watch the dwarves sleep. Add the silly song and the dwarves take over way much of the movie than the mice. Plus, the scene with the mice have a purpose. The food hunt ends in Cinderella getting additional work, the dress is needed to up the drama, and the key is a key scene (pun intended). The scenes with the dwarves are mostly filler, especially the washing! @IsaacKuo Doesn't look like moonlight to me, not at all.

carrieicecream I agree with your number 1!!! :)

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sweetie-94's Prettiest Disney Princesses

posted by sweetie-94

I've been wanting to write this makala for a while because since I last wrote it my opinions has changed and also when I wrote this makala last time Frozen hadn't been realesed into the cinemas, so now in this makala I'll include Anna and Elsa for the first time so hope you'll enjoy this makala :)

13. Ariel

I think she's cute in a pretty way, her eyes have a lovely blue color, her smile is adorable, the color of her lips is pretty and her nose is normal sized, but I don't really like the rest of her features, while her eyes wouldn't look better if they where smaller I'm not too keen...

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Most developed Disney Princess countdown results

posted by MissAngelPaws

I did a countdown about the most developed DPs, and now here are the results. Sorry for the delay! I've been very busy lately. I'd just like to thank everyone who participated in this countdown and left a comment. Anyways here are the results.

13. Aurora

Comments:
MacytheStrange - None of the Classics developed. A reason why they're my least inayopendelewa Era as a whole.
Silverrose1991 - Even if they're my inayopendelewa era, the Classic Princesses don't have any character development.

12. Snow White

Comments:
324anna: Snow White doesn't change at all during the movie, she remains the same.
prussiaducky:...

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Wheres All the jimmy, hunitumia Love?

posted by coolsinger198

For those of wewe who dont know jimmy, hunitumia has been my inayopendelewa Disney Princess FOREVER. I just really feel that jimmy, hunitumia has one of the best personalities out of all the princesses and I want to express why, because I feel she needs a little bit zaidi love. :) Despite her sassiness, she is very generous, kind, fun-loving, and flirty.

Before uandishi my reasons on why jimmy, hunitumia is the best DP, I my 3 reasons on why people may not like jimmy, hunitumia au maybe why they have her low on their list. Not all of them may be true.

Reason 1- She has a bad temper.
Reason 2- She is selfish.
Reason 3- Her sassiness is annoying...

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Team Rapunzel!

posted by princecatcher93

Icon made by made by cuteasprincie

Hello everyone, and welcome to team Rapunzel's Team Article. Now wewe maybe thinking why is princecatcher93 uandishi this? Well I was asked kwa Team Rapunzel to jiunge them because a lot of them got really busy to help them. So I joined the team. I only help make the makala but the shabiki art, banner, power came from this team.

Fan Art made kwa Emmalou13

I like Rapunzel mainly because of her character development. I admire characters who develop in the movie and Rapunzel was one of those characters. She went from being an insecure girl to a strong, mature woman. I also like her art skills and...

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Why I upendo Mulan

posted by BelleRose829

Is basically what he said...

I want to do this for all the Disney princesses but Mulan has to come first she is like my inayopendelewa princess, but still not my inayopendelewa princess. She is just so awesome. I'll try to not be redundant but pardon me if I do. Without further introduction, here are the reasons I upendo Mulan.

Mulan shows independence, maturity, bravery, everything a lot of the mother princesses seem to be lacking. She is a amazing role model for young girls, kwa her being the heroine, saving a whole country and the person she loves, yet putting her family before love, and making her man come to her rather than the...

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MacytheStrange's Disney Dream Life

posted by MacytheStrange

I've seen a lot of these floating around, and decided to give it a try! Original idea kwa the lovely dimitri_.

1. What name would wewe change yours to?
Elsa! It's such a lovely and unique sounding name, and like I just have so much want for that name.

2. Which skills would wewe like to develop?
Merida's skills of archery, climbing and horseback riding! I already know how to cook and clean, and I'm not so interested in martial arts, but Merida's skills are so cool and nature-ish.

3. Who would wewe want for a parent?
James and Eudora. Well, not really certain, but they seem really sweet and...

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Why I look up to Cinderella.......

posted by secretlife98

I look up to cinderella because she is an amazing princess who takes pride in her personality. cinderella never let's others bring her down, when her evil step sisters and step mother would say mean things to her and force her to be their maid she never stoop to their level. cinderella would always stay positive and know that someday her happy ever after would come and sooner au later it did. So I think everyone should be like cinderella and never give up hope and stoop to others level. Whenever someone mistreats wewe au makes wewe feel down just remember cinderella and have hope that someday wewe will have your Happily Ever After.

I hope that everyone learns something from this article.

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Why I upendo Merida

posted by dclairmont

Not sure if wewe all have seen my ramblings on the wall, but I've converted! I am now officially a Merida shabiki (not that I wasn't before, but just recently I've fallen in upendo with her zaidi than ever before). She's now sixth on my orodha including Anna and Elsa, and fourth not including them. This kind of came out of nowhere, but lately I'm over the moon about her and I think it's a good time to write one of these makala for her. I've already written one for Aurora, Snow White, Cinderella, Pocahontas, Jasmine, Tiana, Elsa, and Anna, and plan on making one for all of the princesses at some point....

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Why cinderella Is The Best Classic Princess

posted by coolsinger198

Keep in mind this is an opinion article. ;) This is not a "defending the classics article", it is stating why cinderella is the best Classic princess.

While I upendo all three classics, cinderella has always stood out to me. And no it is not because of her ball gown( although it is lovely). Many criticize her for being weak and passive but she is not at all that. Many people have been defending Sleeping Beauty and The Fairiest of Them All Lately. Also known as Snow and Aurora. But here is why Cindy is the best out of them all in my opinion.

Cinderella is one of those people who always treats...

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Why I upendo the Modern Princesses (Anna and Elsa not included)

posted by Annabethandco

The stars of the onyesha <3 (Art not my own - found on pinterest)

The stars of the show <3 (Art not my own - found on pinterest)

I have been wanting to write another makala for a while, so I decided to write about: "Why I upendo the modern princesses". With any luck, I should be able to do a full series for all the eras :)

Tiana -
What I have always loved about Tiana is so hard-working and determined she is! She doesn't sit and wait for her dream to happen. She works hard siku and night to achieve her goals. To me, that is a great example to set to young girls! I feel there are too many girls I know who do not try at anything at all. Tiana helps to teach that wishing and hoping only gets wewe so far in life. The reality...

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Disney's inayofuata juu Model Cycle 1: Princess Edition - The model whose walk didn't improve

posted by BKG201

Best picha of last week was Rapunzel who gave us a spine shivering evil version of herself

Best Photo of last week was Rapunzel who gave us a spine shivering evil version of herself

Firstly if wewe haven't read the first articles:
Introduction: link
Week 1: link

Previously on DNTM: jimmy, hunitumia gets on Ariel's nerves after talking about her behind her back, the models pose as evil versions of themselves and at a shocking elimination Aurora was sent home. Who will be eliminated tonight?

Confessionals after elimination
Snow White: I was shocked that Aurora was sent home, I thought the two of us would make it to the final two together

Snow White in confessional

Cinderella: Was not expecting Aurora to be eliminated
Merida: I was in the bottom two with Aurora. I definitely thought...

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Getting to Know about Princess Anna

posted by cuteasprincie

chanzo : Wiki

=Anna's name means "full of grace." Ironically, =Anna is zaidi bubbly and daring than graceful.
=Anna, being the younger sister, has two braids in her hair; while Elsa, the oldest, has one.
=Anna tends to touch her hair whenever she gets nervous.
=Anna is the 12th member in the official line-up, and is the third freckled and third computer animated princess after Rapunzel and Merida.
=She was the third to have her movie be released in Disney Digital 3D.
=Anna is the third Disney princess to have her movie rated PG after Merida from Brave and Rapunzel from Tangled.
=Anna is the...

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324anna's Favourite Scene From Each Disney Princess Movie

posted by 324anna

It looks like everybody has done a orodha with the favourites scenes so I decided to make one too. I haven't included Frozen because there are still many people that haven't seen it. Anyway, enjoy!

Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs
Ending Scene

I'm not sure about my choice because the last time I saw the movie I was 6 years old, so... Anyway, the uhuishaji is stunning when they walk away and wewe see the castle. I find that scene very romantic and sweet and I believe that Snow White totally deserves her happy ending.

Cinderella
So this is love

Soo romantic! I upendo the uhuishaji and the atmosphere...

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Merida VS Ariel: The Ultimate Debate

posted by TheFabulousFAN

Merida VS Ariel: The Ultimate debate
Well this will be my last makala before I leave fanpop
Ok so this all happened when Hatelarxene messages me on a maoni about Anna. This will be a long debate. I know some of wewe are annoyed with this but I'm going to make in anyway so this can be over with...for me at least. I need closure on this before I leave.

From:

hatelarxene
To:

TheFabulousFAN
re: Anna
10 dakika ago

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princess beatles

added by glezps

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My Favourite DP Songs

posted by dee389

They inspired me!

Hi everyone, I'm going to be uandishi my favourite DP songs and I will also include relevant songs from other of my favourite sinema as well my personal experience, here we go:

10) I Wonder/ Once Upon a Dream

This song makes me think of what will happen for the inayofuata day, as it also reminds me of another maarufu song 'Up Where We Belong'. Once Upon a Dream tells me to dream big!

9) Whistle While wewe Work

It helps me to do my daily chores around the house, and I upendo doing it at my new house because it's smaller compare to my old house! It also do my chores faster with the help of very fast music....